ASHQON ka ye chota sa SAFAR...!!

by ghayal_shayar on March 13, 2009, 07:08:59 PM
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Ek baar fir mehfil ko is nacheez ka aadaab, kuch likha hai kaafi waqt baad, umeed karta huN ki aap sabko jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga, galtiyoN ke liye maafi ka talabgar rahuNgaa...!!


Jeene ko sochte rahe, aur uthaa le gayi kazaa(maut) hume,, lakh ki thi kosisheN, par na mili jeene ki vajah hume,, jab maut ki khwaish hi ho chali, to dagaa de gayi nazaa(aakhii saans) hume,, ab to aadat si ho chali hai zakhm khaane ki, to dard lagne lage davaa hume,, kuch is kadar chalni hua hai dil, ki nashtar ki tarah chubhe ye hawaa hume,, charagar bhi dooba hua is soch me, ki aakhir kya hai hua hume…??

HaaN sach hua hai kya hume………..




AshqoN ka ye chota sa safar,
Khatm na hua zindagi bhar.

Kuch yuN hua mujh pe tera asar,
Aagaaz-o-anjaam-e-jeest, sifar*.

*zero, shoonya.

Zakhm itne ho chale badan pe,
Dard pareshaaN jaauN kidhar…

Na hoti nazmeN, na hoti ghazal,
Dard-o-mohabbat na hote agar.

Kabristaan me itni khamoshi kyuN,
BahutoN ka hai ye ek akela ghar.

Khud bhi rona aur rulana kalam ko,
Eh“Ghayal”hai ye tera kaisa hunar.

Ye aakhiri sher bas yuNhi add kar diya tha....

sirf ehsaas se bhii ban jaaati hai.n Ghazal
is Ghazal me.n dekho na radif na behar!



GHAYAL(4.3.09)
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2009, 07:33:31 PM »
Nice one
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2009, 03:32:20 AM »
good work dear
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2009, 09:55:47 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on March 13, 2009, 07:33:31 PM
Nice one

shukriya janaab...!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2009, 10:16:35 AM »
Bohot Khoob Shayar Ji...!! Welcome back !
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«Reply #5 on: March 14, 2009, 11:39:10 AM »
Bahut Khoob Ghayal Shayar.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 14, 2009, 11:48:35 AM »
Bahoot khoob shayar ji!
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«Reply #7 on: March 14, 2009, 06:53:31 PM »
Quote from: jannatjahan on March 14, 2009, 03:32:20 AM
good work dear

Thaks a to dear...!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 15, 2009, 04:20:37 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on March 14, 2009, 10:16:35 AM
Bohot Khoob Shayar Ji...!! Welcome back !

Shukriya bas aage v aap yunhi padhte raheN hume....!!
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«Reply #9 on: March 15, 2009, 06:51:00 AM »
Bahut khoob Ghayal ji  Applause Applause and Welcome Back
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«Reply #10 on: March 16, 2009, 11:52:56 PM »
Good work!!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 18, 2009, 05:02:33 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 14, 2009, 11:39:10 AM
Bahut Khoob Ghayal Shayar.. Applause Applause
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Shukriya ji...!!
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«Reply #12 on: March 22, 2009, 06:30:02 PM »
Quote from: salma786 on March 14, 2009, 11:48:35 AM
Bahoot khoob shayar ji!

salma ji padhne aur pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya....!!
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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2009, 04:26:19 PM »
wah GHAYEL, bahut khoob, wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2011, 01:27:01 PM »
lucky ji bahut achhi lagi aapki ghazal
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