Aur bhanwar main uthare gaye... mann

by mann.mann on March 05, 2012, 03:57:00 AM
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Maangne jab sahare gaye.
Dur hamse kinare gaye.

Hamne jitna bharosa kiya,
Aur bhanwar main utare gaye.

Dushmanon ki jo mahfil saji,
Un main sare hamare gaye.

Waqt ke sath hi sath to,
Sare waade tumhare gaye.

Jeena majburi thi kya kahen,
Isliye hi to maare gaye.

Jeet teri ho har khel main,
Sochkar ye hi haare gaye.

Chaand suraj paraye huye,
Chhod kar hamko taare gaye.

Kaun aayega "mann" ke liye
Unke peechhe to saare gaye.


mann
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2012, 04:01:52 AM »
Priya mann ji main besaakhtaa kah saktaa hoon ki aapkee rachnaaon men ye ghazal meel kaa patthar saabit hogee aap is kalaam men bahut hee umdaa shaayar ke roop men nazar aaye hain haalaaki umdaa to aap pahle se hee the meree aur se dher saree badhaaiyaan
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2012, 04:20:39 AM »
aadarniya sainiji...

aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad.. pasand karne aur duaye dene ke lie... ummid hai aapka sath yun hi bana rahega..
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2012, 05:07:01 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya shihabji...
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2012, 11:52:10 AM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!



WaaH waaH WaaH janab ... !
Kia kahne hia aapke ... behad gazab ke ahsasaat
aur umda gehrai liye ashaar bayaaN kiye hai aapne..

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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2012, 11:55:39 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on March 05, 2012, 03:57:00 AM
Maangne jab sahare gaye.
Dur hamse kinare gaye.

Hamne jitna bharosa kiya,
Aur bhanwar main utare gaye.

Dushmanon ki jo mahfil saji,
Un main sare hamare gaye.

Waqt ke sath hi sath to,
Sare waade tumhare gaye.

Jeena majburi thi kya kahen,
Isliye hi to maare gaye.

Jeet teri ho har khel main,
Sochkar ye hi haare gaye.

Chaand suraj paraye huye,
Chhod kar hamko taare gaye.

Kaun aayega "mann" ke liye
Unke peechhe to saare gaye.


mann

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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2012, 12:00:16 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on March 05, 2012, 03:57:00 AM
Maangne jab sahare gaye.
Dur hamse kinare gaye.

Hamne jitna bharosa kiya,
Aur bhanwar main utare gaye.

Dushmanon ki jo mahfil saji,
Un main sare hamare gaye.

Waqt ke sath hi sath to,
Sare waade tumhare gaye.

Jeena majburi thi kya kahen,
Isliye hi to maare gaye.

Jeet teri ho har khel main,
Sochkar ye hi haare gaye.

Chaand suraj paraye huye,
Chhod kar hamko taare gaye.

Kaun aayega "mann" ke liye
Unke peechhe to saare gaye.


mann



Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut khoob Mann Ji..Shandaar Peshkash...

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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2012, 12:05:42 PM »
lajawaab poetry Mann ji--
kya kehne waah--behtareen aashaaron se saji
aapki best creations me se ek manta hoon ye nagma--

yun hi likhte rahen
aate rahen
khus rahen
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2012, 03:13:10 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya parwaazji

yun hi duaye dete rahiye...
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2012, 03:18:07 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad aapka adilji.
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«Reply #10 on: March 06, 2012, 11:39:41 AM »
bahut bahut dnyawad khwaishji...
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«Reply #11 on: March 10, 2012, 03:13:57 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad sarfiraji.
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«Reply #12 on: March 28, 2012, 11:44:48 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on March 05, 2012, 03:57:00 AM
Maangne jab sahare gaye.
Dur hamse kinare gaye.

Hamne jitna bharosa kiya,
Aur bhanwar main utare gaye.

Dushmanon ki jo mahfil saji,
Un main sare hamare gaye.

Waqt ke sath hi sath to,
Sare waade tumhare gaye.

Jeena majburi thi kya kahen,
Isliye hi to maare gaye.

Jeet teri ho har khel main,
Sochkar ye hi haare gaye.

Chaand suraj paraye huye,
Chhod kar hamko taare gaye.

Kaun aayega "mann" ke liye
Unke peechhe to saare gaye.


mann



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«Reply #13 on: March 28, 2012, 11:46:05 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad qalbji
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