Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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doston yeh aise awaara aashiq kii kahaani hai jo ladkiyon ko roz kaahin na kaahin mil jaayenge ............magar oonmein se qayi aise hote hai jo sachchi mohabbat karte hain

chal rahi thi saansein meri , dil tha mera dhadak raha
magar tere khushi kii khtair mein inhe aaj khamosh kiya
haan tujhe laga hoga yeh koi awaara hai aashiq nahin
magar main kya karoon maine teri har baat ko dil pe liya

maine kayi baar kaha tujhe, mujhe mohabbat hai tujhse
kar le meri mohabbat qabool, darde dil le kar kahaan jaunga
keh diya tumne bhanwra hoon main awaaara
ek phool ka ras choos kar doosre par mandraunga

main kaha aisa nahin mujhe toh sirf tujhse mohabbat hai
tere liye meri jaan , tu kahe toh mein mar jaunga
toh hans k kaha tune aisa bahuto ne kaha hai
jab kaha mar k dikhlao, oh keh gaye kiimain kal aaunga

oos roz tere jaane k baad bahut roya main
teri tasveer ko aansuon se apne bhigoya main
phir band aankhon mein karke tasveer mere sanam
kaat li nas haath kii , is tarah khatm hua main

aaj tu aayi hai maiyaat mein meri
shayad aaj tujhe meri mohabbat par vishwaas hua
magar kya mila tujhe tabaah kar sachchi mohabbat ko meri
kii tujhe chahne wala mujhsa na is jahan main hua

aaj aayi hai toh rakh k chali ja do phool meri qabra par
log kahenge toh kii mar k tera "Saahil" abaad hua


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abdbundeli

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2009, 02:47:55 PM »

Maarmik hai yah kahaanee, -Saahil- ji!
- abd bundeli


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Talat

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2009, 03:59:59 PM »

Bohot Khoob Salil Applause

Good work dear.


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Deepati

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #3 on: June 16, 2009, 07:20:49 PM »

Bahut khoob, Sahil Ji! Applause


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chitralsony

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #4 on: June 16, 2009, 07:26:09 PM »

really nice saahil je ,
waqi mai kabi kabi hum waqi mai goher e nayaab kho daitay hain mager ehsaas tubhi hota hai jub waqat hath sai rait ki manind phisal jata hay aur hum baibus aur tamhaa hojatay hain


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shab

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2009, 08:04:07 PM »

BAHUT ACHCHE SAAHIL JI,
MANN KO BHAA GAYI AAPKA WAKIYA


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2009, 02:00:58 AM »

Wah wah Saahil Ji, BAHUT KHOOB
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Roja

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2009, 02:31:46 AM »

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oos roz tere jaane k baad bahut roya main
teri tasveer ko aansuon se apne bhigoya main
phir band aankhon mein karke tasveer mere sanam
kaat li nas haath kii , is tarah khatm hua main

aaj tu aayi hai maiyaat mein meri
shayad aaj tujhe meri mohabbat par vishwaas hua
magar kya mila tujhe tabaah kar sachchi mohabbat ko meri
kii tujhe chahne wala mujhsa na is jahan main hua

aaj aayi hai toh rakh k chali ja do phool meri qabra par
log kahenge toh kii mar k tera "Saahil" abaad hua

Salil... mai kya kahu... poora shyayari padkar aankhein num ho gayi thi... Bahut accha likha hai aapne... her alfaz dil ko bahut asar kiya.. Kuch aashiq aisa b hote hai... Well expressed lines dear God bless


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angel4u

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2009, 02:57:41 AM »

Bahut khoobsurat likha hia Salil. Iska climax itna dard bhara hai, Par dilmein ye sawal bhi aata hia ke kya mohabbat mein jaan dena matlab isi tarah jaan dena hota hai? Khuda ki naemat se to mukar nahi sakte.... khair.

But really loved the way you have expressed it, Always there is a pain in your poem which we feel in each and every word.

Take care


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madhuwesh

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2009, 04:36:22 AM »

Wow Saahil ji,mindblowing,kitna dard se bhara hua hai,beautiful
creation. Clapping Smiley


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mistufer

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2009, 04:42:44 AM »

saahil ji aadaab

bahut dard se bharee hai aapki nazm
it just touched my heart


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_Vicky_

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #11 on: June 17, 2009, 05:16:37 AM »

Salilllllllllll Bhaiiiiiiiiii...... Aapki Har Rachna Kuch sochne par Majboor Kar deti hai.. Aur Humesha Padhte Padhte Aankhon ke aage us Kahani Ki Ek Film si, Ek Tasveer si Ban jati hai..!! Applause

Kya Kahun Dost.. Dard Bhari Yeh Rachna Dil Ko Chhoo gai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob Daad Kubool karen.. !!!

Clapping Smiley

**~** Mann **~**


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salil2002

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #12 on: June 17, 2009, 06:26:30 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on June 16, 2009, 02:47:55 PM

Maarmik hai yah kahaanee, -Saahil- ji!
- abd bundeli

shukriya abd bhai


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salil2002

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #13 on: June 17, 2009, 06:27:22 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 16, 2009, 03:59:59 PM

Bohot Khoob Salil Applause

Good work dear.

thnks a lot di


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salil2002

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Re: Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #14 on: June 17, 2009, 06:28:42 AM »

Quote from: Deepati on June 16, 2009, 07:20:49 PM

Bahut khoob, Sahil Ji! Applause

Quote from: @kaash on June 17, 2009, 06:12:05 AM

Bahot bahot khoob likha hai Sahil aapne,yun hi likhte rahiye

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 17, 2009, 04:36:22 AM

Wow Saahil ji,mindblowing,kitna dard se bhara hua hai,beautiful
creation. Clapping Smiley

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 17, 2009, 02:00:58 AM

Wah wah Saahil Ji, BAHUT KHOOB
SARVESH RASTOGI

thanks a lot .deepati,madhu dear, sarvesh bhai aur kaash bhai


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