Awaara Aashiq ka Anjaam ~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on June 16, 2009, 02:38:54 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 17, 2009, 06:31:14 AM »
Quote from: chitralsony on June 16, 2009, 07:26:09 PM
really nice saahil je ,
waqi mai kabi kabi hum waqi mai goher e nayaab kho daitay hain mager ehsaas tubhi hota hai jub waqat hath sai rait ki manind phisal jata hay aur hum baibus aur tamhaa hojatay hain
thanks chitral dear...aise hi kucch kahaaniya si hai deemaag main oonhi k dard ko mehsoos kar k likh deta hoon.........aapka kehna sahi sachcha pyaar bahut mushkil se milta hai aur oose pehchaanna oosse bhi muskil hota hai
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salil2002
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«Reply #16 on: June 17, 2009, 06:33:13 AM »
Quote from: shab on June 16, 2009, 08:04:07 PM
   BAHUT ACHCHE SAAHIL JI,
MANN KO BHAA GAYI AAPKA WAKIYA
thnks shabana dear
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k.shael
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«Reply #17 on: June 17, 2009, 06:34:10 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha hai Salil Ji..!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Khuda se dua hai ki aap u hi likhte rahe aur mehfile roshan karte rahe!!!..,

kisi ke dil ke jajbaton ko zahir karna bahut badi baat hoti hai shayar ke liye aur aap usi me maharat haasil kar rahe hai janab!!!!!..

Shally.
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salil2002
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«Reply #18 on: June 17, 2009, 06:34:42 AM »
Quote from: Roja on June 17, 2009, 02:31:46 AM
Salil... mai kya kahu... poora shyayari padkar aankhein num ho gayi thi... Bahut accha likha hai aapne... her alfaz dil ko bahut asar kiya.. Kuch aashiq aisa b hote hai... Well expressed lines dear God bless 
thnks a lot roja dear ...........god bless u too icon_thumleft
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salil2002
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«Reply #19 on: June 17, 2009, 06:35:26 AM »
Quote from: Nira on June 17, 2009, 04:42:44 AM
saahil ji aadaab

bahut dard se bharee hai aapki nazm
it just touched my heart
[b[thnks nira dear
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salil2002
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«Reply #20 on: June 17, 2009, 06:37:24 AM »
Quote from: Mann on June 17, 2009, 05:16:37 AM
Salilllllllllll Bhaiiiiiiiiii...... Aapki Har Rachna Kuch sochne par Majboor Kar deti hai.. Aur Humesha Padhte Padhte Aankhon ke aage us Kahani Ki Ek Film si, Ek Tasveer si Ban jati hai..!! Applause Applause

Kya Kahun Dost.. Dard Bhari Yeh Rachna Dil Ko Chhoo gai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob Daad Kubool karen.. !!!


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**



thnks bade bhai ........mera har kalaam aapki taareefo k bina aadhoora hi rehta hai........
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«Reply #21 on: June 17, 2009, 06:38:23 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on June 17, 2009, 06:34:10 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha hai Salil Ji..!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Khuda se dua hai ki aap u hi likhte rahe aur mehfile roshan karte rahe!!!..,

kisi ke dil ke jajbaton ko zahir karna bahut badi baat hoti hai shayar ke liye aur aap usi me maharat haasil kar rahe hai janab!!!!!..

Shally.
thnks a lot shally dear.........aap sab doston ka saath raha toh hamnesha yeh banda mehfilon main aata rahega
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«Reply #22 on: June 17, 2009, 06:40:08 AM »
Quote from: {Angel} on June 17, 2009, 02:57:41 AM
Bahut khoobsurat likha hia Salil. Iska climax itna dard bhara hai, Par dilmein ye sawal bhi aata hia ke kya mohabbat mein jaan dena matlab isi tarah jaan dena hota hai? Khuda ki naemat se to mukar nahi sakte.... khair.

But really loved the way you have expressed it, Always there is a pain in your poem which we feel in each and every word.

Take care

thanks a lot huzena dear........aapne jo najariya rakha hai wahi meri agli poem ka plot hai thnks for tht...........
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«Reply #23 on: June 17, 2009, 09:19:21 AM »
                Har koi karta h yu izhaar-e-mohabbat
                Kaise samjhe kiske dil me sach me ishq smaya h...

bahut hi khub Saahil ji...... Applause Applause Applause
 ye sirf ek kahani nahi....ek sachai h...jo aksar sochne par majbur kar deti h....kya yahi mohaabat h....
                 
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«Reply #24 on: June 17, 2009, 11:09:01 AM »
Quote from: poppoetry on June 17, 2009, 09:19:21 AM
                Har koi karta h yu izhaar-e-mohabbat
                Kaise samjhe kiske dil me sach me ishq smaya h...

bahut hi khub Saahil ji...... Applause Applause Applause
 ye sirf ek kahani nahi....ek sachai h...jo aksar sochne par majbur kar deti h....kya yahi mohaabat h....
                
wow pooja dear .........gr8 lines yaar
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«Reply #25 on: June 17, 2009, 05:19:09 PM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on June 17, 2009, 06:40:08 AM
thanks a lot huzena dear........aapne jo najariya rakha hai wahi meri agli poem ka plot hai thnks for tht...........

Hmmm waiting for that.. Usual Smile
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