baaaaaaaarooood.

by khamosh_aawaaz on August 28, 2012, 08:35:36 AM
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                              dil mohabbat key naam huaa.........,
                              
                              le gayii sharaab jigar ko merey.,

                              rahi ek nazar -- sametey hue kuch puraane khawaab ismein.!!

                              fikr-o-taraddut se labrez chehre ne ...,

                              kai(?) pahle bhulaa diyaa merii jawaanii ki pehchaan ko..!!!

                              rah gaye kuch lafz ; bikhrey hue se merey aas-paas.....

                              sametey hue unhii ko aa  jaataa hoon YO INDIA per....

                                     jhelaaaaney aap ko.!!!!! Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

                              jhel lo mujhey.! hai jab tak zindgii baaqii...!


                                      


                                  


                
                              
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2012, 09:15:10 AM »
waah bahut khoob KA ji,
aapke lafzon ko jhelne ko hum yahan taiyaar baithe hai
aap bas likhte raho yaar hum yahaan bekaar baithe hain.
(KA Ji,5th line mein kai ke baad saal ya mahine aana chahiye kya-don't mind I just wrote whatever came in mind))
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2012, 09:57:10 AM »
Hum hai na aapko jhelne ke liye.. fikar not at all... masstt time pass likha hai aapne.... liked it...

mera bhi haal aap jaisa hai
aisa hai ya shayad waisa hai
kuch to baawla saa hoon hai
haal mera paagalon jaisa hai... tongue3
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2012, 09:58:50 AM »
Quote from: ahujagd on August 28, 2012, 09:15:10 AM
waah bahut khoob KA ji,
aapke lafzon ko jhelne ko hum yahan taiyaar baithe hai
aap bas likhte raho yaar hum yahaan bekaar baithe hain.
(KA Ji,5th line mein kai ke baad saal ya mahine aana chahiye kya-don't mind I just wrote whatever came in mind))
ghansham das ahuja


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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2012, 09:59:21 AM »
waah waah khaamosh ji waah lekin aap jhilaate naheen balki lubhaate hain
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2012, 10:14:42 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2012, 11:16:17 AM »
Bahut khoob KA Jee
Koi nahee   Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
aao mil ke jhilaane ka vaada kareN
sabko milkar hasaayeN aur hasaa kareN
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2012, 11:34:47 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 28, 2012, 09:57:10 AM
Hum hai na aapko jhelne ke liye.. fikar not at all... masstt time pass likha hai aapne.... liked it...

mera bhi haal aap jaisa hai
aisa hai ya shayad waisa hai
kuch to baawla saa hoon hai
haal mera paagalon jaisa hai... tongue3


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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2012, 05:58:32 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on August 28, 2012, 09:59:21 AM
waah waah khaamosh ji waah lekin aap jhilaate naheen balki lubhaate hain

thanx
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