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jannatjahan
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«Reply #17 on: April 18, 2009, 10:15:27 AM » |
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thnks jannat itna khoobsurat reply aapki taraf se.............daad qabool kijiyega
meri jaan hai tu aur meri jaan maangti hai
mere beete huye kal kii dastaan maangti hai
kuch pal ruk mere saaye se lipatkar
meri dhadkan tere dil k kalaam maangti hai
Hey thanks dear......Bahut acha likha hai aapne
ek choti si kosis meri taraf se
Tere bite hue kal me aks mera bhi hoga
yakeenan dil mera par dhadkan tera hoga..
kuch pal nahi zindagi gujarne ki talabgaar hun...
raahein hongi mohabbat bhari aur humsafar tu hoga.....
aap always unique create karte hain
main utna acha nahi likh sakti
thnks jannat itna khoobsurat reply aapki taraf se.............daad qabool kijiyega
meri jaan hai tu aur meri jaan maangti hai
mere beete huye kal kii dastaan maangti hai
kuch pal ruk mere saaye se lipatkar
meri dhadkan tere dil k kalaam maangti hai
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salil2002
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«Reply #18 on: April 18, 2009, 10:22:15 AM » |
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Hey thanks dear......Bahut acha likha hai aapne
ek choti si kosis meri taraf se
Tere bite hue kal me aks mera bhi hoga
yakeenan dil mera par dhadkan tera hoga..
kuch pal nahi zindagi gujarne ki talabgaar hun...
raahein hongi mohabbat bhari aur humsafar tu hoga.....
aap always unique create karte hain
main utna acha nahi likh sakti kya baat kar rahe ho jannat aap mujhse bhi achcha likhte hain......
ummra gujri kuch yoon tere saath
kii sadiya lamho k saaye main ji rahi ho jaise
ab bhi dil bhara nahin mera teri mohabbat se
yoon lagta hai mohabbat kii shuruaat huyi ho jaise |
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #19 on: April 19, 2009, 09:53:06 AM » |
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kya baat kar rahe ho jannat aap mujhse bhi achcha likhte hain......
ummra gujri kuch yoon tere saath
kii sadiya lamho k saaye main ji rahi ho jaise
ab bhi dil bhara nahin mera teri mohabbat se
yoon lagta hai mohabbat kii shuruaat huyi ho jaise
Daur-e-mohabbat me teri yaadon ke sath jeeti hun,
nahi nishani koi teri baaton ke sath jeeti hun..
ek ek pal lagta hai sadiyon sa mere dost,
ab har lamha teri khayalon ke sath jeeti hun |
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salil2002
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«Reply #20 on: April 19, 2009, 10:11:35 AM » |
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Wahhhhhhh kya thought hai dear...
Daur-e-mohabbat me teri yaadon ke sath jeeti hun,
nahi nishani koi teri baaton ke sath jeeti hun..
ek ek pal lagta hai sadiyon sa mere dost,
ab har lamha teri khayalon ke sath jeeti hun
thanks a lot jannat..... in reply to urs
teri dil ka haal kuch mujhse alag nahin hai
tu mera dil hai, phir bhi kyun mera dil nahin hai
jeete rahenge kab talak yoon faaslo k saaye main
kya "Saahil" kii zindgi main "kinaaro" se milan nahin hai
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #21 on: April 20, 2009, 07:36:29 AM » |
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thanks a lot jannat..... in reply to urs
teri dil ka haal kuch mujhse alag nahin hai
tu mera dil hai, phir bhi kyun mera dil nahin hai
jeete rahenge kab talak yoon faaslo k saaye main
kya "Saahil" kii zindgi main "kinaaro" se milan nahin hai
Jo baste hain dil me unhe
Jamane ki bheed me na talasho
Hain kitne kareeb dil ke
Apne dil se pucho....
Jismaani faaslon ka wajud nahi hota
mere dost.....
hain dilon me kitni nazdiiyaan
dil ki nazar se dekho. |
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salma786
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«Reply #22 on: April 20, 2009, 09:31:30 AM » |
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Bahoot ache salil n Swetha sis  |
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salil2002
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«Reply #23 on: May 01, 2009, 01:12:04 PM » |
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bahut khub dear
Jo baste hain dil me unhe
Jamane ki bheed me na talasho
Hain kitne kareeb dil ke
Apne dil se pucho....
Jismaani faaslon ka wajud nahi hota
mere dost.....
hain dilon me kitni nazdiiyaan
dil ki nazar se dekho.
bahut achche jannat nice reply
dil le lo mera bhale hi phenk kar tod do
khushi hogi kii ter haath se toota yeh
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salil2002
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«Reply #24 on: May 01, 2009, 01:12:35 PM » |
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Bahoot ache salil n Swetha sis |
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #25 on: May 03, 2009, 06:36:03 AM » |
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bahut achche jannat nice reply
dil le lo mera bhale hi phenk kar tod do
khushi hogi kii ter haath se toota yeh
Thanks salil..Bade dil se likhte ho Dear...
Hai hume kubul tumhara pyaar bhara najrana
ki baad bhulne ke unhe hum phir yaad aa gaye
jee lein kuch pal aur mohabbat ki chanv me
phir gum na hoga gar wo dobara hume bhul gaye
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salil2002
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«Reply #26 on: May 03, 2009, 12:33:20 PM » |
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Thanks salil..Bade dil se likhte ho Dear...
Hai hume kubul tumhara pyaar bhara najrana
ki baad bhulne ke unhe hum phir yaad aa gaye
jee lein kuch pal aur mohabbat ki chanv me
phir gum na hoga gar wo dobara hume bhul gaye
bahut achche jannat ........aap toh mashaallah tagde shayar hote ja rahe ho
mohabbat kar mere dil se,woh tujhse pyaar karega
jaanta hoon sheeshe ka hai,toota toh bahut awaaz karega
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«Reply #27 on: May 03, 2009, 12:47:04 PM » |
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