Baadal hain aankh ke...

by diya786 on December 18, 2008, 10:45:46 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 22, 2008, 04:33:20 PM »
Shukriya Diya Ji,.

Baadal Khushiyon Ka Khafaa Hai Mujhse,
Mere Aangaan Mein Ab Ye Barasta Nahi,.

Ghamand Hain Ise Ke Main Iski Talab Karta Hoon,.
Agar Mujhe Meri Wafa Mil Jaati,
To Main Khushiyon Ke Liye Kabhi Tarasta Nahi,.

Baar Baar Dikhaata Hai,Mujhe Ye Chehra Uska,
Jab Bhi Uski Taraf Main Dekhta Hoon,.
Main Kaise Dil Ko Samjhaoon Ab, Dil Bhi To Mera Dhadakta Nahi,.

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-








very nice jahanasheen

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«Reply #16 on: December 22, 2008, 05:14:22 PM »
Shukriya Diya Ji,.

Baadal Khushiyon Ka Khafaa Hai Mujhse,
Mere Aangaan Mein Ab Ye Barasta Nahi,.

Ghamand Hain Ise Ke Main Iski Talab Karta Hoon,.
Agar Mujhe Meri Wafa Mil Jaati,
To Main Khushiyon Ke Liye Kabhi Tarasta Nahi,.

Baar Baar Dikhaata Hai,Mujhe Ye Chehra Uska,
Jab Bhi Uski Taraf Main Dekhta Hoon,.
Main Kaise Dil Ko Samjhaoon Ab, Dil Bhi To Mera Dhadakta Nahi,.

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-

Good one Jaanasheen Bhai
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«Reply #17 on: December 23, 2008, 12:21:36 AM »
...nice one Janasheen...keep it up...
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«Reply #18 on: December 30, 2008, 10:04:31 PM »
Shukriya JHL Ji,.
Raajesh Bhai,.
Jasbir Bhai,.
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«Reply #19 on: December 30, 2008, 10:05:31 PM »
nice sharing Diya

Good work jas ji and lil bro
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«Reply #20 on: December 31, 2008, 03:45:12 AM »
Baadal hain aankh ke jo baraste hi nahin hain
Kuch beete lamhe hain jo guzarte hi nahin hain

unko maaloom hai ki hans kar main gham ko chupata hoon
Yun dikhate hain ki jaise mujhko samajhte hi nahin hain

Jab bhi dau maangu unki khushiyaan hi maangu
Woh mere dil ko dukhate jhijhakte hi nahin hain

bahot khoob  Diya ..... very nice line.
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«Reply #21 on: December 31, 2008, 03:57:48 AM »
Bahut accha likha hai aapne baadal ji... yehi dua hei ke
baadal ke aankhein nami na ho....

Jaanasheen jii aapne bhi bahut accha likha hei..
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«Reply #22 on: December 31, 2008, 04:02:08 AM »
mere dil ke armaa'n woh samjhte hi nahi hain
zakhm-e-dil mera, woh abb dekhte hi nahi hai..

kya shikayat unse, aur kya gilaa khud se
gulshan ke phool bhi mere, abb mehakte hi nahi hain...

rudhe hain iss Qadr, ki maante hi nahi
khwabo'n mein bhi woh, abb aate hi nahi hain....
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«Reply #23 on: January 01, 2009, 08:47:16 PM »
mere dil ke armaa'n woh samjhte hi nahi hain
zakhm-e-dil mera, woh abb dekhte hi nahi hai..

kya shikayat unse, aur kya gilaa khud se
gulshan ke phool bhi mere, abb mehakte hi nahi hain...

rudhe hain iss Qadr, ki maante hi nahi
khwabo'n mein bhi woh, abb aate hi nahi hain....
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wah wah wah, bahut hi khoob kaha hai ALAM


AAKHEY BHI ABB TOH NAM HO GAYI HAI
INTEZAAR MEH ABB YEH BHI SOOKH GAYI HAI

NA JANEY KAB YEH SHAAM DHAL JAYE
JINDAGI ABB TOH THAMB GAYI HAI



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«Reply #24 on: January 02, 2009, 09:57:16 AM »
Nice One Alam Qazi Ji,.
Kamaal Ka hai Bhaijaan,.

And Nice One Jasbir Bhaiya,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiyem,.
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«Reply #25 on: January 02, 2009, 10:03:13 AM »
tune ye phul jo zulfon mein laga rakha hai
ik diya hai jo andheron mein jala rakha hai

jit le jaye koi mujhko nasibon wala
zindagi ne mujhe da o pe laga rakha hai

jane kab aye koi dil mein jhankne wala
is liye main ne gireban ko khula rakha hai

imtehan aur meri zabt ka tum kya loge
main ne dharkan ko bhi sine mein chupa rakha

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«Reply #26 on: January 03, 2009, 05:32:09 PM »
Nice One Alam Qazi Ji,.
Kamaal Ka hai Bhaijaan,.

And Nice One Jasbir Bhaiya,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiyem,.

Thanks Jahansheen

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«Reply #27 on: January 03, 2009, 05:34:31 PM »
tune ye phul jo zulfon mein laga rakha hai
ik diya hai jo andheron mein jala rakha hai

jit le jaye koi mujhko nasibon wala
zindagi ne mujhe da o pe laga rakha hai

jane kab aye koi dil mein jhankne wala
is liye main ne gireban ko khula rakha hai

imtehan aur meri zabt ka tum kya loge
main ne dharkan ko bhi sine mein chupa rakha

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Very nice sharing Jahanasheen


ISI LIYE TOH HUMNEY YEH DIL KHULA RAKHA HAI
MIL JAYE TERE JAISI KOH HASINA, DARWAJA KHULA RAKHA HAI  Giggle Giggle


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«Reply #28 on: January 04, 2009, 08:23:59 PM »
...nice one Alam, Jasbir and Janasheen...achha laga padhkar...
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«Reply #29 on: January 04, 2009, 09:11:23 PM »
Shukriya JHL JI,.
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