***baaki abhi kuch hisaab hai***

by kaushikbhawna008 on November 27, 2008, 05:30:34 AM
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kuch badal raha hai waqt to badle bhi mere haalat hain
par ab tak tere diye gam mere saath hain

mein khush bhi hoon bohut par udaas bhi
tere diye zakhmo ka baaki abhi kuch hisaab hai

mein hoon aaj aur saath mere hai ye dunia
par na jaane kyu meri najar ko teri hi talaash hai

bulandiyon par mein pahunchi ye tera bhi to khwaab tha
par jaane kyu tu kahin hai dur aur yaadein hi bas saath hain

chal shukra hai tera ki tune mujhe thukra jo diya
BHAWNA jo ban paayi hai aaj usme tera hi to haath hai

jaanti hoon rota hoga tu bhi kabhi gam ki tanhaiyon mei kahin
meri tarah tere dil mei bhi mujhse milne ki aas hai
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saloni bharani
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«Reply #1 on: November 27, 2008, 05:52:08 AM »
nice , bahut acha klikha han aapna
                                     
                                          saloni
 
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: November 27, 2008, 06:16:05 AM »
thnks saloni
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honeyrose
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«Reply #3 on: November 27, 2008, 07:43:42 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on November 27, 2008, 05:30:34 AM
kuch badal raha hai waqt to badle bhi mere haalat hain
par ab tak tere diye gam mere saath hain

mein khush bhi hoon bohut par udaas bhi
tere diye zakhmo ka baaki abhi kuch hisaab hai

mein hoon aaj aur saath mere hai ye dunia
par na jaane kyu meri najar ko teri hi talaash hai

bulandiyon par mein pahunchi ye tera bhi to khwaab tha
par jaane kyu tu kahin hai dur aur yaadein hi bas saath hain

chal shukra hai tera ki tune mujhe thukra jo diya
BHAWNA jo ban paayi hai aaj usme tera hi to haath hai

jaanti hoon rota hoga tu bhi kabhi gam ki tanhaiyon mei kahin
meri tarah tere dil mei bhi mujhse milne ki aas hai


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Bohat khoob bhawana...
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: November 27, 2008, 08:13:02 AM »
bohut bohut shukriya honey ji
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pankshivam
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2008, 09:23:53 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on November 27, 2008, 05:30:34 AM
kuch badal raha hai waqt to badle bhi mere haalat hain
par ab tak tere diye gam mere saath hain

mein khush bhi hoon bohut par udaas bhi
tere diye zakhmo ka baaki abhi kuch hisaab hai

mein hoon aaj aur saath mere hai ye dunia
par na jaane kyu meri najar ko teri hi talaash hai

bulandiyon par mein pahunchi ye tera bhi to khwaab tha
par jaane kyu tu kahin hai dur aur yaadein hi bas saath hain

chal shukra hai tera ki tune mujhe thukra jo diya
BHAWNA jo ban paayi hai aaj usme tera hi to haath hai

jaanti hoon rota hoga tu bhi kabhi gam ki tanhaiyon mei kahin
meri tarah tere dil mei bhi mujhse milne ki aas hai

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Bahoot hi khub likha hai Bhavna ji
Tarif ke liye labz purane ho gaye the
Isliye kuch nahi likha
Par laga kuch nahi likhna bura hoga
Dil ko chhu lene wali baate likhi hai aapne
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2008, 10:04:01 AM »
bahut khoob,bhawnaji.
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SUDHIRJDP
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2008, 11:15:33 AM »
hi ::::: bahut aacchi lagi tumhari shyri
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #8 on: November 28, 2008, 04:58:33 AM »
Quote from: pankshivam on November 27, 2008, 09:23:53 AM
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Bahoot hi khub likha hai Bhavna ji
Tarif ke liye labz purane ho gaye the
Isliye kuch nahi likha
Par laga kuch nahi likhna bura hoga
Dil ko chhu lene wali baate likhi hai aapne



pank ji hamare likhe ko padhne aur sarahne k liye bohut bohut shukriya  notworthy
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #9 on: November 28, 2008, 05:02:43 AM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on November 27, 2008, 10:04:01 AM
bahut khoob,bhawnaji.

Quote from: SUDHIRJDP on November 27, 2008, 11:15:33 AM
hi ::::: bahut aacchi lagi tumhari shyri


shukriya prateek ji

shukriya sudhir ji 
welcome to yoindia  Usual Smile
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2008, 05:30:35 AM »
Ati Sundar! Really wonderful Bhawna Ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: December 02, 2008, 09:14:04 PM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on November 27, 2008, 05:30:34 AM
kuch badal raha hai waqt to badle bhi mere haalat hain
par ab tak tere diye gam mere saath hain

mein khush bhi hoon bohut par udaas bhi
tere diye zakhmo ka baaki abhi kuch hisaab hai

mein hoon aaj aur saath mere hai ye dunia
par na jaane kyu meri najar ko teri hi talaash hai

bulandiyon par mein pahunchi ye tera bhi to khwaab tha
par jaane kyu tu kahin hai dur aur yaadein hi bas saath hain

chal shukra hai tera ki tune mujhe thukra jo diya
BHAWNA jo ban paayi hai aaj usme tera hi to haath hai

jaanti hoon rota hoga tu bhi kabhi gam ki tanhaiyon mei kahin
meri tarah tere dil mei bhi mujhse milne ki aas hai


 Applause Applause Applause

Ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai bhawna... bahoot khoob Khush raho!!
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #12 on: December 02, 2008, 10:36:33 PM »
Jawaab mein kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai
Asha hai aap ko pasand ayegi warna maafi dena

Waqt badal jata hai halaat badal jate hain
Waqt ke saath gum khushiyan ban jate hain

In khusiyon ke beech tu itna udaas kyun hai
Waqt har zakham dheere dheere bhar deta hai

Hame talaash na kar jab duniya tere saath hai
Kush hoon aaj tu bulandiyon ko chhu rahi hai

Kaun kis ko thukraya tu to achche se jaanti hai
Tere bulandiyon ke sirihi mujhe kyon maanti hai

Ab hume yaad karne se kya faida milega tujhe
Teri bewafaai hamesa dasti rahengi yun mujhe
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #13 on: December 05, 2008, 07:17:23 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 02, 2008, 10:36:33 PM
Jawaab mein kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai
Asha hai aap ko pasand ayegi warna maafi dena

Waqt badal jata hai halaat badal jate hain
Waqt ke saath gum khushiyan ban jate hain

In khusiyon ke beech tu itna udaas kyun hai
Waqt har zakham dheere dheere bhar deta hai

Hame talaash na kar jab duniya tere saath hai
Kush hoon aaj tu bulandiyon ko chhu rahi hai

Kaun kis ko thukraya tu to achche se jaanti hai
Tere bulandiyon ke sirihi mujhe kyon maanti hai

Ab hume yaad karne se kya faida milega tujhe
Teri bewafaai hamesa dasti rahengi yun mujhe


bohut bohut shukriya rajesh ji
bohut achal likha hai aapne bhi notworthy


thnk u pooja ji notworthy
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #14 on: December 05, 2008, 09:11:50 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 05, 2008, 07:17:23 AM
bohut bohut shukriya rajesh ji
bohut achal likha hai aapne bhi notworthy


thnk u pooja ji notworthy

Thanx for the compliments Bhavna Ji
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