BAANT LETE HAIN:Shayri-E-Dard

pritam tripathi

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AAJ SE APNE GUNAAH BAANT LETE HAIN
TUM KATL KAR DENA HUM SAJA KAAT LETE HAIN

CHALO AAJ SE APNE DARD KO BAANT LETE HAIN
TUM CHOT KAR DENA ZAKHM HUM PAAL LETE HAIN

CHALO AAJ SE APNI DUNIYA HUM BAANT LETE HAIN
TUM AASHIYANE ME REHNA KAFAS ME DIN HUM GUJAAR LETE HAIN

AAJ SE APNI ZINDAGI HUM BAANT LETE HAIN
ACCHE TUM JEE LENA BURE HUM KAAT LETE HAIN

AAJ SE APNI MANJIL HUM BAANT LETE HAIN
RAASTE TUM CHUNNA SAFAR HUM KAAT LETE HAIN


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Re: BAANT LETE HAIN

«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2012, 01:09:57 AM »

Pritam jee Bohut achchi koshish hai, par mujhe samajh nahi aaya k is main Qafia konsa hai , tum qatl kar dena saza hum kaat lete hain, Bohut achcha khayal hai , itne shandar misre par bohut jandar ghazal ho sakti thi, Ye meri niji rai hai baqi aap zyada senior hain mujhse ho sakta hai mere hi samajhne main kuch kami ho.... phir bhi aapki koshish k liye mubarakbad


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Re: BAANT LETE HAIN

«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2012, 01:39:09 AM »

waah


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Re: BAANT LETE HAIN

«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2012, 02:02:30 AM »

umda

Quote from: pritam tripathi on June 24, 2012, 09:14:54 PM


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Re: BAANT LETE HAIN

«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2012, 02:27:52 AM »

Quote from: pritam tripathi on June 24, 2012, 09:14:54 PM

Aadha Aadha baantne ka bahana na banao
mujhse kafa hokar juda hone ka bahana na banao
tumhe chaha dil se, koyi gunah nahi ki
bari mehfil mein khud ko sahi batane ka bahana na banao. Usual Smile


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: BAANT LETE HAIN

«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2012, 04:15:44 AM »

Bahut khoob .


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goldy_shayar

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Re: BAANT LETE HAIN

«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2012, 05:42:58 AM »

khoob kaha Tripathi Ji, pehla sher bahut khoob,
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mkv

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Re: BAANT LETE HAIN

«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2012, 04:52:09 PM »

Sach me ghajab ka khayaal hai pritam jee

likha bhee aapne khoob hai..

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Re: BAANT LETE HAIN

«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2012, 06:35:16 PM »

bahut sundar peshkash....!!!


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Re: BAANT LETE HAIN

«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2012, 11:59:16 PM »

AAP SABHI KA BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA


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