Baarish...

by brokenbyluv on February 28, 2010, 04:24:59 PM
Pages: [1]
Print
Author  (Read 1691 times)
brokenbyluv
Guest
Think ji k thread KYA HOTI HAI BAARISH  se inspire hoke maine bhi baarish pe ek nazam likhi hai...ummeed hai apko pasand aayegi...

Kisi k deed ko taraske jab barasti hai ankhe,
tou kehlati hai judai ki baarish,

kisi ki ummeed ko thukrake jab barasti hai ankhe..
tou kehlati hai aazmaish ki baarish,

kisi k waado ko parakh k jab barasti hai ankhe,
tou kehlati hai bewafai ki baarish,

kisi ki yado mein jab barasti hai ankhe,
tou kehlati hai tanhai ki baarish,

kisi ki tadap mein jab barasti hai ankhe,
tou kehlati hai ruswai ki baarish......
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Baarish......................... by khoobsurat_subah in Mazahiya Shayri(Funny Shayari)
BAARISH(nm) by myloveosho in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
Baarish by Brijinder in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
Baarish!!!!!!!!!!!!! by redwhitegang in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
Yeh baarish...... by Rishi Soumya in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai
_Vicky_
Guest
«Reply #1 on: February 28, 2010, 04:31:11 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji.. Baarish Par Likhe aapke Yeh Dard Bhare Alfaaz Dil Ko Choo gaye.. Sucche Ehasaason Ko Lafzon Ke Zubaan di aapne.. Bahut Khooooooob... Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #2 on: February 28, 2010, 04:43:17 PM »
thnx alot mann ji..itni tarref k liye...
Logged
qazgani
Guest
«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2010, 04:45:59 PM »
boht hi khob
Logged
deepika_divya
Guest
«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2010, 04:58:14 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Geet.. bahoot sach likha hai... Well Done !
Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2010, 05:35:01 PM »
thnx alot qazgani ji n sophi ji...
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2010, 05:41:16 PM »
Bohot khoob brokenbyluv Ji
Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2010, 06:06:43 PM »
thnx alot celmira ji...
Logged
dead heart
Guest
«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2010, 07:33:00 PM »
Bahaut khoob Geet jee!!
Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2010, 07:34:24 PM »
thnx alot rahim ji...
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #10 on: February 28, 2010, 09:57:59 PM »
Bahut bahut khoob Geet ji.mindblowing creation.kamaal ke likhti hai aap.keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
riyaz106
Guest
«Reply #11 on: March 01, 2010, 06:39:01 AM »
Bahut achhi poem likhi hai BBL ji. Umdah alfaaz, purkashish jazbaat. Nice creation.



Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #12 on: March 01, 2010, 10:20:25 AM »
thnx alot madhu ji n riyaz ji...
Logged
thinkhattk
Guest
«Reply #13 on: March 01, 2010, 10:26:49 AM »
 Clapping Smiley  Applause   Applause
Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #14 on: March 01, 2010, 10:58:00 AM »
thnx think ji...
Logged
Pages: [1]
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 25, 2024, 08:19:28 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by mkv
[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]

[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]

[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]

[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]

[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]

by Arif Uddin
[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]

[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]

[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.118 seconds with 23 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8509 Real Poets and poetry admirer