baAt bE bAat rooth jAAte ho......

by laaiba on March 24, 2012, 02:23:58 PM
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laaiba
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  baAt be baAt rooTh jAatE ho...
  Ban ke kAaNch sa tooT jAatE ho
bAn ke rahZan to tuMhi aey dIlbAr
dil ke aRmaaN Loot jAatE ho.....

ITS MY OWN laaba ali..... angel11
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dolly
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«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2012, 02:44:05 PM »
wah wah....awesome laaibaji...Usual Smile
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2012, 02:51:19 PM »
Good,laiba.keep it up.God bless you.
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«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2012, 03:36:29 PM »
nice
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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2012, 03:55:03 PM »
Laiba Sahiba Aadaab...!

waah waah waah mohtarma kia kahne... bus waah hi nikal
raha hai laboN se ... Usual Smile

behad khoobsurat ashaar kahe haiN... bahut khoob aur
behad umda... Usual Smile
humari dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Par aik guzarish hai dear aapse ke aise aik do ashaar
kahkar itne khoobsurat khayaaloN se itni khoobsurat
kavish se hume puri kalaam se mehrum na kijiye... Usual Smile
puri kalaam hi pesh kiya kijiye... Usual Smile lutf aata hai padhne meiN...

Likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile 

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mkv
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«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2012, 04:42:40 PM »
Excellent lines Laaiba
good going Applause Applause
keep it up..

acche khayaal pesh karti hai aap.. Applause
awsome signature ..adopt this style and people will appreciate u like anything.
u need not write "it's my own every time" when u post in shayri section.. for sharing if any, we r supposed to post in poetry lounge. that tells automatically.
god bless u my dear.
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laaiba
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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2012, 06:49:55 PM »
Quote from: dolly on March 24, 2012, 02:44:05 PM
wah wah....awesome laaibaji...Usual Smile
SHUKRIA DOLLY AAPKA....
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laaiba
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«Reply #7 on: March 24, 2012, 06:50:42 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 24, 2012, 02:51:19 PM
Good,laiba.keep it up.God bless you.
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thanku so much ...keep smiling
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laaiba
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«Reply #8 on: March 24, 2012, 06:51:06 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on March 24, 2012, 03:36:29 PM
nice
thnku....
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laaiba
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«Reply #9 on: March 24, 2012, 06:52:54 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 24, 2012, 03:55:03 PM
Laiba Sahiba Aadaab...!

waah waah waah mohtarma kia kahne... bus waah hi nikal
raha hai laboN se ... Usual Smile

behad khoobsurat ashaar kahe haiN... bahut khoob aur
behad umda... Usual Smile
humari dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Par aik guzarish hai dear aapse ke aise aik do ashaar
kahkar itne khoobsurat khayaaloN se itni khoobsurat
kavish se hume puri kalaam se mehrum na kijiye... Usual Smile
puri kalaam hi pesh kiya kijiye... Usual Smile lutf aata hai padhne meiN...

Likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile 


AADAB PARWAZ SAHAB...
mere ko shayeree nahin aatee bas aise hi likh leitt hun INSHALLAHkoshish ho gi time mila to sure ... PAZEERAI OR HOSLA AFZAAI KA SHUKRIA.......
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laaiba
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«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2012, 06:54:07 PM »
Quote from: mkv on March 24, 2012, 04:42:40 PM
Excellent lines Laaiba
good going Applause Applause
keep it up..

acche khayaal pesh karti hai aap.. Applause
awsome signature ..adopt this style and people will appreciate u like anything.
u need not write "it's my own every time" when u post in shayri section.. for sharing if any, we r supposed to post in poetry lounge. that tells automatically.
god bless u my dear.

BOHAT SHUKRIA AAPKA ... hosla afzaai ke liye or guide krne ke liye
keep smiling  GOD BLESS U.....
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2013, 04:37:06 AM »
So Nice.
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laaiba
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«Reply #12 on: April 24, 2013, 05:05:46 PM »
shukria aapkaa ,..........
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