Baat dil ki...

by Just_Hate_Love on January 04, 2005, 07:57:15 AM
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Just_Hate_Love
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Baat dil ki nigaho se kehte rahe,
Hum tere gum khamoshi se sehte rahe,
Aansuon ka samundar tha takdir mein,
Doobte, tairte aur bahte rahe,
Apne fil mein to tumne basaya nahi,
Tere kadmo ke deewane rehte rahe,
Hum the, tanhai thi, aur tha aaina,
Khud se hum dastaan apni kehte rahe,
Kya hua tha hume, jaane kya baat thi ?
Ask aankhon se kyu behte rahe ?
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2005, 08:26:12 AM »
beautiful work JHL!

hum yun akele mein khud ko saja dete hain...
raat bhar ashkon mein khud ko dubo dete hain...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2005, 08:34:11 AM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
beautiful work JHL!

hum yun akele mein khud ko saja dete hain...
raat bhar ashkon mein khud ko dubo dete hain...



Thank you very much Heart.
Aur bahut achchha likha hai.
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2005, 09:15:20 AM »
Log samajthe he keh humne tumhe bhola rakka he,-----------------
Ye nahin jante ke kehi dil mein chopa rakka hai-----
Dekh na le koi meri ankho mein tasvir teri,----------Main ne apni palko ko is qadar jhoka rakka hai....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(nm)
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stalin
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2005, 09:22:10 AM »
"tune ye phool jo jude me saja rakha hai
ek diya hai jo amavas me jala rakha hai
tu mera pyar meri jaan meri jindgani hai
varna duniya ke is hungame mein rakha kya hai"
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2005, 10:10:55 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
beautiful work JHL!

hum yun akele mein khud ko saja dete hain...
raat bhar ashkon mein khud ko dubo dete hain...



Thank you very much Heart.
Aur bahut achchha likha hai.


Thank you for your appreciation JHL,

I am not good at writing in hindi... so i really need ur words!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2005, 05:53:32 AM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
beautiful work JHL!

hum yun akele mein khud ko saja dete hain...
raat bhar ashkon mein khud ko dubo dete hain...



Thank you very much Heart.
Aur bahut achchha likha hai.


Thank you for your appreciation JHL,

I am not good at writing in hindi... so i really need ur words!



Its ok Heart. But i can say tht i m new here n i doesnt write much better thn you all. You, Waheedbhai, Meenaji, Nishuji,........ They r really shayers here thnx to yoindia tht it met me to peoples like u all.
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2005, 12:04:18 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Baat dil ki nigaho se kehte rahe,
Hum tere gum khamoshi se sehte rahe,
Aansuon ka samundar tha takdir mein,
Doobte, tairte aur bahte rahe,
Apne fil mein to tumne basaya nahi,
Tere kadmo ke deewane rehte rahe,
Hum the, tanhai thi, aur tha aaina,
Khud se hum dastaan apni kehte rahe,
Kya hua tha hume, jaane kya baat thi ?
Ask aankhon se kyu behte rahe ?


wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: January 05, 2005, 12:05:54 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
beautiful work JHL!

hum yun akele mein khud ko saja dete hain...
raat bhar ashkon mein khud ko dubo dete hain...



Thank you very much Heart.
Aur bahut achchha likha hai.


Thank you for your appreciation JHL,

I am not good at writing in hindi... so i really need ur words!



Its ok Heart. But i can say tht i m new here n i doesnt write much better thn you all. You, Waheedbhai, Meenaji, Nishuji,........ They r really shayers here thnx to yoindia tht it met me to peoples like you all.


arre JHL ji im really gud na, bas try karti hoon. but aap tobohot acha likhte hai :D  even im very weak with urdu words  :?
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2005, 11:15:38 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
beautiful work JHL!

hum yun akele mein khud ko saja dete hain...
raat bhar ashkon mein khud ko dubo dete hain...



Thank you very much Heart.
Aur bahut achchha likha hai.


Thank you for your appreciation JHL,

I am not good at writing in hindi... so i really need ur words!



Its ok Heart. But i can say tht i m new here n i doesnt write much better thn you all. You, Waheedbhai, Meenaji, Nishuji,........ They r really shayers here thnx to yoindia tht it met me to peoples like you all.


arre JHL ji im really gud na, bas try karti hoon. but aap tobohot acha likhte hai :D  even im very weak with urdu words  :?


Hum Muslim hai isliye thode bahut urdu words jaante hai
varna hum bhi kabhi kabhi likh lete hai aap ki tarah.
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2005, 11:17:25 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
beautiful work JHL!

hum yun akele mein khud ko saja dete hain...
raat bhar ashkon mein khud ko dubo dete hain...



Thank you very much Heart.
Aur bahut achchha likha hai.


Thank you for your appreciation JHL,

I am not good at writing in hindi... so i really need ur words!


Ye to hum Muslim caste ke hai to thode bahut urdu words jaante hai
varna hum bhi kabhi kabhi likh lete hai aap ki tarah.



Its ok Heart. But i can say tht i m new here n i doesnt write much better thn you all. You, Waheedbhai, Meenaji, Nishuji,........ They r really shayers here thnx to yoindia tht it met me to peoples like you all.


arre JHL ji im really gud na, bas try karti hoon. but aap tobohot acha likhte hai :D  even im very weak with urdu words  :?
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2005, 03:26:06 PM »
acha ji  :D
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shyama
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2005, 04:19:01 PM »
very good all.

 jo na hota yeh dard is mohabbat ke fasaane mein,
 na likhta koi bhi shayari bhare zamaane mein!!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2005, 04:20:34 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhh shyma bohot ache!

 :D
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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2005, 06:11:08 PM »
very nice jhl and amit.
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