baat ek hi hai

by nirala on August 03, 2012, 02:36:27 PM
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BAHOT DIN BAAD DRD PAR LIKH RAHA Usual Smile

kinaare chhoote ya sahaare
baat ek hi hai
maajhi doobe ya toote sitaare
baat ek  hi hai

gair ki nazron me gire ya gire khud ki nazron me
baat ek hi hai
bgairat aawaara nakkaara ya samjho ab ik bojh
baat ek hi hai

nir ki baat hai bemaani sab jaane hain
nir to neer hai ab ho gnde naale ka ya ho gnga ka paani
baat ek hi hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2012, 03:03:03 PM »
wwaaaahhh wwaaaahhh
nirala sir
kya khoobsorati se vayang kiya hai
aaj kal jo ganga gandi ho rahi hai uspe

or baki ki pankhtiyan bhi behad khoob likhi hai jnab  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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mkv
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2012, 04:06:42 PM »
Bahut khoob..i liked the first two.

likhte rahiye. Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2012, 09:01:19 PM »
BAHOT DIN BAAD DRD PAR LIKH RAHA Usual Smile

kinaare chhoote ya sahaare
baat ek hi hai
maajhi doobe ya toote sitaare
baat ek  hi hai

gair ki nazron me gire ya gire khud ki nazron me
baat ek hi hai
bgairat aawaara nakkaara ya samjho ab ik bojh
baat ek hi hai

nir ki baat hai bemaani sab jaane hain
nir to neer hai ab ho gnde naale ka ya ho gnga ka paani
baat ek hi hai
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APNE AAP KO NIRALA BHAII BAKHOOBII BAYAAN KIYA HAI. AB ZARA YE BATAA DO AAP GANDE PAANI SE HO YAA ACHE PAANI SE USII HISAAB SE GHAR MEIN  R.O PLANT KA INTEZAAM KARNA HOGA
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2012, 02:20:20 AM »
bohut khoob , bohut umda,
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2012, 03:39:52 AM »
 Applause Applause bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2012, 04:54:26 AM »

APNE AAP KO NIRALA BHAII BAKHOOBII BAYAAN KIYA HAI. AB ZARA YE BATAA DO AAP GANDE PAANI SE HO YAA ACHE PAANI SE USII HISAAB SE GHAR MEIN  R.O PLANT KA INTEZAAM KARNA HOGA
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
kuch bhi smjh lo bhai--
baat ek hi hai tongue3

kaun kehta hai ache paani me keede nahi hote
aur bhai kaun kehta hai
Jo dikhe seedha saada wo tedhe nahi hote
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nice cmnt by u
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2012, 10:43:27 AM »
achha likha hai niralaji
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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2013, 02:37:16 PM »
sahi kaha aapne

mazahiya andaaz me drd!
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