Baat hai dil ki: bataaou to bhalaa, kis sey kaheyn?

by abdbundeli on October 10, 2008, 01:24:28 PM
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Baat hai dil ki: bataaou to bhalaa, kis sey kaheyn?
Aag hi aag hai: khaamosh bhalaa kaisey raheyn?
Woh, nidaa sun ney ko, taiyaar hi naheen hain jab;
Zindagee bojh ban rahee hai: bhalaa kaisey saheyn?
                                 - abd bundeli
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: October 10, 2008, 01:41:13 PM »
Applause Applause bohat khoob abd ji...
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #2 on: October 10, 2008, 02:18:01 PM »
honeyrose ji,
 Thanks a lot!
          abd bundeli
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2008, 07:45:35 AM »
ZINDAGI TERI BHOJ TERA PHIR UNSE SHIKAYAT KAISI
HAR EK SHAKS KI HALET HAIN ABD YAHA, KUCH KUCH TERE JAISI

                                      -SG-
 
Quote from: abdbundeli on October 10, 2008, 01:24:28 PM
Baat hai dil ki: bataaou to bhalaa, kis sey kaheyn?
Aag hi aag hai: khaamosh bhalaa kaisey raheyn?
Woh, nidaa sun ney ko, taiyaar hi naheen hain jab;
Zindagee bojh ban rahee hai: bhalaa kaisey saheyn?
                                 - abd bundeli
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2008, 08:34:02 AM »
sajid_ghayel ji!
Qasb hain aisey: na deykhey, na dikhaaye jaayen!
Dard kee nazm, bhalaa, aur kahaan tak gaayen?
Woh chaarahgar hai, maraaham bhi hain usee key, 'abd',
Woh, bulaaney pai na aaye, to, kisey batlaayen?
                                 - abd bundeli
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ibaadat
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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2008, 04:29:28 PM »
very very nice Applause
..
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2009, 12:19:24 PM »
Quote from: ibaadat on October 11, 2008, 04:29:28 PM
very very nice Applause
..
Thanks ibaadat ji!
            - abd bundeli
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shab
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2009, 12:25:09 PM »
      BAHUT KHOOB ABD JI
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2009, 07:03:35 AM »
Quote from: shab on June 12, 2009, 12:25:09 PM
      BAHUT KHOOB ABD JI
shab ji,
 Thanks a lot!
          abd bundeli
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salil2002
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2009, 07:05:04 AM »
bahuta chche abd bhai ek aur aapke lahze mein doobi huyi nazm
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aaina
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2009, 07:10:59 AM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on October 10, 2008, 01:24:28 PM
Baat hai dil ki: bataaou to bhalaa, kis sey kaheyn?
Aag hi aag hai: khaamosh bhalaa kaisey raheyn?
Woh, nidaa sun ney ko, taiyaar hi naheen hain jab;
Zindagee bojh ban rahee hai: bhalaa kaisey saheyn?
                                 - abd bundeli



kya baat hai abd sahab janaab kya kahun kuch kehne ko aap rakhte hi nahi hain, bhut hi khoobsurat qita sir ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2009, 07:29:59 AM »
Excellent,very nice and beautiful creation,Abd ji and Ghayel ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2009, 08:10:15 AM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on June 13, 2009, 07:05:04 AM
bahuta chche abd bhai ek aur aapke lahze mein doobi huyi nazm
Quote from: aaina on June 13, 2009, 07:10:59 AM
kya baat hai abd sahab janaab kya kahun kuch kehne ko aap rakhte hi nahi hain, bhut hi khoobsurat qita sir ji
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 13, 2009, 07:29:59 AM
Excellent,very nice and beautiful creation,Abd ji and Ghayel ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Saahil/aaina/Madhu ji!

                       - abd bundeli
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shab
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«Reply #13 on: June 14, 2009, 08:30:21 AM »
 WAAH ! SHIHAB JI
MAI HU NA
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2009, 11:33:49 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on June 14, 2009, 08:25:07 AM
Good Job Abd Babu...

Kis Se Kare Dil Ki Baat Kahaan Hai Mujhe Sun Ne Waale
Chhod Gaye Wohi Log Jo The Qadam Se Qadam Milane Wale.

Kyun Kar Kare Aakhir Shihab Kisi Se Koi Shikwa Yaa Gila
Suna Hai Aise Hi To Tapadte Hai Wafaaein Nibhane Waale.

Shihab ji!
Wafaa kareyn, na kareyn bey-wafaaiyoun kaa gilaa;
Dostee, dostee rahey, na dusmanee ho jaaye?

Baat kartey hain aashiq-e-habeeb taaroun sey!
Nisf shab ho, ki, ho shab: khoob baat hotee hai!!
Din guzar jataa hai, jagtey huye khwaaboun key taley;
Shaam aatee hai roz, roz raat hotee hai!!

                      - abd bundeli
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