Baat puraani hai................................

by akela on July 02, 2007, 08:38:43 PM
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khawab tha woh ya phir haqiqat koi,
par maine jannat sa woh jamaana dekha hai.
                               
                                aakho mai aasha thi dil mai junnon tha
                                maine kabhi khud ko itna dewaana dekha hai

iss ghar ki haalat par taras na khao,
maine kabhi mahalo mai baithkar afsaana dekha hai
                                   
                                aaj rota hu jin logo ko khud par haste dekh,
                                 maine kabhi unn logo ka muskarana dekha hai
 
banjad hai aaj jo baag mere aangan mai raahi
maine bahar ka mausam ussme purana dekha hai

                                woh kahte hai sab ki badal gaye ho tum ''akela''
                            kaun jaane,barso se kab kaha maine aaina dekha hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2007, 11:10:18 AM »
Very nice..
Beautifully drafted !
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2007, 10:42:48 AM »
Bahoot Khoob Akela Ji,..
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2007, 08:01:21 PM »
thx ricky and jaanasheen
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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2007, 08:32:03 AM »
mindblowing!!! bohot achi lagi apki poem mujhe!! keep writing!!! Usual Smile
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