Baba Ki Gudiya.........

by palkhi on July 12, 2008, 08:11:29 PM
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  Kabhi Baba Ki Gudiya Baana Chaaha,
  Magar Baba Ki Gudiya Tho Appi Hai,

  Ma Ki Lado Baana Chaaha,
  Magar Ma Ka Ladla Tho Choota Hai,

  Dadi Dada, Nana Nani Ki Chahithi Baana Chaaha,
  Magar Unki Chahithi Tho Chutki Hai,

  Bhaiyon Se Thora Sa Pyar Manga Tha,
  Magar Unko Tho Sirf Appi Or Chutki Pyari Hai,

  Ek Din Jab Bhai Nai "Meri Pari" Kehla Kai Mujko Pookara Tho Ankein Bhaar Ayi Khushi Kai Marai,
  Magar Abb Lagtha Hai Kai Sirf Naam Ki Pari Thi Main Unki,
 
  Abb Kuch Nahin Chaahthi Main, Na Kuch Maangthi Hoon,
  Sivai Koy Aisa Jho Sabse Zayada Mohabbat Mujhi Se Kare.....
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syednaami
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2008, 08:40:59 PM »
Yeh dard yeh jazbaat yeh ahsaas yeh shikaayat yeh khalish yeh mayusi yeh haar maan-na...

Abhi aur bhi hai duniya ke rang,,
Tu apna khud ek maqaam to paida kar,,
Phir dekh yahi log aur unka dhang,,
Badal jaayega dekh teri shaan-e-dabang..
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palkhi
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2008, 01:26:57 AM »
Nice Reply Ji,

   Kaya Nahin Kiya Maine Sabka Pyar Paane Kai Liyai,
  Magar Na Jaane Kayun Pir Bhi Woh Mujko Chaahtha Nahin,

  Appni Zindagi Goozar Dhi Maine Sabka Pyar Paane Ki Koshish Main Or Sabko Pyar Karne Mein,
  Pir Bhi Na Jaane Kayun Koy Bhi Mujko Chaahtha Hi Nahin......
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2008, 03:04:40 AM »
ek sitaara pyar sa,
chamkna chahta tha wo,
magar suraj ki roshni me,
kho hi jaata tha tha wo,

na koi use dekh paata,
na koi pyaar kar paata,

fir raat hui suraj dhala,
taare chamachamaye,
wo taara muskaraya,
timtima utha,

shukriya khuda ka usne,
sabhi ko mouke diye hazar,
chahe wo suaraj ho ya chota sa tara,
sahi waqt ka sabhi ko karna hota hai intzaar

khush raho nanhi pari
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«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2008, 03:27:07 AM »
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  Ek Din Jab Bhai Nai "Meri Pari" Kehla Kai Mujko Pookara Tho Ankein Bhaar Ayi Khushi Kai Marai,
  Magar Abb Lagtha Hai Kai Sirf Naam Ki Pari Thi Main Unki,

Wah Palkhi full of emotions... Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 13, 2008, 04:03:59 AM »
palkhi ji,

aapki panktiyaan nikharti jaa rahi he,aage badhte rahiye..shubhkaamnaaye.

naami ji,

aapne sada bujhe hue deepak jalaaye hein,aapka prayas sada saraahniye he.

bekarar ji,

bahut khhob likhe he aap janaab-yeh to sub jaante he.
pur sraj ko dhalaane mein ,chaand ko bulaane mein--aap sada ahik ruchi kyon rakhtey he,hume pata hein....
din dhala,shaam hui,haathon mein jaam aaya....

Prateek
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«Reply #6 on: July 13, 2008, 04:14:41 AM »
touba karo prateek bhai....is thread ko bhi "kaifiyat-e-may" me moov karvaoge kya.....
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«Reply #7 on: July 13, 2008, 04:34:25 AM »
Meri Pari aor yah mayusi.. thik baat nahi lado rani..
kavita bahoot pyari likhi hai..

nice lines sami....

Bahoot khoob sanjeev
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2008, 07:27:45 AM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 13, 2008, 04:03:59 AM
...........................
naami ji,

aapne sada bujhe hue deepak jalaaye hein,aapka prayas sada saraahniye he.
................
Prateek


Prateek Mirt,,,
Deepak jalaate hain par vaayu itni sheeghram ke lao bujh bujh jaati hai...
Parantu hamari akanksha aur aasha ka to ant hona hi nahin na... so chahe kisi ko bhala kage ya bura,,, hum kahenge hum kahte rahenge...
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2008, 06:22:06 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on July 13, 2008, 03:04:40 AM
ek sitaara pyar sa,
chamkna chahta tha wo,
magar suraj ki roshni me,
kho hi jaata tha tha wo,

na koi use dekh paata,
na koi pyaar kar paata,

fir raat hui suraj dhala,
taare chamachamaye,
wo taara muskaraya,
timtima utha,

shukriya khuda ka usne,
sabhi ko mouke diye hazar,
chahe wo suaraj ho ya chota sa tara,
sahi waqt ka sabhi ko karna hota hai intzaar

khush raho nanhi pari



    Awwwwwwwww.....shoooooo cute Bhai.....

       Thank You!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2008, 06:31:56 PM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on July 13, 2008, 03:27:07 AM
Wah Palkhi full of emotions... Applause

     Thanks Di!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 13, 2008, 06:33:11 PM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 13, 2008, 04:03:59 AM
palkhi ji,

aapki panktiyaan nikharti jaa rahi he,aage badhte rahiye..shubhkaamnaaye.

naami ji,

aapne sada bujhe hue deepak jalaaye hein,aapka prayas sada saraahniye he.

bekarar ji,

bahut khhob likhe he aap janaab-yeh to sub jaante he.
pur sraj ko dhalaane mein ,chaand ko bulaane mein--aap sada ahik ruchi kyon rakhtey he,hume pata hein....
din dhala,shaam hui,haathon mein jaam aaya....

Prateek







   Umm....srry lakin mujko appki baath ki samjh nahin ayi.......
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«Reply #12 on: July 13, 2008, 06:33:50 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on July 13, 2008, 04:34:25 AM
Meri Pari aor yah mayusi.. thik baat nahi lado rani..
kavita bahoot pyari likhi hai..

nice lines sami....

Bahoot khoob sanjeev

    Hehehehe.......Thanks Di!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 13, 2008, 07:14:10 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on July 13, 2008, 03:04:40 AM
ek sitaara pyar sa,
chamkna chahta tha wo,
magar suraj ki roshni me,
kho hi jaata tha tha wo,

na koi use dekh paata,
na koi pyaar kar paata,

fir raat hui suraj dhala,
taare chamachamaye,
wo taara muskaraya,
timtima utha,

shukriya khuda ka usne,
sabhi ko mouke diye hazar,
chahe wo suaraj ho ya chota sa tara,
sahi waqt ka sabhi ko karna hota hai intzaar

khush raho nanhi pari


Bhai jaan aapne buhat badhiya salaah de kar kya pyare tareeqe se samjhaaya hai... aap ke emotional tatv umad kar dikh rahe... wah...
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