bachpan ki baty

by Pooja on August 30, 2004, 03:11:14 PM
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bachpan kay dukh bhi kitnay acchay hotay thay

tab to sirf khilonay tota kartay thay


wo khushyan bhi najanay kaisi kushyan thi

titli kay par noch kay uchla kartay thay


paoo mar kay khud barish kay pani may

apni naoo app doboya kartay thay


ab sochay tou chaot si parti hai dil pay

app bana kay app gharonday tora kartay thay


apnay jal janay ka afsos bhi na tha

jaltay sholoo ko chara kartay thay


khoshboo kay urtay hi kiun murjhaya phool

kitnay bhoolay pan say pocha kartay thay


ajj bhi wo tabiray lahoo rulati hai

bachpan may jo hum nay sapnay dakhay thay


ab tou aik ansoo bhi roswa kar jata hai

bachpan may ji bhar kay ro laitay thay (note mine, from FW. e-mail)
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2004, 03:26:02 PM »
pahla ho ya dooja
bahut ache pooja

par kuch zyada lamba ho gayaa
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2004, 03:32:28 PM »
Thanks samnoj>>> bachpan ki baty hai na kaya kiya jai Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2004, 03:33:30 PM »
its ok pooja ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2004, 03:39:49 PM »
yaad aati hai yaadein teri,
        bachpan ki vo baatein teri,
vo ruthna,vo manana,
        vo pyari si muskurahat teri.
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2004, 03:43:14 PM »
muskurana tera aaj bhi yaad hai mujhe
ruth jaana tera aaj bhi yaad hai mujhe
par ab wo aalam nahi raha is zamane main
bachpan ki wo sab yaade, yaad hai mujhe
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2004, 03:58:26 PM »
bachapna aor bachpan ki baty
ek hai thundi saans ab aor bas kuch yaanden
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2004, 04:01:46 PM »
yaande to ab bhi aati hai bachpan ki meri
ek saans bhar ke dekhta hu jab tasweer teri
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2004, 04:03:21 PM »
bachpan ki tasweeer jitani purani hoti gai
hamari hansrty utani hi jawan hoti gai
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2004, 04:05:13 PM »
jawani me aakar bachpan ko yaad kiya humne
teri tasweer dekhi to hume jakad liya gum ne
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2004, 04:10:28 PM »


good work.........pooja...samnoj....boy1.............. .


Nazar Men Mousum E Dar O Deevaar Ootar Aaya
Chalo Ab Apnee Hi Parchayan Tatolenge.
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2004, 04:12:53 PM »
bahut khoob waheed ji

itni thokrey mili hai dil-e-nadaan ko zamane se
dar sa lagta hai apni hi in parchaiyon se
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«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2004, 05:59:43 PM »
na dekh kar apni parchaiyan tu dar
zamana bahoot kharab hai, kuch to tu sambhal
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«Reply #13 on: July 02, 2005, 07:15:02 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
bachpan kay dukh bhi kitnay acchay hotay thay

tab to sirf khilonay tota kartay thay


wo khushyan bhi najanay kaisi kushyan thi

titli kay par noch kay uchla kartay thay


paoo mar kay khud barish kay pani may

apni naoo app doboya kartay thay


ab sochay tou chaot si parti hai dil pay

app bana kay app gharonday tora kartay thay


apnay jal janay ka afsos bhi na tha

jaltay sholoo ko chara kartay thay


khoshboo kay urtay hi kiun murjhaya phool

kitnay bhoolay pan say pocha kartay thay


ajj bhi wo tabiray lahoo rulati hai

bachpan may jo hum nay sapnay dakhay thay


ab tou aik ansoo bhi roswa kar jata hai

bachpan may ji bhar kay ro laitay thay (note mine, from FW. e-mail)



Nice pooja
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2005, 09:26:35 PM »
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