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Bachpan se yovan tak mujhe chalna tha
Hanste hanste waqt guzar the chalna tha
Zindagi ka safar akele samajna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi ke kashmakash se ladna tha
Sar pe chaat nahi aur sahara aapna koi na tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka samna karna tha
Mamta ke aanchal mein mujhe sonaa tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein bachpan ko bhool na tha
Aankhon mein naye khwab mujhe dekhna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka aanth karna tha
Pathar chube paaon mein aur dukh ka saaya tha…
Bhook pyaas se ladte jawani par kadam rakha tha
Aankhon se ashq nikalte rahe par sahara kisi ka na tha
Dukhon ko bhool kar zindagi mein khushiyan sajana tha
^^**honeyrose**^^
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2008, 01:50:53 PM » |
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Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne honey dear. Her ek alfaz mein dard
dil ka bayan kiya hai. God Bless you dear. be chearful
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2008, 05:19:11 PM » |
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Thanks Roja dear...
Shukriya Sanjeev ji...
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2008, 11:44:54 AM » |
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Bachpan se yovan tak mujhe chalna tha
Hanste hanste waqt guzar the chalna tha
Zindagi ka safar akele samajna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi ke kashmakash se ladna tha
Sar pe chaat nahi aur sahara aapna koi na tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka samna karna tha
Mamta ke aanchal mein mujhe sonaa tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein bachpan ko bhool na tha
Aankhon mein naye khwab mujhe dekhna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka aanth karna tha
Pathar chube paaon mein aur dukh ka saaya tha…
Bhook pyaas se ladte jawani par kadam rakha tha
Aankhon se ashq nikalte rahe par sahara kisi ka na tha
Dukhon ko bhool kar zindagi mein khushiyan sajana tha
^^**honeyrose**^^
Ek ek sher ghum ki gehri daastan byaan kar raha hai. Honey sis, bohot achcha likha aapne. Please keep smiling. |
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«Reply #5 on: October 02, 2008, 05:32:12 PM » |
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Thanks Celmira sis for reading...
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«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2008, 08:19:52 PM » |
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Bachpan se yovan tak mujhe chalna tha
Hanste hanste waqt guzar the chalna tha
Zindagi ka safar akele samajna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi ke kashmakash se ladna tha
Sar pe chaat nahi aur sahara aapna koi na tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka samna karna tha
Mamta ke aanchal mein mujhe sonaa tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein bachpan ko bhool na tha
Aankhon mein naye khwab mujhe dekhna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka aanth karna tha
Pathar chube paaon mein aur dukh ka saaya tha…
Bhook pyaas se ladte jawani par kadam rakha tha
Aankhon se ashq nikalte rahe par sahara kisi ka na tha
Dukhon ko bhool kar zindagi mein khushiyan sajana tha
^^**honeyrose**^^
Gehri Baatein keh di aapne honey!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2008, 07:17:02 AM » |
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bahut khoob & verry touching
honey rose ji
Baadal
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«Reply #8 on: October 03, 2008, 08:31:32 AM » |
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BAHUT KHOOB HONEY DI, VERY VERY TOUCHING... BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2008, 09:53:47 AM » |
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bahut accha likha hai jaya di aapne der se aane ke liye maafi chahti hoon aapse aapka likha hua har lafz accha laga keep it up !!!  |
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«Reply #10 on: October 03, 2008, 09:57:39 AM » |
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bohat achha likha honey ji.... |
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«Reply #11 on: October 03, 2008, 04:54:30 PM » |
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Shukriya khwaish ji
Shukriya baadal ji
Thanks shally..
Thanks diya ...
Shukriya Saurabh ji...
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«Reply #12 on: October 03, 2008, 07:02:27 PM » |
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Bachpan se yovan tak app chal saki
Kisi tarah waqt ko guzar saki
Zindagi ka safar akele samajh saki
Har lamha zindagi ke kashmakash se ladh saki
Sar pe chaat nahi aur sahara aapna koi na tha
Phir bhi har kadam pe zindagi ke dukhon ka samna kar saki
Mamta ke aanchal mein app sho na saki
Aur har pal zindagi ke bachpan ko bhool na saki
Aankhon mein naye khwab aap dekh saki
Aur hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka aanth kar saki
Pathar chube paaon mein aur dukh ka saaya aap hata saki
Bhook pyaas se ladte jawani par kadam rakh saki
Aankhon se ashq nikalte rahe par sahara bhagwan ka liya aap ne
Aur dukhon ko bhool kar zindagi mein khushiyon ko sajaya app ne
Har ek daur se guzar kar khud ba khud anubhav paya aap ne
Isilye apne anubhav se is berahmi duniya ko jhukaya aap ne
Teri shayri ko jawab dene ke liye thoda sa ghumaya hai may ne
Maaf karna agar is davraan mein aap ko dukh pahunchya hai may ne
Kitni bakhoobi se zindagi ke har daur ko Honeyrose ji, darshaya hai aap ne
Hum naye shayaron ko prerna diya aur aage badne ki raha dhiklaya hai aap ne
Kya taarif karun may tumhari
Mere pass aise alfaaz hi nahi
Wonderful, wonderful just wonderful
Beautiful just absolutely beautiful
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«Reply #13 on: October 04, 2008, 09:06:23 AM » |
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Azeem Azaad
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«Reply #14 on: October 05, 2008, 10:23:46 AM » |
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Bahoot Khoob Honey Sis,.
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on eTI community..
