****Bachpan se yovan tak****

by honeyrose on October 01, 2008, 01:01:37 PM
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Bachpan se yovan tak mujhe chalna tha
Hanste hanste waqt guzar the chalna tha

Zindagi ka safar akele samajna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi ke kashmakash se ladna tha   

Sar pe chaat nahi aur sahara aapna koi na tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka samna karna tha

Mamta ke aanchal mein mujhe sonaa tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein bachpan ko bhool na tha

Aankhon mein naye khwab mujhe dekhna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka aanth karna tha 

Pathar chube paaon mein aur dukh ka saaya tha…
Bhook pyaas se ladte jawani par kadam rakha tha

Aankhon se ashq nikalte rahe par sahara kisi ka na tha
Dukhon ko bhool kar zindagi mein khushiyan sajana tha


^^**honeyrose**^^
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2008, 01:50:53 PM »
Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne honey dear. Her ek alfaz mein dard
dil ka bayan kiya hai. God Bless you dear. be chearful
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2008, 01:59:14 PM »
 Applause Applause
touching words honeyji
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2008, 05:19:11 PM »
Thanks Roja dear...

Shukriya Sanjeev ji...
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2008, 11:44:54 AM »
Bachpan se yovan tak mujhe chalna tha
Hanste hanste waqt guzar the chalna tha

Zindagi ka safar akele samajna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi ke kashmakash se ladna tha   

Sar pe chaat nahi aur sahara aapna koi na tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka samna karna tha

Mamta ke aanchal mein mujhe sonaa tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein bachpan ko bhool na tha

Aankhon mein naye khwab mujhe dekhna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka aanth karna tha 

Pathar chube paaon mein aur dukh ka saaya tha…
Bhook pyaas se ladte jawani par kadam rakha tha

Aankhon se ashq nikalte rahe par sahara kisi ka na tha
Dukhon ko bhool kar zindagi mein khushiyan sajana tha


^^**honeyrose**^^

Ek ek sher ghum ki gehri daastan byaan kar raha hai. Honey sis, bohot achcha likha aapne. Please keep smiling.
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«Reply #5 on: October 02, 2008, 05:32:12 PM »
Thanks Celmira sis for reading...
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«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2008, 08:19:52 PM »
Bachpan se yovan tak mujhe chalna tha
Hanste hanste waqt guzar the chalna tha

Zindagi ka safar akele samajna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi ke kashmakash se ladna tha   

Sar pe chaat nahi aur sahara aapna koi na tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka samna karna tha

Mamta ke aanchal mein mujhe sonaa tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein bachpan ko bhool na tha

Aankhon mein naye khwab mujhe dekhna tha
Hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka aanth karna tha 

Pathar chube paaon mein aur dukh ka saaya tha…
Bhook pyaas se ladte jawani par kadam rakha tha

Aankhon se ashq nikalte rahe par sahara kisi ka na tha
Dukhon ko bhool kar zindagi mein khushiyan sajana tha


^^**honeyrose**^^

Gehri Baatein keh di aapne honey!!
bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2008, 07:17:02 AM »
bahut khoob & verry touching
honey rose ji




Baadal
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«Reply #8 on: October 03, 2008, 08:31:32 AM »
 Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB HONEY DI,
VERY VERY TOUCHING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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diya786
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2008, 09:53:47 AM »
bahut accha likha hai jaya di aapne der se aane ke liye maafi chahti hoon aapse
aapka likha hua har lafz accha laga keep it up !!! Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: October 03, 2008, 09:57:39 AM »
bohat achha likha honey ji....
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«Reply #11 on: October 03, 2008, 04:54:30 PM »
Shukriya khwaish ji

Shukriya baadal ji

Thanks shally..

Thanks diya ...

Shukriya Saurabh ji...
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«Reply #12 on: October 03, 2008, 07:02:27 PM »
Bachpan se yovan tak app chal saki
Kisi tarah waqt ko guzar saki

Zindagi ka safar akele samajh saki
Har lamha zindagi ke kashmakash se ladh saki   

Sar pe chaat nahi aur sahara aapna koi na tha
Phir bhi har kadam pe zindagi ke dukhon ka samna kar saki

Mamta ke aanchal mein app sho na saki
Aur har pal zindagi ke bachpan ko bhool na saki

Aankhon mein naye khwab aap dekh saki
Aur hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka aanth kar saki

Pathar chube paaon mein aur dukh ka saaya aap hata saki
Bhook pyaas se ladte jawani par kadam rakh saki

Aankhon se ashq nikalte rahe par sahara bhagwan ka liya aap ne
Aur dukhon ko bhool kar zindagi mein khushiyon ko sajaya app ne

Har ek daur se guzar kar khud ba khud anubhav paya aap ne
Isilye apne anubhav se is berahmi duniya ko jhukaya aap ne

Teri shayri ko jawab dene ke liye thoda sa ghumaya hai may ne
Maaf karna agar is davraan mein aap ko dukh pahunchya hai may ne

Kitni bakhoobi se zindagi ke har daur ko Honeyrose ji, darshaya hai aap ne
Hum naye shayaron ko prerna diya aur aage badne ki raha dhiklaya hai aap ne

Kya taarif karun may tumhari
Mere pass aise alfaaz hi nahi
Wonderful, wonderful just wonderful
Beautiful just absolutely beautiful




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«Reply #13 on: October 04, 2008, 09:06:23 AM »
Bachpan se yovan tak app chal saki
Kisi tarah waqt ko guzar saki

Zindagi ka safar akele samajh saki
Har lamha zindagi ke kashmakash se ladh saki  

Sar pe chaat nahi aur sahara aapna koi na tha
Phir bhi har kadam pe zindagi ke dukhon ka samna kar saki

Mamta ke aanchal mein app sho na saki
Aur har pal zindagi ke bachpan ko bhool na saki

Aankhon mein naye khwab aap dekh saki
Aur hanste hanste zindagi mein dukhon ka aanth kar saki

Pathar chube paaon mein aur dukh ka saaya aap hata saki
Bhook pyaas se ladte jawani par kadam rakh saki

Aankhon se ashq nikalte rahe par sahara bhagwan ka liya aap ne
Aur dukhon ko bhool kar zindagi mein khushiyon ko sajaya app ne

Har ek daur se guzar kar khud ba khud anubhav paya aap ne
Isilye apne anubhav se is berahmi duniya ko jhukaya aap ne

Teri shayri ko jawab dene ke liye thoda sa ghumaya hai may ne
Maaf karna agar is davraan mein aap ko dukh pahunchya hai may ne

Kitni bakhoobi se zindagi ke har daur ko Honeyrose ji, darshaya hai aap ne
Hum naye shayaron ko prerna diya aur aage badne ki raha dhiklaya hai aap ne

Kya taarif karun may tumhari
Mere pass aise alfaaz hi nahi
Wonderful, wonderful just wonderful
Beautiful just absolutely beautiful







Bohat hi umda ehsaas hai aapka Rajesh harish ji

Shukriya aapne itne achche andaz mein likha
very very nice Rajesh ji... Applause Applause Thumbs UP


Mere dost mere dard ko samjhte hain
Unke pyaar ko mujhe samajna tha

Mere aapno ne humen dard diya hain
Mere dost ne humen girne se sambhala tha.. 
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«Reply #14 on: October 05, 2008, 10:23:46 AM »
Bahoot Khoob Honey Sis,.
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