**Bada badnaseeb hoon** by Rahim

by dead heart on February 19, 2010, 02:48:35 PM
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dead heart
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«Reply #15 on: February 21, 2010, 01:12:41 PM »
Very well said by u too Brokenbyluv...Tooooo good!!!
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«Reply #16 on: February 21, 2010, 01:14:50 PM »
ur welcome ji..
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #17 on: March 23, 2010, 04:19:01 AM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on February 19, 2010, 02:48:35 PM
Kuch mahine hogaye yeh kalam likhe...Ek sachai, ek dard, ek kahani hai yeh kalam...Maine yeh kalam ansuon ki sihai se likha tha...Ek dard ke saath likha tha...Aj halat kuch alag hai mager yeh kalam ek yaad hai unn lamhon ki jab koi saath hoke saath na tha...Jab ek dost pyaar main tabdil hone jaa raha tha...Umeed hai pasand ayega...

Bada badnaseeb hoon,
Jo hume chchta hai; wohi chorr jata hai,
Jisse pana chahta hoon; wohi dil torr jata hai,
Sabko apne mehboob ke saath dekta hoon,
Khushion ke saager main sabko doobte dekta hoon,
Bas ek main hi bada badnaseeb hoon…

Bada badnaseeb hoon,
Jisse na paa sakoun ussi se mohobat hojati hai,
Phir toh bas zindagi andheron main dhal jati hai,
Nadi ke kinare ponch kar bhi pyaasa laut ata hoon,
Jahan se pyaar mangoun bas thukraya hi jata hoon,
Aur dil yehi kehta hai ‘bada badnaseeb hoon…’

Bada badnaseeb hoon,
Jisse pasand aa bhi jaun who apne ehsason ko mar deta hai,
Kehke yeh ke usse koi bhavishya nazar nahin ata hai,
Kehne ko toh kafi logon ka aziz hoon,
Bas mohobat ki duniya main thorra sa gareeb hoon,
Sach hai yaaroon; bada badnaseeb hoon…

Lavson ka kadva teer mere seene main chuboya jata hai,
Ab toh apni zindagi ko kabrastan ki tarha veeran pata hoon,
Sone se pehle na uthne ki dua mang jata hoon,
Sache dil se ab uss Rabb ke pas laut jana chahta hoon,
Par kya karoun; maut se bhu thukraya hi jata hoon,
Dil se kehta hai Rahim; ‘bada badnaseeb hoon…’


~Rahim~
Bahut khoom Rahim Ji
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #18 on: March 23, 2010, 04:52:38 AM »
Rahim saaHeb:

Aadaab arz haii!

badnaseebee ke ehsaasoN ko bayaa.n karti hu'ii aapki yeh dard bharii kavviSh dil ko Chhu gayiiN.. pyaar ke liye taRap aur har lafz meiN dard naZar aaya mujhe.. aise hi liKhate raheN aage bhee.. bazm ki Shaan ko baRhaate raheN.. ! daad!

KhUSh  raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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dead heart
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«Reply #19 on: March 23, 2010, 10:10:34 AM »
Shukriya Rajesh jee...

Bahaut shukriya Dhaval jee...Hmm apko woh ehsaas nazar agaye jinse maine yeh nazm likhi thi...Ek writer ko is'se bad kar kuch nahin chahiye ke uske jazbat padne wale ko nazar ajayen...Ap bhi khush rahein...
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