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soudagar
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mujhe na ab aawaz dena bahut dur nikal gaya hoon main
jiwan ki khoj mein khud ki zindgi ko nigal gaya hoon main
jaat par lagi badi se badi chot ko pathar ban seh gaya tha
dil par lgi mamuli chot se buri tarh dahal gaya hoon main
naa tod sake mujhe zamaane bhar k gham aur sitam bhi
uski nam aakhein dekh mom ki tarh pighal gaya hoon main
nadan tha nahi kar paya fark mohabbat aur bewafai mein
uski bholi masoom surat se phir se chhal gaya hoon main
kal tk zinda dili se jeene wala seher-e-aagaaz sa tha main
aaj tanha udas shaam sa chupchaap dhal gaya hoon main
keh-kahe pichhe chhut gye khamoshi ki dabish me aa gya
waqt ki aanch mein jal dekho kitna badal gaya hoon main |
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beautiful waah waah karan
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«Reply #2 on: November 27, 2013, 04:55:52 PM » |
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Soudagar jiu , bahut dard bhare ashaar kahe hain . bahut khubsurat ghazal hai . mubarakbaad qubul kijye.
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«Reply #3 on: November 27, 2013, 05:33:25 PM » |
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bht bht khoob ar
khubsurat bayaani
daad daad
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«Reply #4 on: November 27, 2013, 06:05:53 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2013, 08:54:59 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2013, 09:21:22 PM » |
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mujhe na ab aawaz dena bahut dur nikal gaya hoon main
jiwan ki khoj mein khud ki zindgi ko nigal gaya hoon main
jaat par lagi badi se badi chot ko pathar ban seh gaya tha
dil par lgi mamuli chot se buri tarh dahal gaya hoon main
Beautifulll Karan Ji..
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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soudagar
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«Reply #9 on: November 27, 2013, 11:29:23 PM » |
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shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #10 on: November 27, 2013, 11:44:18 PM » |
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shukriya siddiqui sir
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«Reply #11 on: November 28, 2013, 12:08:21 AM » |
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, beautiful Saudagar jee, bahut bahut khoob.
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my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single
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«Reply #13 on: November 28, 2013, 01:31:56 AM » |
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mujhe na ab aawaz dena bahut dur nikal gaya hoon main
jiwan ki khoj mein khud ki zindgi ko nigal gaya hoon main
jaat par lagi badi se badi chot ko pathar ban seh gaya tha
dil par lgi mamuli chot se buri tarh dahal gaya hoon main
naa tod sake mujhe zamaane bhar k gham aur sitam bhi
uski nam aakhein dekh mom ki tarh pighal gaya hoon main
nadan tha nahi kar paya fark mohabbat aur bewafai mein
uski bholi masoom surat se phir se chhal gaya hoon main
kal tk zinda dili se jeene wala seher-e-aagaaz sa tha main
aaj tanha udas shaam sa chupchaap dhal gaya hoon main
keh-kahe pichhe chhut gye khamoshi ki dabish me aa gya
waqt ki aanch mein jal dekho kitna badal gaya hoon main superb,sir |
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«Reply #14 on: November 28, 2013, 01:18:23 PM » |
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shukriya sarfira ji
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on eTI community..
