Badal gaye....................mann

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Hamne palak hi jhapki aur manzar badal kaye.
Sadiyon se the hamare wo dilbar badal gaye.

Wo naksh-e-paa ki jin se manjil ko pahuchte,
Kaise milegi manjil jab rahbar badal gaye.

Har mod har safar par ham sath hi chalenge,
Mujh se wo aisi baaten kahkar badal gaye.

Badlaaw ki ummid ka bas itna hua anjam,
Ye hath to wahi hain bas khnazar badal gaye.

Lagti hai inse ”mann” ke paon ko thhokaren,
Kahkar wo sare raah ke patthar badal gaye.......

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2012, 04:09:46 AM »
bahut khoob leejiye ek rau
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2012, 06:08:57 AM »
Hamne palak hi jhapki aur manzar badal kaye.
Sadiyon se the hamare wo dilbar badal gaye.

Wo naksh-e-paa ki jin se manjil ko pahuchte,
Kaise milegi manjil jab rahbar badal gaye.

Har mod har safar par ham sath hi chalenge,
Mujh se wo aisi baaten kahkar badal gaye.

Badlaaw ki ummid ka bas itna hua anjam,
Ye hath to wahi hain bas khnazar badal gaye.

Lagti hai inse ”mann” ke paon ko thhokaren,
Kahkar wo sare raah ke patthar badal gaye.......

Mann


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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2012, 11:57:23 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sainiji
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2012, 02:41:06 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Mann ji... badai khoobsurti se aaapne apne ehsaason ko sajaaya hai... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2012, 02:44:40 PM »
bahut khub Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2012, 05:58:25 PM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke ... waqai behad dilfareb kalaam kahi hai... Usual Smile
 
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe.. gazab ke ahsaas O khayaal
aur behad umdaa adaaygi rahi jee... bahut khoob ... Usual Smile

humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
                 

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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2012, 03:18:20 AM »
bahut shukriya adilji
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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2012, 03:20:58 AM »
bahut bahut aur bahut dhanyawad hridayji... ummid hai ki aapka sath yun hi milta rahega...
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2012, 03:24:13 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad sanjeevji
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2012, 03:29:51 AM »
bahot khoob
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«Reply #11 on: May 16, 2012, 03:30:31 AM »
bahot khoob
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«Reply #12 on: May 16, 2012, 03:38:46 AM »
shukiya janab sarfiraji
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«Reply #13 on: May 16, 2012, 09:28:22 AM »
waah bohat oomda ...
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«Reply #14 on: May 16, 2012, 11:54:38 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya parwazji...
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