baDee takleef deite hain.....

by laaiba on June 01, 2012, 07:07:17 PM
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jo AAnsoo dil pe gir jayein baDee takleef deite hai.n
jo  gull bin khile murjhayein badee takleef deite hai.n

jo batein lab e goya se adaa ho jaati hain lekin
jo dil mein lafz reh jaayein baDee takleef deite hai.n

laaibah ali angel11
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2012, 07:09:24 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2012, 07:10:51 PM »
bohat shukria....
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2012, 07:11:41 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on June 01, 2012, 07:07:17 PM

jo AAnsoo dil pe gir jayein baDee takleef deite hai.n
jo  gull bin khile murjhayein badee takleef deite hai.n

jo batein lab e goya se adaa ho jaati hain lekin
jo dil mein lafz reh jaayein baDee takleef deite hai.n

laaibah ali angel11

           apni khamoshi mein woh zor na tha ki unhein samajh aati.!
           apne alfaaz mein wo quwat na rahi ki asar rakh paati.!!
           
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2012, 07:15:57 PM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 01, 2012, 07:11:41 PM

           apni khamoshi mein woh zor na tha ki unhein samajh aati.!
           apne alfaaz mein wo quwat na rahi ki asar rakh paati.!!
           
nyc sharing k a Usual Smile
mohabbat mei.n lafz asar kho hi dete hain..
tere zikr par na chah kr hum ro hi dete hain...
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2012, 07:20:04 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on June 01, 2012, 07:15:57 PM
nyc sharing k a Usual Smile
mohabbat mei.n lafz asar kho hi dete hain..
tere zikr par na chah kr hum ro hi dete hain...

VERI NAAICE
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2012, 07:21:18 PM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 01, 2012, 07:20:04 PM
VERI NAAICE
thanku...
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2012, 07:36:46 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Laaiba ji....!!!

rajnigandha phool koi, na gajre me saje to baat hi kya,
taaron se saji ho raat koi, chaand na ho to baat hi kya,
dil me chhipi ho baat koi, zubaan pe na aaye to baat hi kya,
humdun na ho agar saath koi, koi saath bhi ho to saath ki kya...
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2012, 08:22:41 PM »
wah wah wah ... bahut hi khoob... wah
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2012, 04:24:26 AM »
waah waah very nice
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2012, 06:03:00 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 01, 2012, 07:36:46 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Laaiba ji....!!!

rajnigandha phool koi, na gajre me saje to baat hi kya,
taaron se saji ho raat koi, chaand na ho to baat hi kya,
dil me chhipi ho baat koi, zubaan pe na aaye to baat hi kya,
humdun na ho agar saath koi, koi saath bhi ho to saath ki kya...
bohat shukria...
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2012, 06:03:27 AM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on June 01, 2012, 08:22:41 PM
wah wah wah ... bahut hi khoob... wah


bohat shukria aapkaa....
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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2012, 06:04:09 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on June 02, 2012, 04:24:26 AM
waah waah very nice
bohat bohat shukria aapkaa....
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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2012, 07:02:03 PM »
khubsurat andaaz laaiba ji... bahut khoob... !

na paaya sukun kisi ne log kehte hain
pyaar ke ye pal badi takleef dete hain,

na gujarna is dard ki gali se tum laaiba
Intezar ke ye pal badi takleef dete hain...!


Intezar !
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2012, 07:54:09 PM »
shukria aapkaa intezar or naseehat ke liye shukria Usual Smile
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