Baha dena~~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on May 15, 2009, 12:04:41 PM
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dard mein mere muskaraaye bahut tum
aaj ho sake toh do ashq bhi baha dena

teri baahon k jhoole mein bahut jhooli mein
aaj jara kandha meri maiyaat se laga dena

der aaye tum bahut iska malaal toh hoga
ho sake toh zald jaane ki jid na laga lena

palein band hai meri phir tujhe dekha maine
aaj mujhe dekhne do ,parde na chada lena

maut aa chuki hai tere mehboob ko magar
iski yaadon ko apne dil se na mita dena

jo khayal ho aaya ho tumhe apni shohrat ka
toh sabke beech na sahi, akele mein ashq baha lena

tujhe dhoondti aayegi meri rooh toh vaada kar
oosse milega tu , oosse dil mein chhupa lena
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2009, 01:01:37 PM »
Aaye Haye..  Kya Baat hai Salil Bhai.. very Touching.... Thodi Dard Bhari aur Thodi Pyaar Bhari.. Bahut HI PYaari Poem Hai dost.. Bahut KHooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2009, 01:04:03 PM »
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palein band hai meri phir tujhe dekha maine
aaj mujhe dekhne do ,parde na chada lena

maut aa chuki hai tere mehboob ko magar
iski yaadon ko apne dil se na mita dena

Wah ... bahut accha likha hai salil ji  Thumbs UP
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sapana
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2009, 06:37:34 PM »
salilji, bahot hi accha likha hai
der aaye tum bahut iska malaal toh hoga
ho sake toh zald jaane ki jid na laga lena bahot acchi lines Applause
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dead heart
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2009, 08:05:02 PM »
Bahaut khoob Salil bhaijan... Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2009, 12:08:40 AM »
Bahut Khoob Salil Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2009, 12:23:48 AM »
very very nice sallil ji, Applause
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2009, 05:21:40 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on May 15, 2009, 12:04:41 PM
dard mein mere muskaraaye bahut tum
aaj ho sake toh do ashq bhi baha dena

teri baahon k jhoole mein bahut jhooli mein
aaj jara kandha meri maiyaat se laga dena

der aaye tum bahut iska malaal toh hoga
ho sake toh zald jaane ki jid na laga lena

palein band hai meri phir tujhe dekha maine
aaj mujhe dekhne do ,parde na chada lena

maut aa chuki hai tere mehboob ko magar
iski yaadon ko apne dil se na mita dena

jo khayal ho aaya ho tumhe apni shohrat ka
toh sabke beech na sahi, akele mein ashq baha lena

tujhe dhoondti aayegi meri rooh toh vaada kar
oosse milega tu , oosse dil mein chhupa lena


NAAAICE..1 ...S2002
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2009, 05:42:00 AM »
Bahoot bahoot Khoob Salil
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angel4u
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2009, 06:31:29 AM »
Bahut khoobsurat likha hai Salil aapne..
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2009, 09:45:57 AM »
Bohot achcha likha hai...Bohot Khoob Salil
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salil2002
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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2009, 06:15:05 AM »
Quote from: Mann on May 15, 2009, 01:01:37 PM
Aaye Haye..  Kya Baat hai Salil Bhai.. very Touching.... Thodi Dard Bhari aur Thodi Pyaar Bhari.. Bahut HI PYaari Poem Hai dost.. Bahut KHooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
Quote from: Roja on May 15, 2009, 01:04:03 PM
Wah ... bahut accha likha hai salil ji  Thumbs UP
Quote from: sapana on May 15, 2009, 06:37:34 PM
salilji, bahot hi accha likha hai
der aaye tum bahut iska malaal toh hoga
ho sake toh zald jaane ki jid na laga lena bahot acchi lines Applause
Quote from: dead heart on May 15, 2009, 08:05:02 PM
Bahaut khoob Salil bhaijan... Applause
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 16, 2009, 12:08:40 AM
Bahut Khoob Salil Ji
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 16, 2009, 12:23:48 AM
very very nice sallil ji, Applause
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 16, 2009, 05:21:40 AM

NAAAICE..1 ...S2002
Quote from: Sophi on May 16, 2009, 05:42:00 AM
Bahoot bahoot Khoob Salil
Quote from: {Angel} on May 16, 2009, 06:31:29 AM
Bahut khoobsurat likha hai Salil aapne..
Quote from: Celmira on May 16, 2009, 09:45:57 AM
Bohot achcha likha hai...Bohot Khoob Salil
thnks vicky bhai,rajeshbhai, sophi, talat di, rahim bhai, madhuwesh, huzena,roja and K_A
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