Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha..."Khwahish"

by khwaish on April 27, 2013, 10:43:28 PM
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Aaj Laaiba Ji ki Ek Nazm padhi Thi Jo Dil Ke Bahut kareeb mehsoos Hui..Laaiba Ji Ki Nazm Se Inspired Aur Unki Izzazat Se Title Line Ko lekar Ek Nazm Pesh Kar Raha Hoon...Thankyou Laaiba Ji..


Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha..

Haan Kuch Pal Jo Guzar Chuke The
Kuch Aise Zakhm Jo Bhar Chuke The
Kuch Yaadein Hum Dafan Kar Chuke The

Par Inn AshqoN Ko Kabhi Roka Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha..


Tere Hone Se Khud Ko Muqammal Samajhta Tha
Tujhse Do Pal bhi Juda Hone Se Darta Tha
Tujhe Paane ke Liye Kaanton Se Guzarta Tha

Mushkilon Se Darr Ke Kabhi Lauta Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi tha...


Kabhi Ek Lamha Aisa Bhi Aata Hai
Jisme Beeta Hua Kal Nazar Aata Hai
Waqt Apna Sab kuch Lekar Guzar Jaata Hai

Par Apne Kisi zakhm Ko Kharocha Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha...


Yeh sach Hai Kabhi Do Kinaare Nahi Milte
Doobne Wale Ko paas Koi Sahaare Nahi Milte
Jo Roshan kar Sake Woh Sitaare Nahi Milte

Tujhse Door Hona Majboori Th Koi Dhoka Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha.........



           ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2013, 11:12:06 PM »
waah waah bohat achi nazm huyi hai khwaish ji ,.........
sach hai ke aap ki iss nazm ne b saman bandh dia hai./,.....
yeh lines dil choo gayien ,........laajawab
bohat bohat c daad,............
Kabhi Ek Lamha Aisa Bhi Aata Hai Jisme Beeta Hua Kal Nazar Aata Hai Waqt Apna Sab kuch Lekar Guzar Jaata Hai Par Apne Kisi zakhm Ko Kharocha Nahi Tha Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha... Yeh sach Hai Kabhi Do Kinaare Nahi Milte Doobne Wale Ko paas Koi Sahaare Nahi Milte Jo Roshan kar Sake Woh Sitaare Nahi Milte Tujhse Door Hona Majboori Th Koi Dhoka Nahi Tha Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha.........

 
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2013, 11:27:10 PM »
Wah Wah!!! A Very Very Beautiful Nazm Khwahish Jee!!! Pad kar aankh nam ho gayi!!! Keep writing such lovely poems!

Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha........

Love this line...!!

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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2013, 11:46:55 PM »
KYA KYA KYA BAAT SIR..........WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

jUST AWSOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE............


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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2013, 05:33:28 PM »
waah waah bohat achi nazm huyi hai khwaish ji ,.........
sach hai ke aap ki iss nazm ne b saman bandh dia hai./,.....
yeh lines dil choo gayien ,........laajawab
bohat bohat c daad,............
Kabhi Ek Lamha Aisa Bhi Aata Hai Jisme Beeta Hua Kal Nazar Aata Hai Waqt Apna Sab kuch Lekar Guzar Jaata Hai Par Apne Kisi zakhm Ko Kharocha Nahi Tha Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha... Yeh sach Hai Kabhi Do Kinaare Nahi Milte Doobne Wale Ko paas Koi Sahaare Nahi Milte Jo Roshan kar Sake Woh Sitaare Nahi Milte Tujhse Door Hona Majboori Th Koi Dhoka Nahi Tha Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha.........

 


Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooooo Much laaiba Ji..

& Its All Thanks To you............

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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2013, 06:16:44 PM »
bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut khub khawaish bhai.......
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2013, 11:11:32 PM »
Bahut din hue, aisa kuch pada nahi tha.
Bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2013, 11:59:53 PM »
bhut umda sir ji bht khoob..... icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2013, 12:47:16 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai khwaish ji. bahut umda likhe ho aap. padhkar dil khush hua. dili mubarakbad ko qubool kijiyega.
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2013, 05:05:56 PM »
Khawahish Jee Aadaab... !



WaaH janab waaH bahut khoob.... waqai behad gehre aur umdaa khayaalaat ko kalam baNd kiya hai aapne... Usual Smile

Badi achchi shayrana sifat nazar aayi aapki is kalaam meiN... Usual Smile
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye....

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2013, 03:09:12 AM »
Aaj Laaiba Ji ki Ek Nazm padhi Thi Jo Dil Ke Bahut kareeb mehsoos Hui..Laaiba Ji Ki Nazm Se Inspired Aur Unki Izzazat Se Title Line Ko lekar Ek Nazm Pesh Kar Raha Hoon...Thankyou Laaiba Ji..


Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha..

Haan Kuch Pal Jo Guzar Chuke The
Kuch Aise Zakhm Jo Bhar Chuke The
Kuch Yaadein Hum Dafan Kar Chuke The

Par Inn AshqoN Ko Kabhi Roka Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha..


Tere Hone Se Khud Ko Muqammal Samajhta Tha
Tujhse Do Pal bhi Juda Hone Se Darta Tha
Tujhe Paane ke Liye Kaanton Se Guzarta Tha

Mushkilon Se Darr Ke Kabhi Lauta Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi tha...


Kabhi Ek Lamha Aisa Bhi Aata Hai
Jisme Beeta Hua Kal Nazar Aata Hai
Waqt Apna Sab kuch Lekar Guzar Jaata Hai

Par Apne Kisi zakhm Ko Kharocha Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha...


Yeh sach Hai Kabhi Do Kinaare Nahi Milte
Doobne Wale Ko paas Koi Sahaare Nahi Milte
Jo Roshan kar Sake Woh Sitaare Nahi Milte

Tujhse Door Hona Majboori Th Koi Dhoka Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha.........



           ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~~


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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2013, 05:57:41 PM »
Wah Wah!!! A Very Very Beautiful Nazm Khwahish Jee!!! Pad kar aankh nam ho gayi!!! Keep writing such lovely poems!

Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha........

Love this line...!!

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Thanks a Million Dear Shireen... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2013, 07:31:33 PM »
Khwaish sahab aapki nazm aapke jazbaat ka bakhoobi izhaar karti nazr aayi wo maamlaat jo shayd kahiN raakh mai dabhi huii chingaari ki taraH thay aapne dil ke un ehsasaat ko qaghaz pe raqm karke bashkal e shola bana dia bhut khoob daad hazir hai qubool farmaaiye yuN hi likhte rahiye


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«Reply #13 on: January 30, 2014, 04:24:24 PM »
KYA KYA KYA BAAT SIR..........WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

jUST AWSOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE............


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