BAHUT PURANI YAAD

by pritam tripathi on July 25, 2010, 09:39:04 PM
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KIS BAAT KI TUM MUBAARAQBAAD DE RAHE HO
BARBAAD HO GAYA HOON MAIN AUR TUM MUJHE AABAD KEH RAHE HO
BARSON BASANT DEKHNE KE BAAD MAIN BAS YAHI KEH SAKTA HOON
MAIN KHUD HOON SUKHA PHOOL TUM MUJHE KYON GULAAB DE RAHE HO ?

HAR FUN ME AAJ TUM MUJHKO MAAT DE RAHE HO
HAR SHAKHAS KI JUBAAN SE BAS TUM APNI BAAT KEH RAHE HO
MAANTA HOON TUM HAR FUN ME HO MAHIR,MAGAR BARSO PAHLE USKO KHOJA THA MAINE
JIS ADDA PR AAJ TUM NAAJ KAR RAHE HO..

AAJ BARSO PAHLE KI TUM MUJHE YAAD DE RAHE HO
KABHI KAVITA KAHI THI MAINE AUR TUM AAJ DAAD DE RAHE HO
YE TO BHUL THI HAMMARI HUMNE POOCHA HI NAHI TUMSE KI TUMKO KYA KEHNA HAI?
WARNA YE TO BARSO PAHLE KEHNA THA TUMKO JO TUM AAJ KEH RAHE HO.....
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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2010, 09:52:17 PM »
bahut hi khoobsurti ke saath aapne ek zindagi ke kadwe sach ko bataya hai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... is kavita me main aapki jagah khud ko rakh ke mehsoos kar raha tha ki kitna dard ho raha hoga aapko... jitni bhi taarif karun is kavita ki kam hai... bahut sundar kavita hai ye... bas dard, dard aur dard hai isme... sach ... hamare dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye kavita...!!!

 Hats off to you!
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2010, 11:31:26 PM »
HAUSLAFZAI KA BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA KLASKAR SAHAB
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2012, 03:45:29 AM »
bahut hi khoobsurti ke saath aapne ek zindagi ke kadwe sach ko bataya hai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... is kavita me main aapki jagah khud ko rakh ke mehsoos kar raha tha ki kitna dard ho raha hoga aapko... jitni bhi taarif karun is kavita ki kam hai... bahut sundar kavita hai ye... bas dard, dard aur dard hai isme... sach ... hamare dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye kavita...!!!

 Hats off to you!

hriday ji bahut bahut shukriya hauslafzai ka
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2012, 03:49:39 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause
excellant. very emotive lines Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2012, 03:51:06 AM »
Applause Applause Applause
excellant. very emotive lines Thumbs UP
suman ji shukriya
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