Balaatkaar--- sharm aati rahi~~Saahil

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«Reply #30 on: April 02, 2010, 11:00:19 AM »
Bahut achcha likha hai aapne Saahil ji. Dard ko jis tarah se aapne pesh kiya hai wo kaabile taarif hai. Bahut kam log hote hain jo aise vishay pe likhne ka sochte hain. Aur aap un me se ek hai. Bahut khoob likhte hain aap. Haqeeqat ko shabdon ke saanche me dhaalna koi aapse sikhe. bahut khoob. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #31 on: April 02, 2010, 11:02:39 AM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kaash ji... bahut achche... aapne jeewan k ek gande sach ko apne shabdon me utaara hai... par sach to sach hota hai chahe wo ganda hi q na ho... bahut khoob likha hai kaash ji...It's too good...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 
Quote from: @kaash on April 02, 2010, 10:50:20 AM
dard apna sah ke ya na sahke likhna asaan hai
aise dard pe likhna mahsus karna nahi asaan hai

balaatkaar bal ke dwara kia aisa anachaar hai
jo jism ke saath peedit ki aatma ko raundta hai

vo nishaan jism par uske yun to bhar jate hain
par rah rah ke darindagi ki yaad dilate hain

aise dard se to dard bhi kaanp jata hai
aisa dard bedardi se dard deta jata hai

jane kitni ladkiyan aise haadson se guzarti hain
kunch unke dard samajhte kuch ke lie vo hansi hoti hain
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«Reply #32 on: October 24, 2014, 10:34:46 PM »
Thanks a lot hriday
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«Reply #33 on: November 08, 2014, 12:21:08 AM »
Dikhane husn ke jalwe zamaane ko na tum niklo.
HazaaroN sar phire haiN koie paagal ho bhi sakta hai.
      Haider
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«Reply #34 on: November 08, 2014, 12:45:31 AM »
khuNkhwaar banaya kis ne inheN is zulm pe kis ne uksaya.
Ab jab ye darinde ban hi gaye to khoon kisi ka chooseNge.
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«Reply #35 on: November 08, 2014, 01:00:11 AM »
Na daan zamaane ko haider maiN ne to ye hi karte delkha.
Aaghaaz pe koie baat nahiN, anjaam pe sab chillaate haiN.
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«Reply #36 on: November 08, 2014, 01:19:58 AM »
Chori huie, bura huwa, lekin mere huzoor !
Kya is meN koi aap se ghaflat nahiN huie ?
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