Bandh Darwaaze By J N Mayyaat

by J N mayyaat on November 30, 2012, 04:45:38 AM
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Darwaaze Bandh Dikhrahe The Sabhi Zindagi Ke Magar Khuljaate Bas KhatKhatana Baaki Tha
Humraaz Banalete Unhe Hum Agar Ishaara Unka Miljaata Zuba Pe Thi Baat Unhe Batana Baaki Tha

Darte The Hum KI Kahi Mere Alfaazon Ko wo Khata Na Samajhle
Izhaare Ishqe Sunade Magar Kahi wo ise Meri Ada Na Samajhle
Is Mohobbat Ko Chupane Me Khud Aise Hogae Ki saanse Tham Rahi thi or Jaan Nikalna Baaki Tha

Humraaz Banalete Unhe Hum Agar Ishaara Unka Miljaata Zuba Pe Thi Baat Unhe Batana Baaki Tha
Darwaaze Bandh Dikhrahe The Sabhi Zindagi Ke Magar Khuljaate Bas KhatKhatana Baaki Tha

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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2012, 05:23:56 AM »
ahchi bayaani hai Mayyat sahab, umeed karta hun aage aapki aur qalamkaariyon se ru-ba-ru hote rahenge, bas saaNsen me typing mistake ho gayi hai aapki 5th line me, use sudhaar lijiye... likhte rahiye...  khush rahiye...
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2012, 05:27:41 AM »
Ji Apka Bohot Bohot Shukriya Mene sudharlia he mistake ko

aage bhi hume sikhate rahiega or galatian ho to batate rahiega

Thanks Again 
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2012, 06:54:37 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2012, 07:10:23 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 30, 2012, 08:15:50 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: November 30, 2012, 08:24:35 AM »
shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: November 30, 2012, 09:19:38 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #8 on: November 30, 2012, 09:22:36 AM »
 Thankyou !
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«Reply #9 on: November 30, 2012, 12:01:41 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: November 30, 2012, 12:02:34 PM »
bohat khoob,........bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #11 on: November 30, 2012, 12:21:16 PM »
Thank you Shukriya Meherbaani
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