Bandhiye ...................

by janumanu on September 24, 2012, 11:47:31 AM
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is tarah shouk ka rasta bandhiye
rahbaroN se zara faslaa bandhiye

zism se rooh tak ek sa bandhiye
naam se naam ko naam sa bandhiye

baandhna aab kaa koe mushkil nahiN
haaN magar iski bhi had zara bandhiye

ye jo dil hai kayee raste haiN ise
aisa kariye ise do jagah bandhiye

sabne dair-o-haram maiN hai baandha use
aap bhi kaafiye meiN khudaa bandhiye

ye hai ahad-e-wafa toot hi jayega
bandhiye bandhiye jis tarah bandhiye

kar to leN ishq fir se magar fikr ji
apne darwaje par kyuN bala bandhiye
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2012, 12:07:02 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2012, 12:10:00 PM »
very nice
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«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2012, 12:11:23 PM »
Very nice creation Janumanu ji.!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2012, 12:28:53 PM »
Quote from: janumanu on September 24, 2012, 11:47:31 AM
is tarah shouk ka rasta bandhiye
rahbaroN se zara faslaa bandhiye

zism se rooh tak ek sa bandhiye
naam se naam ko naam sa bandhiye

baandhna aab kaa koe mushkil nahiN
haaN magar iski bhi had zara bandhiye

ye jo dil hai kayee raste haiN ise
aisa kariye ise do jagah bandhiye

sabne dair-o-haram maiN hai baandha use
aap bhi kaafiye meiN khudaa bandhiye

ye hai ahad-e-wafa toot hi jayega
bandhiye bandhiye jis tarah bandhiye

kar to leN ishq fir se magar fikr ji
apne darwaje par kyuN bala bandhiye

well
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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2012, 02:13:05 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2012, 04:13:10 PM »
bahut k hoob bahut badhiya... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: September 24, 2012, 04:33:46 PM »
Quote from: janumanu on September 24, 2012, 11:47:31 AM
zism se rooh tak ek sa bandhiye
naam se naam ko naam sa bandhiye

Bahoot khoob
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«Reply #8 on: September 24, 2012, 04:39:48 PM »
Bahut sundar kalaam Jaanumaanu jee
Sabhee ashaar..khoob hai
i like this bahr.
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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2012, 11:14:56 AM »
bohat khoob ...mushkil khyalat choti beher mein khoob bandhe hain aap ne janumanu ji.........bohat c daad....
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2012, 01:15:00 PM »
Bahut khooob janu ji ...!!
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«Reply #11 on: September 26, 2012, 01:21:05 PM »
Kamaal ki ghazal kahi Fikr bhai. Har baar parhne par ek naye lutf ka ehsaas hua.
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«Reply #12 on: September 28, 2012, 07:53:27 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on September 24, 2012, 12:07:02 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thanks ............. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: January 01, 2013, 06:45:14 AM »
Quote from: nandbahu on September 24, 2012, 12:10:00 PM
very nice
Thanks..
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