....~~Barish~~....

by HumTum on March 07, 2005, 01:26:53 PM
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rohit30002
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«Reply #15 on: June 27, 2005, 11:54:22 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
On a rainy morning
When the sun was hiding
I was out in the open
Drenched from top to bottom

My love had asked me to meet
Our usual place in the field
Behind the wind mill
Under the cedar tree

It was a lovely place
Near the quiet lake
Where the lovebirds met
When the sun is about to set

But nobody was there today
Just the rain and me
Been waiting the whole day
but she had never been late

Then She came running
i reached out and pulled her to me
She was breathing heavily
Her eyes were watery

She then moved away
And opened her wet hands
She gave me the chain
I gave her on our first date

I looked in her eyes
And she looked in mine
I understood what she didn't say
She realised, turned, ran away

I stood there for hours
Holding my heart in my hand
I didn't know how to cry
For with her I always smiled

I thank god it rained
Oh I just love the rain
for It hid my tears,
It hid my pain

That day that rain
those tears and that pain
The rain stopped then
but in my eyes it still rains

HumTum



Great again humtum aisi barsaat mein to hum har par bhigna chahenge
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #16 on: June 27, 2005, 12:05:29 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
On a rainy morning
When the sun was hiding
I was out in the open
Drenched from top to bottom

My love had asked me to meet
Our usual place in the field
Behind the wind mill
Under the cedar tree

It was a lovely place
Near the quiet lake
Where the lovebirds met
When the sun is about to set

But nobody was there today
Just the rain and me
Been waiting the whole day
but she had never been late

Then She came running
i reached out and pulled her to me
She was breathing heavily
Her eyes were watery

She then moved away
And opened her wet hands
She gave me the chain
I gave her on our first date

I looked in her eyes
And she looked in mine
I understood what she didn't say
She realised, turned, ran away

I stood there for hours
Holding my heart in my hand
I didn't know how to cry
For with her I always smiled

I thank god it rained
Oh I just love the rain
for It hid my tears,
It hid my pain

That day that rain
those tears and that pain
The rain stopped then
but in my eyes it still rains

HumTum


wahhhhhhhh humtum veryyyyyyyyy nice.......................
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HumTum
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«Reply #17 on: June 27, 2005, 06:10:49 PM »
Shukriya Rohit ji n Khushi ji  :D  !! !! !! !! !! !! !! !!
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Bharat
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«Reply #18 on: June 28, 2005, 03:12:11 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
woh tohume kab ke bhula baithe hai,
humare dil se natha tood baithe hai,
aab intezaar hai to maut ka hume,
rooh ko kab ka hum jala baithe hai!


hosh aur un ki diid kaa daawaa
dekhanewaalen, hosh mein aayen

dil ki tabaahii bhuule nahiin ham
dete hain ab tak unko du'aayen

HumTum


Very good Meena & Humtum,
Let me add something here, Thanks

Aaaj bhi us ke vade hamare dil me hai samayen
Gawah hai ye sare dharti, badal, Sitare or hawayen
Dilne kaha fariyaad kar us sangdil bewafa se
Khush hai hum, humne sabhi mauke shikayat ke gawayen
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #19 on: June 28, 2005, 06:54:16 PM »
"That day that rain
those tears and that pain
The rain stopped then
but in my eyes it still rains "
wow great lines HumTum........
"Meena "and "bharat_desai "......Kya baat hai........GOOD!!!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #20 on: June 28, 2005, 06:57:48 PM »
Shukriya ... Isha ji n Bharat_desai ji   :D !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #21 on: June 28, 2005, 07:44:53 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
On a rainy morning
When the sun was hiding
I was out in the open
Drenched from top to bottom

My love had asked me to meet
Our usual place in the field
Behind the wind mill
Under the cedar tree

It was a lovely place
Near the quiet lake
Where the lovebirds met
When the sun is about to set

But nobody was there today
Just the rain and me
Been waiting the whole day
but she had never been late

Then She came running
i reached out and pulled her to me
She was breathing heavily
Her eyes were watery

She then moved away
And opened her wet hands
She gave me the chain
I gave her on our first date

I looked in her eyes
And she looked in mine
I understood what she didn't say
She realised, turned, ran away

I stood there for hours
Holding my heart in my hand
I didn't know how to cry
For with her I always smiled

I thank god it rained
Oh I just love the rain
for It hid my tears,
It hid my pain

That day that rain
those tears and that pain
The rain stopped then
but in my eyes it still rains

HumTum


i've cried in the rain
i've yelled out my pain
those thirsty lips
moistening in the rain
appearing to be a bright face
but crying out my disgrace
i've suffered the pain of the rain
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Bharat
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«Reply #22 on: June 29, 2005, 02:40:17 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Shukriya ... Isha ji n Bharat_desai ji   :D !!!!!!!!!!!!



Thank you,
Ishaji and Humtumji.......

Bharat
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