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«Reply #15 on: July 03, 2005, 12:11:55 AM » |
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Asmaan pe, baadalon mein, jaane kya saazish huwi
Mera ghar mitti ka tha, mere hi ghar baarish huwi
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«Reply #16 on: July 03, 2005, 02:52:22 AM » |
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Suno, Tumhein Barasti Baarish Bohat Pasand Hai Na
Tau, Aao Dekho
Aaj muQaabla hai
Rim Jhim Barasti Baarish Ka
Mere Behtey Aansuon Se..
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #17 on: July 03, 2005, 05:41:12 AM » |
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wah wah wah...............u all r just GR8........good work !!!!!!
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dolly
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«Reply #18 on: July 03, 2005, 06:44:58 AM » |
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Meri ek choti si koshish....hope aap sabko pasand ayegi
hum gaye the samander ke kinare
apne dil ko zara behlane
magar tabhi ghir aye kaale baadal
humara aanchal bhigaane
woh na jaante the hum ro rahe hain
woh naadan to hume bhiga kar khush ho rahe hain
unhe kya pata woh hume bhigaane ke saath -2
hamaare aansun bhi dho rahe hain
hum zamaane se khud ko chupana chahte the
akele mein baith kar apne gumon ka hisaab lagana chahte the
magar yeh baarish humein yaad fir se woh pal dila rahi hai
jise bhoolne aye the abb fir se unki yaad aa rahi hai
yeh kaisa kudrat ka karishma hai
jab bhi unhe bhoolna chaha
had se jiyada yaad kiya hai
in baadlon ki mehrbaani jinhone fir se
hamare dukh mein hamara saath diya hai
dho daale hamare woh aanso
log kehte hain jinhone hamara chehra kharaab kiya hai
dukh is baat ka hai ,woh laut kar nahi aya
jiska humne tamaam-umr intzaar kiya hai
[/b] wow wow....NIKKI sis....bahut bahut achha likha hai yaa......very very nice.....!!!! |
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #19 on: July 03, 2005, 09:13:02 AM » |
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gud gud Thy......
koshish karke dekh li
magar in aankhon mein aanson nahi aye
abb kahan se bahar niklenge woh paani ke katre
jo humne khud apni aankhon mein the chupaye very nice nikki..................aryan................ bahot accha aap dono ne likha..... |
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nikki
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«Reply #20 on: July 03, 2005, 09:15:55 AM » |
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thanx a million Aryaan, Isha n Dolly sis ......jab likhi thi to pata na tha aap sabko itni pasand ayegi.
bahut hi acha reply kiya hai aapne Aryaan..
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: July 03, 2005, 11:01:03 AM » |
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Meri ek choti si koshish....hope aap sabko pasand ayegi
hum gaye the samander ke kinare
apne dil ko zara behlane
magar tabhi ghir aye kaale baadal
humara aanchal bhigaane
woh na jaante the hum ro rahe hain
woh naadan to hume bhiga kar khush ho rahe hain
unhe kya pata woh hume bhigaane ke saath -2
hamaare aansun bhi dho rahe hain
hum zamaane se khud ko chupana chahte the
akele mein baith kar apne gumon ka hisaab lagana chahte the
magar yeh baarish humein yaad fir se woh pal dila rahi hai
jise bhoolne aye the abb fir se unki yaad aa rahi hai
yeh kaisa kudrat ka karishma hai
jab bhi unhe bhoolna chaha
had se jiyada yaad kiya hai
in baadlon ki mehrbaani jinhone fir se
hamare dukh mein hamara saath diya hai
dho daale hamare woh aanso
log kehte hain jinhone hamara chehra kharaab kiya hai
dukh is baat ka hai ,woh laut kar nahi aya
jiska humne tamaam-umr intzaar kiya hai
[/b] Bohot hi khoob Nikki dear !!! Aur Humtum...Amit..Waheed...Aryaan ne bhi bohot achcha likha hai.... |
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Talat
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«Reply #22 on: July 03, 2005, 11:03:00 AM » |
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Jab bhi cha jaa te hain aasmaan main baadal
Ek chote se ghar main andhera ho jaata hai
Aasmaan rota hai kabhi raat kabhi din bhar
Jaane kya soch ke dil mera chupchap rota hai !!!
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nikki
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«Reply #23 on: July 03, 2005, 11:06:02 AM » |
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Thanx a lot Talat sis....aapne bahut hi acha likha hai............
ise badlon ki aadat kahun
ya main apni kismat
jab bhi ghar banaya tinko ka
baarish ne tod diya
abb to hum galiyon ke musafir ho gaye hain
gharon mein rehna hi chod diya
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Talat
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«Reply #24 on: July 03, 2005, 11:14:49 AM » |
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Thanks Nikki....phir se bohot achcha !!!!
Ashiaana jab bhi dekhti hoon main kisi ka
Ek chota sa ghar mujhe yaad aa jaata hai
Jaane kyun dushman hue ye badal ye hawaain
beh gaye saare tinke toot gaya gharonda !!!
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«Reply #25 on: July 03, 2005, 11:23:03 AM » |
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nice one as always.....n thanx Talat sis.......
kissi ki kashti doobi to mujhe mera fasaana yaad aya
woh toofan woh hawayein, woh pyar poorana yaad aya
kissi pe karke bharosa,dil diya tha humne
magar woh uska bedardi se dil mera tod ke jaana yaad aya
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«Reply #26 on: July 03, 2005, 11:44:46 AM » |
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 Kashtiyaan toot jaati hain is toofan-e-ishq main Aur chiraagh-e-zindagi bujha jaati hain hawaain Bhoolne waale phir door basa lete hain basti dil ki Aur hum ko milti hain ta umr dil lagane ki sazaain !!! |
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«Reply #27 on: July 03, 2005, 11:48:16 AM » |
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its simply beautifully Talat sis.........
woh mujhe dil lagane ki saza de gaya hai
na samajh tha jo karke pyar daga de gaya hai
samajhta hai bhool jaongi usse
nahi jaanta, kabhi na bhoolne ki saza de gaya hai
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«Reply #28 on: July 03, 2005, 11:50:46 AM » |
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Wow ...
What a fantastic caompetition ...
That was cool one Nikki and Talat ...
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«Reply #29 on: July 03, 2005, 11:53:23 AM » |
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thanx a lot JHL, magar yeh compitition nahi ho raha hai....just shayari chal rahi hai...aap bhi contribute kijiye na............
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