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«Reply #405 on: August 30, 2006, 02:17:17 AM » |
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Bohat khoob Nikki & JHL...
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«Reply #406 on: September 02, 2006, 03:03:02 PM » |
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thanx Aryaan n Majid...aapne bhi bahut acha likha hai Majid
khud ke gumon ke andhere iss kadar humein ghere hue hain
aankhein barasti hain raat din....dil ki zameen bhigone ke liye
one more...
aye kaash koi humein bhi dil ki duniya dikhaye
hasna bhool chuke hain hum
humein bhi koi hasaye
woh din na jaane kahan chale gaye hain
jab hum ghanton baatein kiya karte the
haal-e-dil sunaya karte the
tab unke paas bhi waqt tha...hamari baatein sunane ke liye woh roz aaya karte the
abb to woh din hawa ho gaye hain
lagta hai abb unke paas shayad waqt nahi hai
ya fir woh humse khafa ho gaye hain
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«Reply #407 on: September 03, 2006, 11:10:55 AM » |
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nice reply Majid......
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nikki
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«Reply #408 on: September 03, 2006, 11:21:38 AM » |
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oke amirooo likh dete hain....
mausam badalne ki umeed mein hum aaj bhi intzaar karte hain
baadal hain ki cha kar bhi baraste nahi
hum hain ki tarse ja rahe hain
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«Reply #409 on: September 03, 2006, 11:34:06 AM » |
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amiro...rich people...hehe..its raining here at my place
sadiyon se dil ki sookhi dharti pe bahaar aayi hai
na jaane aaj khuda ko humpe taras aaya hai
ya fir kismat hi humpe meharbaan banke aayi hai
sab shiqve dor ho gaye aaj
unhone humse umr bhar pyar nibhane ki kasam khayi hai
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«Reply #410 on: September 03, 2006, 11:41:27 AM » |
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superbbb Majid...
kaali ghata bhool kar hi sahi chaye to
woh kahe na kahe zubaan se
usse mujhpe pyar aaye to
main khud hi izhaar kar dungi..
woh kabhi mujhse milne aaye to
sadiyon se hai intzaar jiska
kabhi kissi mod par mil jaye to
chahe mujhe apna na banaye
begano ki tarah..do lafz muhse farmaye to
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«Reply #411 on: September 03, 2006, 12:09:54 PM » |
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bahut acha likha hai aapne Majid...
dard ki duniya sajayi hai humne
koi hamari mehfil mein aa jaye to raunak ho
yeh dil dukha hai sadiyon se
isse koi do pal hi sahi behla jaye to dil ki galiyon mein raunak ho
humne chahi hai sada dil ki khushi...koi humein uss khushi se milaye to..raunak ho
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«Reply #412 on: September 03, 2006, 12:20:19 PM » |
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superbbb Majid ....tussi gr8 ho...
humne do pal ki khushi mangi hai
jaan lena humein gawara nahi
hum dil ke mareez hain
koi be-reham qatil ya awara nahi
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«Reply #413 on: September 03, 2006, 12:35:58 PM » |
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bilkul sahi kaha aapne...
pyar khud mein ek tarah ki bimari hai
kissi ko to raas aati hai
kissi pe padti bhaari hai
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«Reply #414 on: September 03, 2006, 01:07:19 PM » |
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nice..
dil ko kissi ke naam se abaad karke dekh liya
khud apne haathon se barbaad karke dekh liya
abb hum na yeh galti dohrayenge
khuda ki kasam hum na abb dil lagayenge
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Shikha12
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«Reply #415 on: September 03, 2006, 01:12:15 PM » |
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Good going Nikki and Majid....
Nice work all.... =D> =D> =D>
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«Reply #416 on: September 03, 2006, 01:17:29 PM » |
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thank u Shikha sis...aapne kuch nahi likha?
good one Majid...
pyar mein koi zabardasti nahi hoti
yeh to khud ho jaata hai
karwaya nahi jaata
kissi ki dil mein jagah ban jaati hai bas chupke se
kissi ko dil mein marzi se basaya nahi jaata
yeh khel hai takdeeron ka
ismein khud ka zor azmaya nahi jaata
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«Reply #417 on: September 03, 2006, 01:51:27 PM » |
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aapka sahi kahan gaya???...arree kamaal hai kuch bhi nahi likha...
abb to woh khatt likhne ki takleef bhi nahi karte
pehle to panno-pe-panne likh diya karte the
abb to do shabd bhi nahi likhte hain
na jaane unka dhayaan kahin aur hai
ya fir woh hamari taraf dhayaan hi nahi karna chahte
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«Reply #418 on: September 03, 2006, 02:00:29 PM » |
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kar lo baat...
hamare gamon ki dastaan ek umr jitni lambi hai
aur unhein likhne ke liye shabd nahi milte
hum chup rehne ki koshish bhi karein to aankhein bolne lagti hai
aur woh hain jinhein likhne ke liye bol nahi milte
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«Reply #419 on: September 03, 2006, 06:34:06 PM » |
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very nice Nikki..... Majid...............
tu raaj dil ka kyon kholta hai
tere aankhon ke lahja bolta hai ...........
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