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«Reply #60 on: July 03, 2005, 08:13:01 PM » |
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thanx Humtum..............
nacheez ko likhna sikhaya aapne
hamari khushnaseebi dost banaya aapne
aap sab na hote to yeh nacheez bhi na hoti
to kaon dost banta hamara, aur kiske saamne dukhde rooti
waah waah ......
humey to aap khud mein ik mukmaal shayar lagtey ho
aap ki likhey har sher har gazal ke nazar hai hum
yun hi likhtey rhiyega to hum bhi kuch shikh payegey
warna iss shayrana mehfil mein badey hi be-asar hai hum ! |
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«Reply #61 on: July 03, 2005, 08:23:55 PM » |
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awesum..............Humtum
teri shayari mein asar na hota
to teri kalam hi na uth-ti
na teri nazmein koi padhta
na wah wah hoti
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«Reply #62 on: July 03, 2005, 08:33:25 PM » |
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waah waah .. kya khoob likha hai !!!
karam hai aap ka jo sir ankhoon pe bithaya humko
hum to yun hi bas dil e byaan kiya kertay hai
aap dostoon ka sath hai to hai yeh zindgi roshan
aap ke sath hum bhi do pal has ke jiya kartey hai !!
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«Reply #63 on: July 03, 2005, 08:37:17 PM » |
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wah ji wah bahut khoob...........
zah-e- naseeb koi hamare saath bhi khushi ke pal bitata hai
hum to samajh baithe the ghar to kya
abb hamare muhalle mein bhi koi nahi aata hai
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«Reply #64 on: July 03, 2005, 08:41:41 PM » |
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Nikki ji ......
aap ki dosti par kya gazal likhu mein
koi lafz nhi pass dil e byaaN ke liye
diya hai aap ki dosti ne sahara kuch iss kadar
ik umeed hi kaffi hai sou armaaN ke liye !!
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«Reply #65 on: July 03, 2005, 08:48:28 PM » |
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wao gr8 Hum tum...
yeh khush-naseebi hogi hamari jo tera gum hum baant lenge
zindagi bhar ka saath na sahi, kuch pal ki hassi tujhe hum denge
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«Reply #66 on: July 03, 2005, 08:53:08 PM » |
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waah .....
kum hi miltey hai duniya mein hasaney waley
shukr hai khuda ka jo tum jasia dost milaya
sun letey ho aap ashq e dastaaN hamari
deke honsla ghumooN se takraney ka jazba bhdaya !!
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«Reply #67 on: July 03, 2005, 08:58:24 PM » |
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wonderfull humtum....
yeh to khuda ki naymat hai
warna hum kis kabil hain
kissi ke gum ko khushi mein badalna
yeh insaan ke bas ki baat nahi
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«Reply #68 on: July 03, 2005, 09:04:04 PM » |
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waah ji waah .....
mana ke ghum ko badlna khushi mein asaan nhi
lekin kissi ke ghum ko sun lena yeh badi baat hai
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«Reply #69 on: July 03, 2005, 09:06:26 PM » |
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waah bilkul sahi kaha aapne
jiske dil par thes lagi ho
wohi jaane peer parayi
humne khaye hain hazaron gum
dekhi nahi jaati abb kissi aur ki ruswayi
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«Reply #70 on: July 03, 2005, 10:33:26 PM » |
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Good job ................................................. ................. Little princess
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«Reply #71 on: July 04, 2005, 04:18:15 AM » |
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thanx a million Aryaan, Isha n Dolly sis ......jab likhi thi to pata na tha aap sabko itni pasand ayegi.
bahut hi acha reply kiya hai aapne Aryaan.. ur welcome Nikki...n thank you! |
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«Reply #72 on: July 04, 2005, 04:25:04 AM » |
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Bohot hi khoob Nikki dear !!!
Aur Humtum...Amit..Waheed...Aryaan ne bhi bohot achcha likha hai....
Shukriya Talat... aur aap ne bhi bohat hi acha likha hai.... Nikki, HumTum & JHL.....Nice Ones.. |
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«Reply #73 on: July 04, 2005, 04:58:43 AM » |
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Shukriya Aryaan ...........  and thanks Fakhar......!! |
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«Reply #74 on: July 04, 2005, 08:32:13 AM » |
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Bohot hi khoob Nikki dear !!!
Aur Humtum...Amit..Waheed...Aryaan ne bhi bohot achcha likha hai....
Shukriya Talat... aur aap ne bhi bohat hi acha likha hai.... Nikki, HumTum & JHL.....Nice Ones.. shukriya Talat.......................................... |
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