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<>*Bas chal diya*<>

Jate hue mud mud k dekhte rahe hum
Wo fer k muh ko palat kar bas chal diya

Use jata dekh kar rok bhi na sake hum
Wo zakhm kuch aisa dekar bas chal diya

Ghut kar reh gai awaaz hamare gale me hi
Wo humpar ilzam laga kar bas chal diya

Usse jine ki khwaish bhi na kar sake hum
Jo hume jeete jee maut dekar bas chal diya......!!!!!


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Re: <>*Bas chal diya*<>

«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2010, 06:04:12 PM »

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Re: <>*Bas chal diya*<>

«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2010, 07:27:08 PM »

Kasak ji ab kya kahen... ehsaas to khubsoorat hai bahut aapke lekin... jo ehsaas jaate wakt hua hoga use, koshish ki hai k likh sakun....

Main munh pher kar chal to diya magar baat hi kuch aisi thi
apne aansu dikha kar tumhe tootata hua nahin dekh sakta tha,

ilzaam main tujh par kya lagata main to khud hi muzrim tha
bichhadne se pehle kaash ek baar tujhe seene se lagaya hota,

khwaahish to meri bhi thi saath jeene ki tumhaare “Kasak”
awaaj di hoti gar ek baar to aaj tera “Intezar” laut aaya hota

Intezar

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 07, 2010, 02:17:12 PM


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Re: <>*Bas chal diya*<>

«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2010, 07:32:47 PM »

hmmmm..... ek dum simple sa sweet sa ehsaas.. simple words , deep feelings..
just like "Kasak....Dil Ki".... bahut bahut khoobsurti se aapne saade shabdon me apne dil ke dard ko shabdon me utaara hai....
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chaaha bahut tha humne ki mudke dekhe tumhe hum,
kisi anjaane se darr ke kaaran khud ko rok liya,

laut ke aanaa chaahte the tumhaare paas us din hum,
par tumhaare baare me sochke khud ko rok liya,

mushkil to humein bhi hui thi dur jaane me tumse,
par tumhaare khushiyon ka sochke khud ko rok liya,

tumhaari khaamoshi ko bhi mehsoos kar lete hain hum,
jaanke bhi tumhaari haalat us din khud ko rok liya,

mumkin nahi hai hamaara milan ye jaante hain hum,
us anjaam me baare me sochke khud ko rok liya,

ye na kaho ki humne tumhe jeete ji maut diya hai,
humne to tumhaari zindagi ki khaatir khud ko rok liya...


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Re: <>*Bas chal diya*<>

«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2010, 07:33:28 PM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne bhai... yunhi likhte rahiye... too good....!!!

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«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2010, 07:36:56 PM »

Kapil bhai aapne to humse bhi behtar likha hai... achha hai bahut... good keep writing sir ji... !

Intezar


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Re: <>*Bas chal diya*<>

«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2010, 07:50:04 PM »

thanks a lot bro... par comparison mat karo.. tum apni jagah best ho aur main apni jagah... apna apna style hai bhai.... Usual Smile


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Re: <>*Bas chal diya*<>

«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2010, 07:51:34 PM »

bhttttttttttttttttttttt hi pyara reply intezar ji..mazaa agaay padhke

kuch aapke jawab me humne bhi likha hai dekhiye zara

Nahin dikahye aansu tumne apne mujhe
mere dil se tumne apna dard chhupaya hota

Jane se pehle ek baar gar tumne mujhe kaha hota
Rok leti tumko na maine tumhe fir jane diya hota

Jii leti main raahon me palkein bichaye karte tera *intezaar*
Gar ek baar tumne mujhe meri *kasak* kehke bulaya hota…

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Re: <>*Bas chal diya*<>

«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2010, 08:08:23 PM »

Ji Shukriya Kasak ji, aap ne bahut khubsoorat likha hai, aap ko padh kar raha nahin gaya aage likhne se...
ek nazar yahan bhi...

Tum reh gaye is kinaare aur main beech mazhdaar mein
Laut aata main tere liye gar ye dard baha na le gaya hota,

Ab is judaai ke baad tu bhi hai tanha aur main bhi jaan
Kaash ye andhera gham ka humaare beech na aaya hota,

Sochta hu kyo nikla pal bhar ke liye bi teri aagosh se “Kasak”
achha hota ki tera “Intezar” tujhme hi kahin Samaayah hota… !

Intezar

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Re: <>*Bas chal diya*<>

«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2010, 06:55:00 AM »

WAH KYA BAAT HAI KASAK....DIL KI JI....

CHALTE CHALTE BEECH RAHA MEIN ISTARAH MERA SAATH CHOD DIYA
JAANKAR BHI ANJAAN BANGAYE HAATH CHODKAR "BAS CHAL DIYA"..


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