Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha...(Shihab) -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

KOYAL46

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«Reply #15 on: December 26, 2010, 04:27:13 PM »

good work ji...daad kabool kijiye....


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha...(Shihab)

«Reply #16 on: December 26, 2010, 07:27:51 PM »

Shihab Sahab Aadaab!

Janab ke kalaam per deri se nazar padi....
Takheer se aane ke liye mazarrat chahte hai...

Janab kafi dilfareb ahsaas bayaaN kiye hai..
Sab khairiyat to hai naa... ?
Ummid hai khairiyat se hoNgi...

Chaliye aapki kalaam per aate hai...

Quote from: Shihab on December 11, 2010, 08:00:39 PM

Aasman Se Koi Taara Chamak Kar , Phir Toot Gaya
Nam Aankhon Se Ek Qatra Aansu , Aur Chhoot Gaya.

Kafi achcha sher kaha hai janab.. behad shayarana andaaz raha daad ...

Dhundle Se Lafzo.n Mein Likha Hua Tha Jo Kahin
Woh Be-matlab Kaagaz Sa Rishta , Aakhir Toot Gaya.

Sher ka khayaal behad umdaa hai janab...
Par aur bhi khub sher ban sakta tha yeH...
Jaise pahele misre meiN aapne kaha " dhundle se lafzoN meiN likha tha jo kahiN" means Kagaz per hi likha tha samjh lete hai..
To duje line meiN aapne bayaani meiN gadbad kar dii..
WOh be-matlab kagaz sa rishta " kahne ke bajaay youN kahte to kaisa lagta dekhiye..

"Woh Be-matlab sa rishta kagaz se aakhir toot gaya"

Sochta Tha Ki Zindagi Bas Tere Saath Hi Guzar Jaaye
Magar Pura Hone Se Pahle Hi Yeh Khwaab , Toot Gaya.

Achcha sher hai daad.... Aksar yehi hota hai....

Aur Kya Karta Mein Us se Apni Barbaadi ka Gila , Shihab!
Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha Toot Gaya So Toot Gaya.

Waah janab waah yeH sher behad khoob kaha aapne dil se daad hazir hai...

~Shihab~

behad achchi kalaam kahi janab ...
Dil ki zameeN phir se gili ho gayi...

Dard se door hokar bhi kahaaN jayeNge
JahaaN jayeNge wahaaN dard hi payeNge

Likhate rahiye ....
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.....


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-Pari-

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Re: Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha...(Shihab)

«Reply #17 on: December 26, 2010, 11:13:57 PM »

Ek choti si Khoshish..Umeed hai Ap jaise Bade Shayar Ki Nazro Main Kabool Hogi..

Badi Mushkil Ne Usne Mujhe Bhulaya Hoga
Har Ahat Ne Use Meri Yaad Se Milaya Hoga..

Jaga Hoga Wo Bhi Raat Raat Mujhe Sochte
Najane Kaise Usne Apne Dil Ko Behlaya Hoga..

Ranjishein Hazaron Ki Hongi Usne Apne Apse
Jab Bhi Naam mera Labon Pe Uske Aya Hoga..

Kya Beeta Hoga Uske Kaleeje Par, Jab Bhi
Mujhpar Likhi Har Nazm Ko Usne Jalaya Hoga..

Idhar Hum Bhi Tadapte Hain Uski Yaad Main
Isi Khayal Ne To Usse Har Pal Sataya Hoga..

Piyein Honge Ansun Apne Usne Zeher Jaise
Dil ki Aag Ko Usne Kuch Istarh Bhujaya Hoga..

Zikar Mera Hone Par Utha Hoga Tufaan Koi
Pher Kar Chehra Usne Dard Yu Chupaya Hoga..

Di Hogi Mehfil Main Misaal.e.Mohobbat Kisine
Soch Kar Mujhko Wo Halke Se Muskuraya Hoga..

-Pari-


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha...(Shihab)

«Reply #18 on: December 27, 2010, 12:14:27 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on December 11, 2010, 08:00:39 PM

Aasman Se Koi Taara Chamak Kar , Phir Toot Gaya
Nam Aankhon Se Ek Qatra Aansu , Aur Chhoot Gaya.

Dhundle Se Lafzo.n Mein Likha Hua Tha Jo Kahin
Woh Be-matlab Kaagaz Sa Rishta , Aakhir Toot Gaya.

Sochta Tha Ki Zindagi Bas Tere Saath Hi Guzar Jaaye
Magar Pura Hone Se Pahle Hi Yeh Khwaab , Toot Gaya.

Aur Kya Karta Mein Us se Apni Barbaadi Gila , Shihab!
Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha Toot Gaya So Toot Gaya.

~Shihab~

Bahut khoob shihab ji...


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha...(Shihab)

«Reply #19 on: December 27, 2010, 12:15:18 PM »

Quote from: -Pari- on December 26, 2010, 11:13:57 PM

Behetareen koshish rahi apki pari ji..bahut khoob...


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-Pari-

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Re: Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha...(Shihab)

«Reply #20 on: December 27, 2010, 03:23:54 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on December 27, 2010, 11:47:32 AM

Mohtarma Par Ji Sabse Pahle To Aapka
Bahut Bahut Shukariya Izzat Afzaii Ke Liye.
Par Main Koi Shayaer Nahi Hun Ji Bas Kyon Ki
Shayer Hazraat Ki Soch Ki Koi Bhi Had Nahi Hoti
Aur Jahan Tak Mera Sawaal Hai Meri Soch Ik Had Tak
Bandi Hui Hai Isske Aage Mein Chahkar Bhi Nahi Likh Pata
So Plz Sirf Shihab Bulaaye Yeh Shayer Wayer Nahi Ji
Ab Rahi Baat Aapke Likhne Ki To Kya Kahen Ji Aapki
Yeh Koshish Hume Behad Hi Pasand Aayi Hai Ji
Dil Ke Ehsaasaat Ko Lafzon Ki Shaql Mein Bade Hi
Khoobsurat Andaz Mein Aapne Pesh Kiya Hai.Bahut Khub Ji
Abhi Ke Liye Maafi Chahta Hun Main Jaise Hi Kuch Bana
Jarur Aapki Nazar Karunga Main. Tab TaK Khush Rahiye

Apna Aur Apno Ka Khayal Rakhiye...

~Shihab~

Haye rabba..Inni Vadi Vadi Batein...Ab Dnt think ke main apki aur tareef karne wali hu ok.. tongue3

Chalo Ab Ap b kuch Likho..
waise Thank u Dumbo.. Winking


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-Pari-

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Re: Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha...(Shihab)

«Reply #21 on: December 27, 2010, 03:24:46 PM »

Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 27, 2010, 12:15:18 PM

Behetareen koshish rahi apki pari ji..bahut khoob...

Shukriya ji Huzoor


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