bas gai dil mein.......

by laaiba on August 23, 2012, 04:48:43 PM
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        kaisee ik hairaane bas gai dil mein
        dasht see veeraanee bas gai dil mein

        mai.n to mil kar bhoo.l gai thee lekin
         yaa.d ik puuraani bas gai dil mein...

         aaj bhi kehtaa rahaa woh muujhey...
        ik soorat anjaani bas gai dil mein...

        naa.m uss kaa jo likhaa tha dil par
         khuushboo suhaanee bas gai dil mein

        aa zaraa deikh k teire biinaa...
        bey sarao saamaani bas gai dil mein..

laaiba ali

        
        
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2012, 05:07:44 PM »
boht khub laiba ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2012, 05:51:28 PM »
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
behad umda ghazal kahi hai aapne..
dhero mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2012, 07:16:54 PM »
Quote from: saahill on August 23, 2012, 05:07:44 PM
boht khub laiba ji
bohat shukria saahil ji....
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2012, 07:17:18 PM »
Quote from: mkv on August 23, 2012, 05:51:28 PM
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
behad umda ghazal kahi hai aapne..
dhero mubaarakbaad
bohat shukria aapka mkv ji.....
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2012, 12:52:34 AM »
waah waah laaiba ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2012, 01:00:53 AM »
BAhut Khub Laaiba Ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2012, 01:13:18 AM »
bahut badhiya laibaji
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2012, 04:28:54 AM »
bahut khoob,laiba ji.mukammal ghazal ka andaz hai aap ke kalaam mein.bahut bahut mubarakbad.
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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2012, 09:02:19 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on August 24, 2012, 12:52:34 AM
waah waah laaiba ji bahut khoob
bohat bohat shukria aapka....
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«Reply #10 on: August 24, 2012, 09:02:49 AM »
Quote from: Sanjeev kash on August 24, 2012, 01:00:53 AM
BAhut Khub Laaiba Ji
bohat shukria aapka kash ji....
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«Reply #11 on: August 24, 2012, 09:03:18 AM »
Quote from: nandbahu on August 24, 2012, 01:13:18 AM
bahut badhiya laibaji
bohat shukria....
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2012, 09:04:02 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on August 24, 2012, 04:28:54 AM
bahut khoob,laiba ji.mukammal ghazal ka andaz hai aap ke kalaam mein.bahut bahut mubarakbad.
bohat bohat shukria aapka aaki raaye bohat muqadam hy hamare liye.......
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«Reply #13 on: August 24, 2012, 12:45:56 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Laaiba ji....!!!
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«Reply #14 on: August 24, 2012, 12:54:14 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on August 23, 2012, 04:48:43 PM

        kaisee ik hairaane bas gai dil mein
        dasht see veeraanee bas gai dil mein

        mai.n to mil kar bhoo.l gai thee lekin
         yaa.d ik puuraani bas gai dil mein...

         aaj bhi kehtaa rahaa woh muujhey...
        ik soorat anjaani bas gai dil mein...

        naa.m uss kaa jo likhaa tha dil par
         khuushboo suhaanee bas gai dil mein

        aa zaraa deikh k teire biinaa...
        bey sarao saamaani bas gai dil mein..

laaiba ali

       
       
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