bas gai dil mein.......

by laaiba on August 23, 2012, 04:48:43 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 24, 2012, 02:03:07 PM »

        kaisee ik hairaane bas gai dil mein
        dasht see veeraanee bas gai dil mein

kya matlaa hai waah bahut hi khoob. bahut hi umdaa khyal ko umdaa tareeke se adaaa kiyaa hai....... bahut khoob


        mai.n to mil kar bhoo.l gai thee lekin
         yaa.d ik puuraani bas gai dil mein...

ye maine is forum pe sabse acha sher padha hai ......... impressed ...... bahut khoob ......... kyaa khayal kya girah ... nihayti khoobsurat

         aaj bhi kehtaa rahaa woh muujhey...
        ik soorat anjaani bas gai dil mein...

Usual Smile
        naa.m uss kaa jo likhaa tha dil par
         khuushboo suhaanee bas gai dil mein

Usual Smile
        aa zaraa deikh k teire biinaa...
        bey sarao saamaani bas gai dil mein..
khoob bahut acha oolaa to olla saani saani hai

bahut khoob...


laaiba ali. ji bahut acha likhti hai aap/.. thoda sa behr ka masala laga . shayed mai hi sahis e nahi dekh paya huN ..

hatss of 2 u

       
       
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«Reply #16 on: August 24, 2012, 03:00:55 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Laaiba ji....!!!
bohat bohat shukria aapka...
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«Reply #17 on: September 04, 2012, 11:23:00 AM »

a se badhiya shayer ki hosla afzai ka shookria janumanu ji
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