Bas jee raha hoon ...

by Just_Hate_Love on November 01, 2007, 01:27:43 PM
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Bas jee raha hoon ek ummeed ke saath,
Bas jee raha hoon ek toote dil ke saath,
Kisika saath nahi aur koi baat nahi,
Bas jee raha hoon ek tanhaai ke saath,
Khush na rakh paaya kisiko main,
Bas jee raha hoon ek isi gum ke saath,
Roothna-manana aur phir juda ho jana,
Bas jee raha hoon ek unhi lamho ke saath,
Bani rahe wo taaviz meri bhale door hi sahi,
Bas jee raha hoon ek usi dua ke saath,
Bas jee raha hoon ek aatm-vishwaas ke saath,
Bas jee raha hoon main meri parchhai ke saath ...
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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2007, 01:30:53 PM »
wah kaya baat hai JHL ji bahoot khob.. jalad hi wapis akar kuch likhugi...
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2007, 01:40:06 PM »
Thanks a lot both of u ...
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2007, 01:18:58 PM »
Bahoot Hi Accha Likha Hai Aap Ne,.
JHL Ji And Majid Bhai,.
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«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2007, 11:53:25 AM »
Thanks a lot Janasheen for appreciation ...
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2007, 05:29:25 PM »
Good one Majid!!
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2007, 01:37:22 PM »
You ARE aLways Welcome Dear
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«Reply #7 on: November 11, 2007, 02:09:37 AM »
Bohat khoob JHL & Majid...
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«Reply #8 on: November 15, 2007, 03:48:33 PM »
Bohot khoob JHL....and Majid aapne bhi bohot achi poem share ki hai !
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«Reply #9 on: November 21, 2007, 07:41:14 PM »
Thanks a lot Aryan and Talat for appreciation ...
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