Bas jee raha hoon ...

by Just_Hate_Love on November 01, 2007, 01:27:43 PM

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Just_Hate_Love

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Bas jee raha hoon ek ummeed ke saath,
Bas jee raha hoon ek toote dil ke saath,
Kisika saath nahi aur koi baat nahi,
Bas jee raha hoon ek tanhaai ke saath,
Khush na rakh paaya kisiko main,
Bas jee raha hoon ek isi gum ke saath,
Roothna-manana aur phir juda ho jana,
Bas jee raha hoon ek unhi lamho ke saath,
Bani rahe wo taaviz meri bhale door hi sahi,
Bas jee raha hoon ek usi dua ke saath,
Bas jee raha hoon ek aatm-vishwaas ke saath,
Bas jee raha hoon main meri parchhai ke saath ...


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Pooja

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Bas jee raha hoon ...

«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2007, 01:30:53 PM »

wah kaya baat hai JHL ji bahoot khob.. jalad hi wapis akar kuch likhugi...


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Just_Hate_Love

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Bas jee raha hoon ...

«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2007, 01:40:06 PM »

Thanks a lot both of u ...


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Bas jee raha hoon ...

«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2007, 01:18:58 PM »

Bahoot Hi Accha Likha Hai Aap Ne,.
JHL Ji And Majid Bhai,.


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Just_Hate_Love

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Bas jee raha hoon ...

«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2007, 11:53:25 AM »

Thanks a lot Janasheen for appreciation ...


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Pooja

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Bas jee raha hoon ...

«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2007, 05:29:25 PM »

Good one Majid!!


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Azeem Azaad

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Bas jee raha hoon ...

«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2007, 01:37:22 PM »

You ARE aLways Welcome Dear


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Aryaan

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Bas jee raha hoon ...

«Reply #7 on: November 11, 2007, 02:09:37 AM »

Bohat khoob JHL & Majid...


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Talat

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Bas jee raha hoon ...

«Reply #8 on: November 15, 2007, 03:48:33 PM »

Bohot khoob JHL....and Majid aapne bhi bohot achi poem share ki hai !


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Just_Hate_Love

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Bas jee raha hoon ...

«Reply #9 on: November 21, 2007, 07:41:14 PM »

Thanks a lot Aryan and Talat for appreciation ...


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