Bas kisi tarah se jiye ja raha hu

by redwhitegang on July 07, 2006, 08:35:13 PM
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Bas kisi tarah se jiye ja raha hu
Tere naam ka jam piye ja raha hu
Tune hamesa sath renka wada kiya tha
Jisse tu tod kar ja rahi hai
Mere is jindagii ki nao chala hii nahi ke
Tu to isse majhdhar me chod kar ja rahii hai
Aab to hamme aur koi sahara bh nahi
Malum na chala kya khata hui ,
ke kyun tu muh modd kar ja rahii hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2006, 09:37:12 PM »
mu modh kar chala gaya hai jane wala,.,
dil torh kar chala gaya hai dilwala

mangthi hoon dua rabse
saza-e-maut dede..mujhe dena wala :D:D
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2006, 03:04:04 AM »
bahut khoob shahid and Anjani ..............

woh hamse kuch asie khafa ho gaye
jaise tan se koi jaan  juda  ho jaaye

kare they jo vaade unhone zindagi bhar saath nibhaane ke
aaj ek jara si taqarar per woh sab faana ho gaye
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2006, 04:26:19 AM »
shukriya ranz-na and anjani ji :D
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2006, 07:35:28 AM »
Bahoot Khoob RW, Ranjana And Anjani Ji,...

Tu Rehne Waali Mehlon Ki,Main Ek Taswee Gurbat Ki,..
Tere Nazron Mein Kya Hogi,Kadar Meri Mohabbat Ki,..

Rishte Tord Do Tum Sare,Mera Dil Mujhko De Do Tum,..
Mohabbat Aapki Duniya Mein,Hai Mandi Tijaarat Ki,..

Main Tere Sheher Se Bhi Tord Doonga Apna Rishta,..
Ke Maine Dekhli Zaleem,Haddein Teri Sharafat Ki,..

Jahan Phoolon Mein Bhi Milti Hai Khushboo Bewafaai Ki,..
Khadi Dekhi Hai Raahon Mein,Deewaarein Maine Nafrat ki,..

Main Sehraaon Mein Lekar Aagaya Hoon Zindagi apni,..
Suni Hai Dukh Bhari Jabse, Kahaani Maine Mohabbat Ki,...
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2006, 08:02:29 AM »
Quote from: "Jaanasheen"
Bahoot Khoob RW, Ranjana And Anjani Ji,...

Tu Rehne Waali Mehlon Ki,Main Ek Taswee Gurbat Ki,..
Tere Nazron Mein Kya Hogi,Kadar Meri Mohabbat Ki,..

Rishte Tord Do Tum Sare,Mera Dil Mujhko De Do Tum,..
Mohabbat Aapki Duniya Mein,Hai Mandi Tijaarat Ki,..

Main Tere Sheher Se Bhi Tord Doonga Apna Rishta,..
Ke Maine Dekhli Zaleem,Haddein Teri Sharafat Ki,..

Jahan Phoolon Mein Bhi Milti Hai Khushboo Bewafaai Ki,..
Khadi Dekhi Hai Raahon Mein,Deewaarein Maine Nafrat ki,..

Main Sehraaon Mein Lekar Aagaya Hoon Zindagi apni,..
Suni Hai Dukh Bhari Jabse, Kahaani Maine Mohabbat Ki,...

kya baat hain Jaanasheen ji.......

Kash jo tune hamme pehchana hota
To aab sirf hamara hi afsana hota,waise bhi
Teri nafrat ko mohabbat me badal ne ka hoonar ham jante hai
Bewafon ko to ham baas ek nazar me ham pehchante hai
Tu nahi hai unme se jo daga de jai
Tujhe to ham khud se bhi behtar pehchante hai
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2006, 08:26:46 AM »
Shukriya RW,..

Pehanchaan Gaya Main Tumhe Aur Is Zamaane Ko,..
Is Liye Dil Nahi Karta Ab Kisi Aur Se Dil Lagaane Ko,..

Tumne Samjha Hume Kanta Apni Raah Ka "Jaanasheen",..
Isliye Nahi Aata Ab Main Tumhe Khwaabon Mein Sataane Ko,..

Khuda Khush Rakhe Tumhe,Ke Tumne Di Hai Hume Ruswaai Zamaane Ki,..
Ab Yahi Dua Hai Khuda Se Ki De Wo Himmat Ab Mujhe Gham Sehkar Muskraane Ko,..

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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2006, 09:16:34 AM »
Quote from: "Jaanasheen"
Shukriya RW,..

Pehanchaan Gaya Main Tumhe Aur Is Zamaane Ko,..
Is Liye Dil Nahi Karta Ab Kisi Aur Se Dil Lagaane Ko,..

Tumne Samjha Hume Kanta Apni Raah Ka "Jaanasheen",..
Isliye Nahi Aata Ab Main Tumhe Khwaabon Mein Sataane Ko,..

Khuda Khush Rakhe Tumhe,Ke Tumne Di Hai Hume Ruswaai Zamaane Ki,..
Ab Yahi Dua Hai Khuda Se Ki De Wo Himmat Ab Mujhe Gham Sehkar Muskraane Ko,..

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Too good yaar! :D

Zaroor tum takalluf ko bhii iKhlaas samajhate hoge "Jaanasheen"
dost hotaa nahiin har haath milaane vaala
Tum kis se daman choda na chah rahe ho
Ham jaisa na phir paouge koi chahne wala......
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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2006, 09:24:16 AM »
Shukriya Bhai,..
Aur Bahoot Khoob..

Chahne Waalon Par Aitabaar Karke Hi, Humne Ye Chotein Khaai Hai,..
Yaad Karte Hi Dekho Un Zakhmon Ko, Aankh Meri Bhar Aai Hai,..

App Kehte Ho Hume Bewafaa Is Baat Ka Gham Nahi Hume,..
Tum Kya Jaano "Jaanasheen" Humne Kis Kadar Wafaa Nibhaai Hai,..

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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2006, 02:10:34 AM »
bahot khoob Azeem and Shahid ..............bahut sunder likha aap dono ne
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«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2006, 09:14:05 AM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
bahot khoob Azeem and Shahid ..............bahut sunder likha aap dono ne


Shukriya Ranjana Sis,..
Apne Kuch Likha Nahi,..
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2006, 07:54:10 PM »
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Quote from: "ranjana"
bahot khoob Azeem and Shahid ..............bahut sunder likha aap dono ne


Shukriya Ranjana Sis,..
Apne Kuch Likha Nahi,..

sahii kaha jaanasheen!..ranz-na dear aaj kal faki baaz ho gayii hai.. tongue3
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«Reply #12 on: July 13, 2006, 02:20:03 AM »
aap dono ne itna accha likha thaa ki likhne ki himmat hi nahi hui... Usual Smile

koshish karti hun..... Usual Smile

yeh dil hai masoom sheeshe  sa
koi darar na ismein na aane dijiye
jo bhi pal mile khushi ke  dosti mein
inhe samet lo mutthi mein ,dil mein
inko haath se yun na bekaar jaane dijiye
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«Reply #13 on: July 14, 2006, 03:22:30 PM »
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aap dono ne itna accha likha thaa ki likhne ki himmat hi nahi hui... Usual Smile

koshish karti hun..... Usual Smile

yeh dil hai masoom sheeshe  sa
koi darar na ismein na aane dijiye
jo bhi pal mile khushi ke  dosti mein
inhe samet lo mutthi mein ,dil mein
inko haath se yun na bekaar jaane dijiye

Bahoot Khoob Ranjana Sis,..

Dil Sheeshe Se Bhi Nazook Hai,..
Par Naaz Nahi Karta,..
Dil Toot Hai Phir Bhi Dekho,..
Ye Awaaz Nahi Karta,..
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«Reply #14 on: July 15, 2006, 03:08:45 AM »
dil tutata hai jab toh apne dard ko kuch yun chhipa leta hai
kabhi geeto mein kabhi gazalo mein khud ko dhaal leta hai
jab bhi aati hai yaad unki baate aur mulakaate  toh
yeh dard woh apne ashqo mein bhi baha leta hai
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