********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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tujhe pyaar kiya toot kar,teri chahat main sab bhula diya
ta ummra aur koi nahin bas yeh khata kii maine

tere sang dekhi mohabbat kii galiyan, ghooma wahan tafreeh kii
aur aaj but kii nigaho se dekhi duniya, khud ko yeh saza di maine

teri tadap thi ya tujhe paane ka junoon tha mujh par
ab iska gila nahin kyun tujhse wafa kii maine

mujhe aetbaar tha , tu mujhe ansuna bhi kar degi
isliye honth si liye koi sargoshi bhi na kii maine

tujhe main kya kahoon teri khata kya thi mohabbat k khel main
bas tujhe yaad rakha har pal , bas yeh aakhiri khata kii maine


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2009, 10:04:24 AM »

Bohat khoob Salil..


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diya786

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2009, 10:22:10 AM »

keep going Salil ji
too good
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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2009, 10:54:36 AM »

BOhat Achche Salil Bhai, Nice One. Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.


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Talat

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2009, 11:42:24 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 09, 2009, 10:01:30 AM

Bohot Khoob Salil, aaj bohot din baad dekha.....Good work.


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Tanha(Saurabh)

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2009, 11:48:36 AM »

bohat pyaara, kya kaha aapne bohat khoob salil ji ......
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deepika_divya

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2009, 11:51:28 AM »

Hey! salil Too gud dude. Very Good lines....


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salil2002

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2009, 07:44:17 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 09, 2009, 10:04:24 AM

Bohat khoob Salil..

Quote from: diya786 on April 09, 2009, 10:22:10 AM

keep going Salil ji
too good
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shukriya sajid bhai and diya ji


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salil2002

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2009, 07:45:14 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 09, 2009, 10:54:36 AM

BOhat Achche Salil Bhai, Nice One. Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

Quote from: Celmira on April 09, 2009, 11:42:24 AM

Bohot Khoob Salil, aaj bohot din baad dekha.....Good work.

shukriya janasheen bhai and talat di....ab paper start hone wale hai isliye kam kar diya hai sis..........


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salil2002

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2009, 07:47:11 AM »

Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on April 09, 2009, 11:48:36 AM

bohat pyaara, kya kaha aapne bohat khoob salil ji ......
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Quote from: Sophi on April 09, 2009, 11:51:28 AM

Hey! salil Too gud dude. Very Good lines....

thnks sophi and tanha,,,,,,,,,

haan ek aarzoo kar loon main jo izazat do mujhe
mere maut k badle tujhe zindgi naseeb ho


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_Vicky_

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2009, 05:01:02 PM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 09, 2009, 10:01:30 AM

Bahut Bahut Khooooooob SALIL Bro... Kamaal ke Alfaaz likhe hain aapne..!! Waqai Dard Ko Behad Khubsoorati se Lafzon me Dhaala hai aapne..!! Great Work.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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salil2002

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2009, 11:27:37 AM »

Quote from: Mann on April 10, 2009, 05:01:02 PM

Bahut Bahut Khooooooob SALIL Bro... Kamaal ke Alfaaz likhe hain aapne..!! Waqai Dard Ko Behad Khubsoorati se Lafzon me Dhaala hai aapne..!! Great Work.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**

shukriya vicky bhai........par aapne kuch kaha nahin yahan par


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k.shael

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2009, 11:39:35 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 09, 2009, 10:01:30 AM

First of all sorry bahut der baad dhayan gaya iss topic par,

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And bahut khoob likha hai aapne salil ji, really har line dard me doob ke likhi hai...

So true..

Shally.


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_Vicky_

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2009, 05:28:32 PM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 11, 2009, 11:27:37 AM

shukriya vicky bhai........par aapne kuch kaha nahin yahan par

AB Kya Likhe Mere Dost.. Dard Itna hai ki Kaagaz Me Samaata hi Nahi..!! Koshish karta Hoon..!!

Wo Kahate The Humse, Tumhe Jaan Se Zyada Chahte Hain,
Aaj Jaan Lekar Bhi Humaari, Humen Bewafa Kahe Jate Hain..

**~** Mann **~**


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jasbirsingh

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Re: ********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2009, 06:34:52 PM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 09, 2009, 10:01:30 AM

wah wah wah, bahut khoob salil, wah

jasbir singh


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