<>*Batate bhi to kaise*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 18, 2010, 04:43:28 AM
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<>*Batate bhi to kaise*<>


Teri muskaan hum ekhud se zyada aziz hai ee dost
Tu hi bata tujhse hum ruthe  rahen bhi to kaise

Ki hai mahobbat humne bepanaah unse ee sanam
Milegi wafa badle me iski umeed rakhen bhi to kaise

Na dikha paye hum ashk lahu k behte hain jo dil se
Hain itne bebas wo unhe aur hum sataye bhi to kaise

Ye duriyan to bani thi sirf kami ka ehsaas dilane k liye
Tum kuch na samjh paye to ab hum samjhaye bhi to kaise

Kehte rahe tum k main bas tumhari hi hun ee sanam
Hum khud ko aapki amanat kehte rahe ye batate bhi to kaise…
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2010, 07:22:37 AM »
Wah kya baat hai Anamika Ji
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2010, 08:41:11 AM »
Hum itne bhi durr nahi they ki tum bataa nahi sake
Kyu mann he mann sochte rahe tum bata na sake

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 18, 2010, 04:43:28 AM
<>*Batate bhi to kaise*<>


Teri muskaan hum ekhud se zyada aziz hai ee dost
Tu hi bata tujhse hum ruthe  rahen bhi to kaise

Ki hai mahobbat humne bepanaah unse ee sanam
Milegi wafa badle me iski umeed rakhen bhi to kaise

Na dikha paye hum ashk lahu k behte hain jo dil se
Hain itne bebas wo unhe aur hum sataye bhi to kaise

Ye duriyan to bani thi sirf kami ka ehsaas dilane k liye
Tum kuch na samjh paye to ab hum samjhaye bhi to kaise

Kehte rahe tum k main bas tumhari hi hun ee sanam
Hum khud ko aapki amanat kehte rahe ye batate bhi to kaise…
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 18, 2010, 04:43:28 AM
<>*Batate bhi to kaise*<>


Teri muskaan hum ekhud se zyada aziz hai ee dost
Tu hi bata tujhse hum ruthe  rahen bhi to kaise

Ki hai mahobbat humne bepanaah unse ee sanam
Milegi wafa badle me iski umeed rakhen bhi to kaise

Na dikha paye hum ashk lahu k behte hain jo dil se
Hain itne bebas wo unhe aur hum sataye bhi to kaise

Ye duriyan to bani thi sirf kami ka ehsaas dilane k liye
Tum kuch na samjh paye to ab hum samjhaye bhi to kaise

Kehte rahe tum k main bas tumhari hi hun ee sanam
Hum khud ko aapki amanat kehte rahe ye batate bhi to kaise…
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2010, 08:55:14 AM »
khud se uljhe rahe hum apne hi jazbaaton me
kuch na tha kehne ko isliye chhupate hi arhe

Quote from: ANAAM on October 18, 2010, 08:41:11 AM
Hum itne bhi durr nahi they ki tum bataa nahi sake
Kyu mann he mann sochte rahe tum bata na sake
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2010, 09:07:53 AM »
bataa dete tou yoon na ulajhte tum
har uljhan ko suljhate kasamse hum
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 18, 2010, 08:55:14 AM
khud se uljhe rahe hum apne hi jazbaaton me
kuch na tha kehne ko isliye chhupate hi arhe
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2010, 09:09:42 AM »
gar sulajh jati har uljhan hamari
yun na tab hume sata paate tum
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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2010, 09:13:51 AM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 18, 2010, 04:43:28 AM
<>*Batate bhi to kaise*<>


Teri muskaan hum ekhud se zyada aziz hai ee dost
Tu hi bata tujhse hum ruthe  rahen bhi to kaise

would have been much better...but still very good...

Ki hai mahobbat humne bepanaah unse ee sanam
Milegi wafa badle me iski umeed rakhen bhi to kaise

Na dikha paye hum ashk lahu k behte hain jo dil se
Hain itne bebas wo unhe aur hum sataye bhi to kaise

ye wala bahut achha tha~

Ye duriyan to bani thi sirf kami ka ehsaas dilane k liye
Tum kuch na samjh paye to ab hum samjhaye bhi to kaise

eisa laga jaise lne ko kheecha ho apne......hahaha but goody he~

Kehte rahe tum k main bas tumhari hi hun ee sanam
Hum khud ko aapki amanat kehte rahe ye batate bhi to kaise…

fir wahi... kheechaa heee yahan bhi~

achhi lagi apki peshkash par is bar kuchh kuchh idhar udhar laga so wahi likh diya~
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2010, 01:51:38 PM »
ham agar dur bhi ho jayen to dhadkano ko bata dena
tumhari dhadkano me sanam hamari jaan basti hai
kabhi na ruth na dur ho jana na ham se
tumhari aankhon me dhundh lena, meri takdir basti hai
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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2010, 02:37:32 PM »
Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 18, 2010, 09:13:51 AM
achhi lagi apki peshkash par is bar kuchh kuchh idhar udhar laga so wahi likh diya~

ab to mujhe bhi kuch khincha khincha lag raha hai ye...
well try karungi edit karne ka....
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2010, 02:41:38 PM »
Bahaut bahaut khoob Anamika di, Anaam jee aur Rahi jee..!
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 18, 2010, 04:39:23 PM »
KasaK jee Aadaab!

Kafi achche ahsaas o khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne..
kuch aik ahsaas behad umdaa raheN jee daad daad daad..... 


Likhate rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 18, 2010, 04:43:28 AM
<>*Batate bhi to kaise*<>


Teri muskaan hum ekhud se zyada aziz hai ee dost
Tu hi bata tujhse hum ruthe  rahen bhi to kaise

Ki hai mahobbat humne bepanaah unse ee sanam
Milegi wafa badle me iski umeed rakhen bhi to kaise

Na dikha paye hum ashk lahu k behte hain jo dil se
Hain itne bebas wo unhe aur hum sataye bhi to kaise

Ye duriyan to bani thi sirf kami ka ehsaas dilane k liye
Tum kuch na samjh paye to ab hum samjhaye bhi to kaise

Kehte rahe tum k main bas tumhari hi hun ee sanam
Hum khud ko aapki amanat kehte rahe ye batate bhi to kaise…
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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2010, 08:43:22 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut achcha likha hai aapne ...

kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai aapke is post ke jawaab me... aajkal kuch ban nahi raha hai mujhse pata nahi kyun... shayad aapko ye utni achchi na lage.. par ban gaya to socha post kar hi dun...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 18, 2010, 04:43:28 AM
<>*Batate bhi to kaise*<>


Teri muskaan hum ekhud se zyada aziz hai ee dost
Tu hi bata tujhse hum ruthe  rahen bhi to kaise


na roothe ho na kabhi rooth paaoge humse tum,
hamaari ho hamaari hi banke reh jaaoge tum,

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 18, 2010, 04:43:28 AM
Ki hai mahobbat humne bepanaah unse ee sanam
Milegi wafa badle me iski umeed rakhen bhi to kaise

wafaa ki ummeed to gairon se ki jaati hai yahaan,
meri wafaadaari ko to bas dekhte reh jaaoge tum,

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 18, 2010, 04:43:28 AM
Na dikha paye hum ashk lahu k behte hain jo dil se
Hain itne bebas wo unhe aur hum sataye bhi to kaise

behte aansoo chhupe nahi hain meri aankhon se,
ek baar mere ban jaao to bas muskuraaoge tum,

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 18, 2010, 04:43:28 AM
Ye duriyan to bani thi sirf kami ka ehsaas dilane k liye
Tum kuch na samjh paye to ab hum samjhaye bhi to kaise

duur tumse hoke bhi duur nahi hoon ek pal ke liye,
mere hone ke ehsaas ko bolo kaise samajh paaoge tum,

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 18, 2010, 04:43:28 AM
Kehte rahe tum k main bas tumhari hi hun ee sanam
Hum khud ko aapki amanat kehte rahe ye batate bhi to kaise…


kehne ki jarurat nahi kabhi tumhe ki tum meri ho,
"Kasak" to "Hriday" ki hoti hai aur Hriday me hi bas jaaoge tum...
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«Reply #12 on: October 19, 2010, 08:58:53 AM »
oyeeeeee hoyeeeeeeeeee
kya baat hai ji...bhttttttttt hi mastam likha hai aapne kapil.....maza aagaya ye style dekh ke.....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

na roothe ho na kabhi rooth paaoge humse tum,
hamaari ho hamaari hi banke reh jaaoge tum,

ruthgaye tumse to na kabhi mana paoge tum
na satana hume kabhi chale gaye to pachhtaoge tum

wafaa ki ummeed to gairon se ki jaati hai yahaan,
meri wafaadaari ko to bas dekhte reh jaaoge tum,

bht suni hai batein humne wafa aur pyaar ki
dekhte hain iss wafa ki rasmon ko kitna nibhaoge tum

behte aansoo chhupe nahi hain meri aankhon se,
ek baar mere ban jaao to bas muskuraaoge tum,

tumhare banne me hi to sau sitam hain ee humdum
jab honge tere kareeb to fir zamane se gharaoge tum

duur tumse hoke bhi duur nahi hoon ek pal ke liye,
mere hone ke ehsaas ko bolo kaise samajh paaoge tum,

samjhte hain hum tumhare pyaar tumhare ehsaas ko
lekin jo hota hai dil me idhar kya wo mehsus kar paoge tum

kehne ki jarurat nahi kabhi tumhe ki tum meri ho,
"Kasak" to "Hriday" ki hoti hai aur Hriday me hi bas jaaoge tum...

kasak to uthti hai tabhi Hriday me jab dard ki inteha ho
kasak hi na hogi hriday me to fir sada hi muskuraoge tum…!!!
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«Reply #13 on: October 19, 2010, 09:18:54 AM »
bas aap khush rahiye yahi chaahta hoon hamesha.. aapke mood ki battery down rehti hai to achcha achcha sa nahi lagta kuch... aur jawaab me jo aapne likha hai .. waah.. kya kehne...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



ruthgaye tumse to na kabhi mana paoge tum
na satana hume kabhi chale gaye to pachhtaoge tum

roothna na humse kabhi ki tumhe dekh dekh jeete hain hum,
jaana na dur kabhi humse ki tadap ke reh jaayenge hum,



bht suni hai batein humne wafa aur pyaar ki
dekhte hain iss wafa ki rasmon ko kitna nibhaoge tum

har waada nibhayene aur tumhe khud se zyaaada chaahenge hum,
wafa apni nibhaane ke liye kaaton par bhi chal jaayenge hum,



tumhare banne me hi to sau sitam hain ee humdum
jab honge tere kareeb to fir zamane se gharaoge tum

meri wajah se tumhe dard hai to tumse dur chale jaayenge hum,
kabhi ghabra bhi gaye to tumhaare hi seene se lag jaayenge hum,



samjhte hain hum tumhare pyaar tumhare ehsaas ko
lekin jo hota hai dil me idhar kya wo mehsus kar paoge tum

uth_ti hai mere Hriday me pyaar ki lahar kabhi zyaada kabhi kam,
dil me agar koi toofan bhi ho tumhaare to usse takra jaayenge hum,



kasak to uthti hai tabhi Hriday me jab dard ki inteha ho
kasak hi na hogi hriday me to fir sada hi muskuraoge tum…!!!

Kasak ko Hriday me hamesha rakhne ke liye dard ke samundar me doob jayenge hum,
tab to "Kasak" uthegi is "Hriday" me aur tumhe dil me chhupaake mar jaayenge hum....
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