be asar mohabat

by rashmisangeeta on May 21, 2013, 07:49:07 PM
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zindgaani be asar si ho gaii hai
har kahaani be asar si ho gaii hai

har ghadDi kayon aajmaate o sakha tum
aajmaanii be asar si ho gaii hai

baantne chaahe tere jo dard hum dum
meharbaani be asar si ho gaii hai

kyon na mujh ko samajh paate sahajta se
akaldaani be asar si ho gaii hai

lipat jaauN dard se main jakham kha looN
dard-daani be asar si ho gaii hai

aarzoo thi do kadam mil ke chalenge
arazdaani be asar si ho gaii hai

tum n "rashmi" ko kabhi pahchhaan paaye
har viyaani be asar si ho gaii hai
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2013, 08:30:41 PM »
zindgaani be asar si ho gaii hai
har kahaani be asar si ho gaii hai

har ghadDi kayon aajmaate o sakha tum
aajmaanii be asar si ho gaii hai

baantne chaahe tere jo dard hum dum
meharbaani be asar si ho gaii hai

kyon na mujh ko samajh paate sahajta se
akaldaani be asar si ho gaii hai

lipat jaauN dard se main jakham kha looN
dard-daani be asar si ho gaii hai

aarzoo thi do kadam mil ke chalenge
arazdaani be asar si ho gaii hai

tum n "rashmi" ko kabhi pahchhaan paaye
har viyaani be asar si ho gaii hai

verii gud-RS
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aqsh
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2013, 10:26:36 PM »
bahut bahut khoob...
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2013, 10:29:30 PM »
Bahut Khoob Likha Apne.
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nashwani
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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2013, 12:29:12 AM »
zindgaani be asar si ho gaii hai
har kahaani be asar si ho gaii hai

har ghadDi kayon aajmaate o sakha tum
aajmaanii be asar si ho gaii hai

baantne chaahe tere jo dard hum dum
meharbaani be asar si ho gaii hai

kyon na mujh ko samajh paate sahajta se
akaldaani be asar si ho gaii hai

lipat jaauN dard se main jakham kha looN
dard-daani be asar si ho gaii hai

aarzoo thi do kadam mil ke chalenge
arazdaani be asar si ho gaii hai

tum n "rashmi" ko kabhi pahchhaan paaye
har viyaani be asar si ho gaii hai

V. Nice rashmi jee..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2013, 12:51:08 AM »
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rashmisangeeta
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2013, 02:15:11 AM »

verii gud-RS

ji behad shukarguzar hoon aapne saath diya
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2013, 02:16:37 AM »
bahut bahut khoob...
ji shukriya aqsh ji aise hi housle badate rahein
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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2013, 02:23:56 AM »
kaafi interesting sa tareeka laga aapka mujhe khaas taur se shabdoN ka chayan, kuch alag hi andaaz ka tha, ahchi kosish rahi, umeed karta hun aapki kalam se aur padhne ko milegaa...!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2013, 02:50:34 AM »
zindgaani be asar si ho gaii hai
har kahaani be asar si ho gaii hai

har ghadDi kayon aajmaate o sakha tum
aajmaanii be asar si ho gaii hai

baantne chaahe tere jo dard hum dum
meharbaani be asar si ho gaii hai

kyon na mujh ko samajh paate sahajta se
akaldaani be asar si ho gaii hai

lipat jaauN dard se main jakham kha looN
dard-daani be asar si ho gaii hai

aarzoo thi do kadam mil ke chalenge
arazdaani be asar si ho gaii hai

tum n "rashmi" ko kabhi pahchhaan paaye
har viyaani be asar si ho gaii hai
Beutiful lines
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«Reply #10 on: May 22, 2013, 12:59:37 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2013, 01:01:38 PM »
bohut khub rashmi ji very  nice keep writing and welcome
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«Reply #12 on: May 22, 2013, 05:56:08 PM »
Bahut Khoob Likha Apne.
shukriya ravindr ji bahut khushi hui aap ne humein honsla diya
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«Reply #13 on: May 23, 2013, 06:26:12 PM »
V. Nice rashmi jee..happy9
[/quote ji shukriya aapka tah-e-dil se aap ne humeiN is duniya mein kaboola ye humare liye gourab ki baat hai
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2013, 04:23:45 PM »
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shukriya sudhir ji aise hi nimat badate rahein
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