be asar mohabat

by rashmisangeeta on May 21, 2013, 07:49:07 PM
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rashmisangeeta
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«Reply #15 on: May 26, 2013, 06:08:25 PM »
kaafi interesting sa tareeka laga aapka mujhe khaas taur se shabdoN ka chayan, kuch alag hi andaaz ka tha, ahchi kosish rahi, umeed karta hun aapki kalam se aur padhne ko milegaa...!!
lucky boy happy to see here i will try to come here regularly.thanks for your kind inspiration
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«Reply #16 on: May 26, 2013, 06:11:29 PM »
thoda repetitive sa laga mujhe par, still ek ahchi kosish pe daad qubool farmaayeN...!! bazm ko roshan karti raheN...!!
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rashmisangeeta
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«Reply #17 on: June 01, 2013, 01:05:56 AM »
 
kaafi interesting sa tareeka laga aapka mujhe khaas taur se shabdoN ka chayan, kuch alag hi andaaz ka tha, ahchi kosish rahi, umeed karta hun aapki kalam se aur padhne ko milegaa...!!
shukriya taish ap ne hameshaN ki tarah sport kiya meri rachana ko pasand kiya asha hai aise hi saath nibhate rahoge khush raho lucky boy  happy3
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rashmisangeeta
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«Reply #18 on: June 02, 2013, 05:17:45 PM »
Beutiful lines
rajan kondal ji vehad shukriya aapka
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soudagar
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«Reply #19 on: June 02, 2013, 05:40:26 PM »
wah wah wah bahut umda creation dheron daad aur mubarakbaad

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rashmisangeeta
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«Reply #20 on: June 07, 2013, 12:10:20 AM »
wah wah wah bahut umda creation dheron daad aur mubarakbaad

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shukriya    soudagar ji aapki duaaein humare sir pe bani rahein yahi chahte hain ji apna saneh banaaye rakheiN
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