be asar mohabat

by rashmisangeeta on May 21, 2013, 07:49:07 PM

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rashmisangeeta

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«Reply #15 on: May 26, 2013, 06:08:25 PM »

Quote from: Taish on May 22, 2013, 02:23:56 AM

kaafi interesting sa tareeka laga aapka mujhe khaas taur se shabdoN ka chayan, kuch alag hi andaaz ka tha, ahchi kosish rahi, umeed karta hun aapki kalam se aur padhne ko milegaa...!!

lucky boy happy to see here i will try to come here regularly.thanks for your kind inspiration


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Re: be asar mohabat

«Reply #16 on: May 26, 2013, 06:11:29 PM »

thoda repetitive sa laga mujhe par, still ek ahchi kosish pe daad qubool farmaayeN...!! bazm ko roshan karti raheN...!!


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rashmisangeeta

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Re: be asar mohabat

«Reply #17 on: June 01, 2013, 01:05:56 AM »

Quote from: Taish on May 22, 2013, 02:23:56 AM

kaafi interesting sa tareeka laga aapka mujhe khaas taur se shabdoN ka chayan, kuch alag hi andaaz ka tha, ahchi kosish rahi, umeed karta hun aapki kalam se aur padhne ko milegaa...!!

shukriya taish ap ne hameshaN ki tarah sport kiya meri rachana ko pasand kiya asha hai aise hi saath nibhate rahoge khush raho lucky boy happy3