Bebasi__________ {Angel}:Shayri-E-Dard

angel4u

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Bahut dino baad Kucch Likh Rahi hoon...

Ek Ped Hamein Raste Mein Mila Tha Muskurata, Chehekta Hua,
Thi Ek Chidiya Ki Jo Dekhti Thi Apna Bachha Khilkhilata Hua,

Wo Mere Khwaabon Ka Gharonda Bas Pattharon Se Bhar Gaya Kyon,
Mere Ashqon Ka Qaafla Ab Hai Inhi Uljhano Mein Ghira Hua,

Gamzada Kyon Lag Rahi Hai Ye Shaam Bhi Dhalte Dhalte,
Chhalka Raha Hia Chaand Bhi Apni Bebasi Yun Hansta Hua,

Socha Tha Na Fizaa Hogi Samjhaute Ki Na Hogi Koi Bebasi,
Kyon Har Zarra Phir Laga Hamein Tadapta, Bilakhta Hua,

Behaali Ka Sama Baandhte Hue Kab Tak Banaye Tasveer-e-Zindagi,
Isi Kashmkash Mein Har Pal Apni Zindagi Se Samjhota Hua,

Kuch Haadson Se Saja Hai Mere Dard Ka Ye Gulaabi Aanchal,
Lage Ashqonse Bhara Haath Mera Mehendi Se Sajta Hua,

Hai Mere Humdard Kayi Jo Mere Haalaat Pe Duwaon Ke Phool Bikherte,
Ek Kaanta Maine Dekha Us "SANAM" Ke Haath Mein Muskurata Hua...


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javedarshad

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2009, 03:06:58 PM »

goodone

mubarak ho aap aagayee mahfil mein
yahan sab ghabra ghabra ker duain ker rahe they

dad qubool ho

acha laga padh ker

javed


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_Vicky_

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2009, 04:16:36 PM »

Wow Angel.. Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai Dear.. Behad Khubsoorat Alfaazon se Saja Kalaam Hai aapka.. Dard Ko Bakoobi Bayan Kiya hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooob..

Daad Kubool karen..

**~** Mann **~**


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deepika_divya

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2009, 04:19:50 PM »

Waah waah Kyaa baat hai aate hi chaa gai.. super dupar... and kamaal ka likha hai...

Shona thoda aaram kar le.. abhi lauti hai hosptial se..


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Talat

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2009, 08:58:58 PM »

Bohot dard hai is main....khaas kar last line....Bohot achcha likha hai Sweetie....!!


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angel4u

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2009, 02:39:38 AM »

Quote from: javedarshad on July 30, 2009, 03:06:58 PM

goodone

mubarak ho aap aagayee mahfil mein
yahan sab ghabra ghabra ker duain ker rahe they

dad qubool ho

acha laga padh ker

javed

Well, duwaon ki wajahse hi wapas aayi hoon Usual Smile

thank you so much for appreciating..


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angel4u

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2009, 02:40:31 AM »

Quote from: Mann on July 30, 2009, 04:16:36 PM

Wow Angel.. Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai Dear.. Behad Khubsoorat Alfaazon se Saja Kalaam Hai aapka.. Dard Ko Bakoobi Bayan Kiya hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooob..

Daad Kubool karen..

**~** Mann **~**

Thank you so much Vicky.. hamesha daad hi dete ho, kabhi choclate bhi to diya karo...

just kidding.

thank you so much dear friend Usual Smile


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angel4u

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2009, 02:41:39 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on July 30, 2009, 04:19:50 PM

Waah waah Kyaa baat hai aate hi chaa gai.. super dupar... and kamaal ka likha hai...

Shona thoda aaram kar le.. abhi lauti hai hosptial se..

Haan aaram karte karet hi likha tha aadha to ye... tongue3

Thanks for tarif tongue3


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angel4u

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #8 on: July 31, 2009, 02:42:48 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on July 30, 2009, 08:58:58 PM

Bohot dard hai is main....khaas kar last line....Bohot achcha likha hai Sweetie....!!

Thank you so much Talat.. Thanks for appreciation alwys Usual Smile


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Alam Qazi

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2009, 04:54:58 AM »

Ghamzadaa Kyo'n Lag Rahi Hai, Ye Shaam Bhi Dhalte Dhalte
Chhalka Rahaa Hai Chand Bhi, Apni Bebasi Yoo'n Hansta Hua....

Bahot Hi Khubsurat Line Likhi Hai Aapne.....Miss Angel


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madhuwesh

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #10 on: July 31, 2009, 06:10:24 AM »

Wah Angel ji ,really touching,very nice and wonderful creation,beautiful lies by Alam ji. icon_thumleft

:clapping:excellent. love4


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salil2002

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #11 on: July 31, 2009, 07:11:47 AM »

lovely poem huzena its really nice to see coming more and more from u....welcome again dear we missed u a lot hope now u r allright


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angel4u

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2009, 02:46:52 AM »

Quote from: Alam Qazi on July 31, 2009, 04:54:58 AM

Ghamzadaa Kyo'n Lag Rahi Hai, Ye Shaam Bhi Dhalte Dhalte
Chhalka Rahaa Hai Chand Bhi, Apni Bebasi Yoo'n Hansta Hua....

Bahot Hi Khubsurat Line Likhi Hai Aapne.....Miss Angel

Bahut shukriya Alam Qazi Ji...


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angel4u

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #13 on: August 01, 2009, 02:47:25 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 31, 2009, 06:10:24 AM

Wah Angel ji ,really touching,very nice and wonderful creation,beautiful lies by Alam ji. icon_thumleft

:clapping:excellent. love4


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angel4u

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Re: Bebasi__________ {Angel}

«Reply #14 on: August 01, 2009, 02:48:05 AM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on July 31, 2009, 07:11:47 AM

lovely poem huzena its really nice to see coming more and more from u....welcome again dear we missed u a lot hope now u r allright

Well, getting alright gradually.. Usual Smile

Thanks for the appreciation Salil..


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