Bebasi...

by pinky on February 05, 2007, 07:28:51 PM
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Tanhayi se chal kar Tanhayi mein kho jaate hain,
Na jaane kyun mere kadam itne majbur ho jaate hain..

Bhula kar usse phir ussi ko yaar karte hain,
Mere Zakhm bhi jaise uske mohtaaj ho jaate hain..

Sookh kar kayi baar phir behne lagte hain,
Ye Aansu bhi jaise uske deedar ko taras jaate hain..

Khamosh ho kar bhi zuban par chale aate hain,
Ye lafz bhi jaise ussi se kuch kehna chahte hain..

Dard ko aksar baandha hai maine muskurahat mein,
Shayad Bebas ho kar hi ye Ehsaas
Mere naghmon mein utar jaate hain..!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2007, 07:38:20 PM »
wow  Awesome  Pinky.......  superbssssssssssssss
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angel4u
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2007, 08:57:57 PM »
bahut ache pinky.............. wonderful.......... Usual Smile
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2007, 07:54:42 AM »
very beautiful....keep it up !!!
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paani
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2007, 09:13:06 AM »
superb pinki ji....
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2007, 09:37:52 AM »
bahut ache pinky. . .

bebasi. . . .

saans lena bhi saza lagta hai
ab to marna bhi khata lagta hai
itna bebas kiya hai sannate ne
koi bole to bura lagta hai

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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2007, 11:28:01 AM »
Thanx..
Waheed.
Angel.
Jeet
Paani
Samnoj..

Samnoj aapne bahut pyari lines share ki hain thanx!!
Usual Smile
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pinky
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2007, 12:17:59 PM »
Badal jaaye kab kisi baat par,
Ek Nazar hi to hai..
Gham Tanhayi Aansu Judai,
Ek Bebasi hi to hai..
Kaun chahta hai inke saath rehna,
Ek Majburi hi to hai..
Toot Hi jaata hai kisi bahaane se ek din,
Ek Chhota sa Dil hi to hai..
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Shikha12
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«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2007, 03:44:52 AM »
Bahut khoob kalaam likhe hai Pinky...
They are just Awesome...

Very nice lines Samnoj... Thanks for sharing..
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Shikha12
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«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2007, 03:52:28 AM »
Bebass sii humey lagtii hai saansein...
Majboor ho gaya hai dil dhadakney ko...
Ek sunharaa sapna jo aankon se chutta,
Umr guzar gayii phir usey pakadney ko....
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2007, 07:19:37 AM »
bahut khoob pinku dear...mateen n shikha jiji ..excellent

bebas ho gaye hain iss duniya se ,
har ek ka saath ab gavara nahi lagta,
maut se bhi ab nafraf si hogayi hai,
uss ne bhi saath humara na diya
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pinky
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«Reply #11 on: February 15, 2007, 07:50:17 PM »
Thanx shikha Salma and Majid..
Aur bahut khoob replies di aap sab ne..

Meri udasi ka sabab yun pooch raha tha,
Jaise mujhe hasane aaya tha wo..
Chedd gaya phir wo mere zakhmo ko,
Jaise meri bebasi mujhko yaad dilane aaya tha wo..
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2007, 06:16:14 AM »
bohot achhe sabhi log...........................



Ajeeb Shaam khadi hai Kahin Se Aa jao
Bari Uddas Ghari Hai Kahin Se Aa jao
 
Kissi Se Milna Aur Miltay hi Phir Bichar Jana
Saza Yeh Itni Bari Hai Kahin Se Aa jao

Bohat Katee Hain mere Dost Hijer Ke Mosam
Judaii Bol Pari Hai Kahin Se Aa jao

Zamana Jiss Ko Samajhta Hai Motiyon ki Chamak
Wo Aasoon Ki Ladi Hai Kahin Se Aa jaoo....... .......






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paani
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«Reply #13 on: February 16, 2007, 11:20:37 AM »
VERY NICE PINKY...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #14 on: February 16, 2007, 03:08:52 PM »
bahot  khoob Pinky.........  Shikha Aunty.... tongue3   Sam......Tanha Dil........ Majid  Bhai........  lage raho tongue3
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