Bechain lamha...

by brokenbyluv on December 29, 2009, 04:21:11 PM
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Itna bechain lamha pehle kabhi na aya tha,
iss tarah pehle kabhi na khud ko kisi ki mhbt mein gawaya tha..

ye ajab si kashmkash jo hai dil mein ,
pehle kabhi na aesi soch mein dil ko jalaya tha..

ek shakhs ki nigaho se itna majbur ho jayega ye dil,
iss kadar pehle kabhi na koi iss dil ka ho paya tha..

aaj tanha baith k yahi soch k dil rota hai..
k yahi hai vo jise maine har lamha apni duao mein basaya tha......
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2009, 05:36:11 PM »
GUD ONE B.B.L Applause Applause
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2009, 05:45:43 PM »
thanx khamosh ji..
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2009, 05:48:16 PM »
Bahut Khoob Geet Ji
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2009, 05:52:12 PM »
thnx alot rajesh ji..
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2009, 06:42:45 PM »
Dard ko shabdo ka jama pehnana tou koi aap se seekhe.....
Bahut Khubsoorat hai aapka ye nagma Geet-di..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause

Nav varsh ki khushi mai ye bechainy kaisee
Khilte rango mai ye maayusee chhayi kaisee


Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 29, 2009, 04:21:11 PM
Itna bechain lamha pehle kabhi na aya tha,
iss tarah pehle kabhi na khud ko kisi ki mhbt mein gawaya tha..

ye ajab si kashmkash jo hai dil mein ,
pehle kabhi na aesi soch mein dil ko jalaya tha..

ek shakhs ki nigaho se itna majbur ho jayega ye dil,
iss kadar pehle kabhi na koi iss dil ka ho paya tha..

aaj tanha baith k yahi soch k dil rota hai..
k yahi hai vo jise maine har lamha apni duao mein basaya tha......
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2009, 06:57:35 PM »
thanx alot koyal sweetu...naye saal mein ho sake tou tu use merre liye maang lena plzz....
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2009, 08:41:18 PM »
Mindblowing creation Geet ji,lovely lines by Koyal ji.bahut khoob likha aap dono ne. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2009, 08:53:34 PM »
thnx madhu ji...
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2009, 06:32:27 AM »
Thanks a lot Geet-di...for your encouragement....

Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 29, 2009, 06:57:35 PM
thanx alot koyal sweetu...naye saal mein ho sake tou tu use merre liye maang lena plzz....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: December 30, 2009, 06:33:45 AM »
Thanks a lot Madhu-di.......

Quote from: madhuwesh on December 29, 2009, 08:41:18 PM
Mindblowing creation Geet ji,lovely lines by Koyal ji.bahut khoob likha aap dono ne. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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riyaz106
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«Reply #11 on: December 30, 2009, 06:47:02 AM »
Bahut achhi lines hai Geet Ji aapki. Koyal Ji ki poetry  bhi kamaal ki hai fauran jawab hazir kar deti hain.
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cara
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«Reply #12 on: December 30, 2009, 06:59:51 AM »
KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI...

KYUN HAR LAMHA AAJKAL BECHAIN SA RAHETA HAI
KYUN HAR WAQAT US SHAKS KI YAAD ME DOOBA SA RAHETA HAI
KYA YEH WAHI HAI JISKE LIYE MERA  DIL TARASTA RAHETA HAI
DIN BAR DIMAAG AUR DIL KE BEECH AJAB KASHMKASH SA RAHETA HAI...
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #13 on: December 30, 2009, 07:09:44 AM »
very nice all of u....
really its awesome. Thumbs UP
 Clapping Smiley  Applause
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2009, 07:25:04 AM »
Great lines Cara ji,bahut khoob.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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