Beemar ka nikalta raha dum tamam raat

by aarzoomehek on June 28, 2009, 10:07:09 PM
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Teri Haseen yaad ki shabnam tamam raat
Dil ki zameeN ko kartee rahee num tamam raat

Karwat badal badal ke guzara harek pal
Hamraah tha hamre tira gham tamam raat

Hichki kisee kee yaad ki bhee maut ki bhee thee
Beemar ka nikalta raha dum tamam raat

Bheege see chaNdnee ne laga dee thee ek aag
Us aag meN jhulaste rahe hum tamam raat

Har lamha izteraab baRhata chala gaya
RungeeniyaaN bikher ke mausam tamam raat

Tanha hameN nah choRa tire ishq ne kabhi
Bahla raha tha dil ko tira gham tamam raat

Ai Aarzoo umeed ki lau bhi ajeeb hai
Ik pal ko bhee huwee nah woh madhham tamam raat
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2009, 10:16:59 PM »
Teri Haseen yaad ki shabnam tamam raat
Dil ki zameeN ko kartee rahee num tamam raat

Karwat badal badal ke guzara harek pal
Hamraah tha hamre tira gham tamam raat

Hichki kisee kee yaad ki bhee maut ki bhee thee
Beemar ka nikalta raha dum tamam raat

Bheege see chaNdnee ne laga dee thee ek aag
Us aag meN jhulaste rahe hum tamam raat

Har lamha izteraab baRhata chala gaya
RungeeniyaaN bikher ke mausam tamam raat

Tanha hameN nah choRa tire ishq ne kabhi
Bahla raha tha dil ko tira gham tamam raat

Ai Aarzoo umeed ki lau bhi ajeeb hai
Ik pal ko bhee huwee nah woh madhham tamam raat

wahhhhhhh aarzoo nice to see u here and once again
i'll get to read ur poemsss.
this is one of ur best poem
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2009, 10:20:53 PM »
 Applause Applause
behad behad umda bahoot khoob aarzu..
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2009, 10:25:20 PM »
Wah wah Arzoo ji,very nice and beautiful creation, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2009, 10:27:23 PM »
Bahut khoob, Arzoo Ji! Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 10:33:00 PM »
wahhhhhhh aarzoo nice to see u here and once again
i'll get to read ur poemsss.
this is one of ur best poem

Niraaaa thanks for reminding this place...thanks for being with me every step of my shayri safar..bless you.
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2009, 10:33:55 PM »
Applause Applause
behad behad umda bahoot khoob aarzu..

Tahe dil se mamnoon hun ke aapko meri adna si kaavish pasand aai hai.
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2009, 10:34:58 PM »
Wah wah Arzoo ji,very nice and beautiful creation, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks for liking it..bless you.
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2009, 10:51:53 PM »
Bohot umda kalaam hai, or kya khoob rawaani hai.
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2009, 08:53:04 AM »
shukriya parhne ke liye.
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«Reply #10 on: July 02, 2009, 10:38:44 AM »
Wah wah arzu ji...
kya ashaar pesh kiye hain aapne... Clapping Smiley
Mazaa aagaya..
Keep up the gud work... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: July 02, 2009, 03:08:43 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hi Aarzoo Mehak ji.. Lajawab Alfaazon se Saji Rachna Pesh ki Hai aaapne.. Bahut Bahut khooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #12 on: July 02, 2009, 03:16:47 PM »
Aarzoo

Excellent ! Superb ! Applause Applause Applause

Nice to see you back Winking Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 02, 2009, 05:14:28 PM »
Bahut Bahut bahut Khoob Aarzoo..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: December 01, 2014, 01:49:56 PM »
Kya hi achchi radeef hai mahutrama dil uchal kar halaq me aa gaya ...wah kahen ke aah allah allah kya qayamat qez zameen talashi hai aur kya nibhaya hai ...beemaar ka nikalta raha dam tamam raat ....aapse hazraat is bazm me hain magar afsoos ke aapke kalam nahi aate kya wajh hai ....
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