beeta hua pal

by aru12 on January 22, 2014, 06:39:51 PM
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 Kai baar hota hai
Kee samay ke raaste mein chalte chalte,
Kuch purani yaadein chip jaati hain,
Waqt kee shaakh se nazar bacha ke,
Lamho ke patte ban ke gir jaati hain,
Ya kabhi dhool banke jam jaati hain tasveeron pe,
Kuch banke hawa fizaon mein ghul jaati
hai...
Aur fir kabhi kisi din
Jab hum tehlane nikalte hain,
To achanak milte hain sookhe hue patte Jinme dubke hue khajane phool bankar
bahar nikalte hain
Ya dhool banke khushboo chaa jaati hai
aasman mein
Aur hum jee aate hain ek
Bahut purana Beeta hua pal.....
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2014, 09:14:46 PM »
waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2014, 09:41:16 PM »
kya baat hai... bahut khooooooob aruji... dheron daaaaaaad...
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2014, 03:22:17 AM »
Kai baar hota hai
Kee samay ke raaste mein chalte chalte,
Kuch purani yaadein chip jaati hain,
Waqt kee shaakh se nazar bacha ke,
Lamho ke patte ban ke gir jaati hain,
Ya kabhi dhool banke jam jaati hain tasveeron pe,
Kuch banke hawa fizaon mein ghul jaati
hai...
Aur fir kabhi kisi din
Jab hum tehlane nikalte hain,
To achanak milte hain sookhe hue patte Jinme dubke hue khajane phool bankar
bahar nikalte hain
Ya dhool banke khushboo chaa jaati hai
aasman mein
Aur hum jee aate hain ek
Bahut purana Beeta hua pal.....


So nice.
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2014, 01:13:23 PM »
bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2014, 01:14:35 PM »
nice lines aru ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2014, 01:57:29 PM »
very nice
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«Reply #7 on: February 01, 2014, 02:15:36 AM »
thanks sainy jee...
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«Reply #8 on: February 14, 2014, 08:36:07 PM »
thanx ashq jee..........
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