Beete lamho ka...........(tamanna)

by tamanna.pt on September 06, 2010, 03:08:38 PM
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    Hello doston pichhle kafi waqt se kuch masroof chal rahi thi,aaj jakar kuch faarig hui hoon to kuch likhne ka man kiya to 2-4lines likh kar mamuli si koshish kar rahi hoon,kaisi lagi plz bataiyega.

          
                        Beete lamhon ka fir se aadaab mila,
                        Kal kitabon se sukha gulaab mila.

                        Umad aaye chand lamho me wahi manzar,
                        Dhalti raaton ko jaise khwaab mila.

                        Kuch aur teri yaad ab karne nahi deti,
                        Ye Kaam mujhe itna kharaab mila.

                        Wajah tak berukhi ki batata nahi koi,
                        Har ek yahan aisa nawaab mila.
                
                        Hazaar sitam seh kar bhi tera hi raha,
                        Ye dil mera kuch mujhe nayaab mila.


                          ----Tamanna---


                  

                

                


                    
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2010, 03:13:05 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut Khoob Tamannaji..

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2010, 03:46:03 PM »
mind blowing post tamanna ji...har sher feelings se bharpoorr.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2010, 04:44:39 PM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI     TAMANNA.PT JI.....

BEETE LAMHO KI YAAD DE GAYE HO
KYA BHUL HUI JO RUTH GAYE HO
AESI BHI KYA HUI MUJHSE KHATA
JO AAP DARD JUDAI KA DE GAYE HO......
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2010, 10:18:31 PM »
Tamanna Jee Aadaab!

kafi achchi kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne .....
Puri kalaam achchi rahi daad kabool kijiye...
         


Quote from: tamanna.pt on September 06, 2010, 03:08:38 PM
    Hello doston pichhle kafi waqt se kuch masroof chal rahi thi,aaj jakar kuch faarig hui hoon to kuch likhne ka man kiya to 2-4lines likh kar mamuli si koshish kar rahi hoon,kaisi lagi plz bataiyega.

           
                        Beete lamhon ka fir se aadaab mila,
                        Kal kitabon se sukha gulaab mila.

Kia baat hai, Bahut Umdaa raha matla ... Khubsurat shayari ki hai aapne Daad....         


                        Umad aaye chand lamho me wahi manzar,
                        Dhalti raaton ko jaise khwaab mila.

Sher ka khayaal achcah raha.... Daad Aur bhi kayiN suratOn meiN bayaaN kiya jaa sakta tha...           
Jise waqt ne humse bhoola diya tha kabhi
Meri aankho ko phir wohi khawaab mila



                        Kuch aur teri yaad ab karne nahi deti,
                        Ye Kaam mujhe itna kharaab mila.

Usual Smile...... Usual Smile kia kahen is per ek muskurahat aa rahi hai bus... Usual Smile Par sher kafi gehra hai, dard e judai ko bayaaN karta... Nice one         


                        Wajah tak berukhi ki batata nahi koi,
                        Har ek yahan aisa nawaab mila.
               
Kia baat hai bahut achcah tanz kiya hai aapne... Daad:)         


                        Hazaar sitam seh kar bhi tera hi raha,
                        Ye dil mera kuch mujhe nayaab mila.
Bahut khoob daad.... Usual Smile         


                          ----Tamanna---


                   

                 

                 


                   

Kafi Umdaa peshkash rahi aapki daad hazir hai kabool kijiye.....

Likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2010, 11:41:45 PM »
Wah bohat bohat khoobsurat peshkash........aap zyda se zyda waqt farigh raha kare taki hame aise khoobsurat kalam naseeb ho.

Yeh sher pasandeeda raha..........daad kabool kare.

Kuch aur teri yaad ab karne nahi deti,
Ye Kaam mujhe itna kharaab mila.
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2010, 01:35:56 PM »
bahut bahut khoobsurat shabdon me dil ke ehsaason ko bayaan kiya hain aapne Tamanna ji... bahut hi pyaari ghazal hai ye aapki.. bahut khoob...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2010, 01:57:16 PM »

   Bahur bahut shukriya Khwaish ji aapne humesha hi mera hausla badhaya hai,shukriya.
Quote from: khwaish on September 06, 2010, 03:13:05 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut Khoob Tamannaji..

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2010, 01:58:28 PM »

 Thank u so much Anu ji,bahut achha laga aapne pasand farmaya.
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 06, 2010, 03:46:03 PM
mind blowing post tamanna ji...har sher feelings se bharpoorr.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2010, 01:59:27 PM »

Thank u Cara ji, or aapne bhi bahut pyara likha hai.
Quote from: cara on September 06, 2010, 04:44:39 PM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI     TAMANNA.PT JI.....

BEETE LAMHO KI YAAD DE GAYE HO
KYA BHUL HUI JO RUTH GAYE HO
AESI BHI KYA HUI MUJHSE KHATA
JO AAP DARD JUDAI KA DE GAYE HO......
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2010, 02:04:37 PM »
  Aadab! Parwaaz ji, or bahut khushi hui aapko pasand aaya,waise aap to daad bhi postmartam style me dete hai  Giggle, maza aaya hume,or sahi me second sher mujhe aapka jyada pasand aaya par saamne saamne chori to galat hoga na. Giggle Apna saath yun hi banay rakhein. 
Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 06, 2010, 10:18:31 PM
Tamanna Jee Aadaab!

kafi achchi kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne .....
Puri kalaam achchi rahi daad kabool kijiye...
         


Kafi Umdaa peshkash rahi aapki daad hazir hai kabool kijiye.....

Likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2010, 02:07:51 PM »

 Aapko pasand aaya matlab kuch thik thak likh diya maine is baar or ek baar fir meri ungliya bach gayi kalam hone se. Usual Smile Kalaam ko pasand farmane k liy behad shukrguzaar hoon.
Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on September 06, 2010, 11:41:45 PM
Wah bohat bohat khoobsurat peshkash........aap zyda se zyda waqt farigh raha kare taki hame aise khoobsurat kalam naseeb ho.

Yeh sher pasandeeda raha..........daad kabool kare.

Kuch aur teri yaad ab karne nahi deti,
Ye Kaam mujhe itna kharaab mila.
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2010, 02:08:51 PM »

 Thank u so much Kapil ji,aapne humesha hi mera saatn diya hai thank u.
Quote from: klaskar on September 07, 2010, 01:35:56 PM
bahut bahut khoobsurat shabdon me dil ke ehsaason ko bayaan kiya hain aapne Tamanna ji... bahut hi pyaari ghazal hai ye aapki.. bahut khoob...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2011, 04:42:18 AM »
Quote from: tamanna.pt on September 06, 2010, 03:08:38 PM
   

           
                        Beete lamhon ka fir se aadaab mila,
                        Kal kitabon se sukha gulaab mila.

                        Umad aaye chand lamho me wahi manzar,
                        Dhalti raaton ko jaise khwaab mila.

                        Kuch aur teri yaad ab karne nahi deti,
                        Ye Kaam mujhe itna kharaab mila.

                        Wajah tak berukhi ki batata nahi koi,
                        Har ek yahan aisa nawaab mila.
               
                        Hazaar sitam seh kar bhi tera hi raha,
                        Ye dil mera kuch mujhe nayaab mila.


                          ----Tamanna---


                   

                 

                 


                   

Very Impressive ... Very Touching ...... Tamanna Ji !

Good Expression ... dil se daad hazir hai ... !

aise hi aate rahe aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... !

khush rahen ...!
duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2011, 04:56:36 AM »
wah tamnnaji... kya kamal ki bat kahi hai...

bahut bahut daad dil se....

 Applause Applause
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