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Beete lamho ka...........(tamanna)

by tamanna.pt on September 06, 2010, 03:08:38 PM

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«Reply #15 on: February 01, 2011, 12:26:48 PM »

Kalaam ko pasand farmaane ka bahut-bahut shukriya Naresh ji.

Quote from: Anshumali on January 24, 2011, 04:42:18 AM

Very Impressive ... Very Touching ...... Tamanna Ji !

Good Expression ... dil se daad hazir hai ... !

aise hi aate rahe aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... !

khush rahen ...!
duaaon ke saath ... !


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Re: Beete lamho ka...........(tamanna)

«Reply #16 on: February 01, 2011, 12:27:58 PM »

Shukriya Manjum ji, khushi hui k aapko pasand aaya.

Quote from: manjum on January 24, 2011, 04:56:36 AM

wah tamnnaji... kya kamal ki bat kahi hai...

bahut bahut daad dil se....

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«Reply #17 on: February 02, 2011, 10:34:56 AM »

Kya Baat Hai Bohat Khoob Tamanna Ji


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Re: Beete lamho ka...........(tamanna)

«Reply #18 on: February 02, 2011, 10:58:33 AM »

wah tamanna ji ....bahoot khoob likha aapne..daad kabool karen


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«Reply #19 on: February 11, 2011, 03:44:32 PM »

Bahut bahut shukriya HUMDUM ji ,achha laga aapne pasand farmaaya.

Quote from: HUM_DUM on February 02, 2011, 10:34:56 AM

Kya Baat Hai Bohat Khoob Tamanna Ji


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Re: Beete lamho ka...........(tamanna)

«Reply #20 on: February 11, 2011, 03:46:32 PM »

Kalaam ko pasand karne ka bahut-bahut shukriya Bekarar ji.

Quote from: bekarar on February 02, 2011, 10:58:33 AM

wah tamanna ji ....bahoot khoob likha aapne..daad kabool karen


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Re: Beete lamho ka...........(tamanna)

«Reply #21 on: February 11, 2011, 06:06:25 PM »

Quote from: tamanna.pt on September 06, 2010, 03:08:38 PM

Hello doston pichhle kafi waqt se kuch masroof chal rahi thi,aaj jakar kuch faarig hui hoon to kuch likhne ka man kiya to 2-4lines likh kar mamuli si koshish kar rahi hoon,kaisi lagi plz bataiyega.

Beete lamhon ka fir se aadaab mila,
Kal kitabon se sukha gulaab mila.

Umad aaye chand lamho me wahi manzar,
Dhalti raaton ko jaise khwaab mila.

Kuch aur teri yaad ab karne nahi deti,
Ye Kaam mujhe itna kharaab mila.

Wajah tak berukhi ki batata nahi koi,
Har ek yahan aisa nawaab mila.

Hazaar sitam seh kar bhi tera hi raha,
Ye dil mera kuch mujhe nayaab mila.

----Tamanna---

BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB TAMANNA JI