beete palo ki nishaaniyaan

by ranjana on July 21, 2006, 08:14:31 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 22, 2006, 05:25:29 AM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
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Jaate jaate mang li usne sabhi nishaniyaan apni
Maut deni thee yun mujhe toh kishto mein toh  di hoti

Thee khabar kya ek din yeh bhi hoga
Hamne toh apni saanse tak unke naam thee kar di

Badal gaye who hawao,n ki rukh ki tarah
Kuch toh apne jaane ki khabar hamko di hoti

Mil jaati hame panaah unki bahaon mein agar
Toh yeh zindagi yun na mushkil hui hoti

Thaa who bebasi ka alam jab hum  juda hue
Kash us pal mein yeh dard ki dastaan na hui hoti

Maangana thaa toh maang lete hamse who hamari jaan bhi
Par yun apne beete palo ki nishaaniyaan toh na maangi hoti……….







MEIN KAB TAK SAHOON A DIL TERE DARD KO
AB AAZAD KARDE MERE ISS DARD KO

APNE HI WAJOOD KO TOR DALA
KHUD KO US KI JUDAAI MEIN BIKHAIR DALA

MAIN KAISE KAROON MUKAMMAL ANDER KE ISS INSAAN KO
IS QADAR TOOT KE BIKHRA HOON KE

AB TOOT KAR KISI KO CHAHNA NAHEEN
ISLIYE BANA LIYA TERE NISHANYAN KO APNI SASSE



shukriya Naveen ..........bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

na jaane woh hum se kyu juda ho gaye
zinadgi ke pal aur dard bhare ho gaye

na they woh bewafa na they hum bewafa
fir woh pyaar ek pal kyu faana ho gaye

mujhe mujhse hi juda kar diya ek pal mein
hum bhari duniya mein tanah ho gaye

ek baar bhi fir palat ke na dekha unhone
wahi pyaar ke raste kyu ajnabi se ho gaye

ab hum chaha na sakenge kabhi kisi ko is qader
mere dil ke zakham kuch aur gehare ab ho gaye





Tanhayee ka ehsas hone laga hai.
Judai ka gum jo seene mei pada hai.

Dooriyan badhne jo lag rahi hai
Dhadkan dheere-dheere yun jo thum rahi hai.

Is taqleef mei bhi kuch maza hai.
Na jaane kis khata ki yeh saza hai.

Door tumse rehke jeena, julm hoga.
Yeh toh mere jajbhatho ka har din katal hoga.

Is daur se bhi mujhe gujar jaana hoga,
Is dard ko toh apnana hi hoga.
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ranjana
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«Reply #16 on: July 22, 2006, 05:40:15 AM »
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Tanhayee ka ehsas hone laga hai.
Judai ka gum jo seene mei pada hai.

Dooriyan badhne jo lag rahi hai
Dhadkan dheere-dheere yun jo thum rahi hai.

Is taqleef mei bhi kuch maza hai.
Na jaane kis khata ki yeh saza hai.

Door tumse rehke jeena, julm hoga.
Yeh toh mere jajbhatho ka har din katal hoga.

Is daur se bhi mujhe gujar jaana hoga,
Is dard ko toh apnana hi hoga.


bahut khoob NAVEEN ...........


is dard ko koi kab tak sambhale
ab unka mera rasta hi alag hua hai

main khadi hun aaj bhi usi mod per
jahan se raho.n ne hamko juda kiya thaa

meri dil ki awaz kehti hai tu aayega mud ke
meri nazar kahti hai ki tera rasata nihaaru

abhi tak hai ek aas mere dil mein kahi chhipi si
ki kabhi toh mere dil ka dard kuch kum hoga

woh hain apni zid per ki main unku pukaaru
aur mera ishq kehta hai ki unko ab khud hi wapas aana hoga

hain kadam hum dono ke apne apne mukaam per
aakhir kisi ek ko toh apna pyaar ka vaada nibhaana hi hoga
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ranjana
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«Reply #17 on: July 22, 2006, 05:53:34 AM »
shukriya Shahid and Gaurav bahut achacha likha hai aapne....reply break ke baad........... Usual Smile
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indian_groom
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«Reply #18 on: July 22, 2006, 06:39:36 AM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
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bahut khoob NAVEEN ...........


is dard ko koi kab tak sambhale
ab unka mera rasta hi alag hua hai

main khadi hun aaj bhi usi mod per
jahan se raho.n ne hamko juda kiya thaa

meri dil ki awaz kehti hai tu aayega mud ke
meri nazar kahti hai ki tera rasata nihaaru

abhi tak hai ek aas mere dil mein kahi chhipi si
ki kabhi toh mere dil ka dard kuch kum hoga

woh hain apni zid per ki main unku pukaaru
aur mera ishq kehta hai ki unko ab khud hi wapas aana hoga

hain kadam hum dono ke apne apne mukaam per
aakhir kisi ek ko toh apna pyaar ka vaada nibhaana hi hoga




ye kya hua mein bhi likhne laga............. Puzzled !

khub acchi jugal bandi hone lagi hai.....aunty ji.



kisi ek kau nahi dono ko pyar ka wada nibhana hoga
sirf dil ko dharkan nahi sasso ko bhi chalan hoga.

kehte hai na dard ko ishq se ek dor bandhe rehti hai.
jaise wafai apne andar bewafai chupai rehti hai.

kiye the wade hum dono ne mil ke agar
tau fir age badhkar dono ko apne pyar ke wade nibhane hoge

jo dusro se ummed bandh ke pyar karte hai.
wo apne pyar ka imtihan lete hai.

isliye pehle apne aap  dusre ki ummed ko poora karo.
bewafai ka naam na deke apne pyar ko kamjoor karoo

agar hai pyar bhagwan ka naam
tau milege dono jaise milti hai nadiyan samundar ke sath.
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ranjana
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«Reply #19 on: July 22, 2006, 09:06:51 AM »
GOOD NAVEEN .......HAAN BACHE AB TUM MERI SHARAN MEIN AA GAYE HO...... :wink:  :lol:

zindagi ka aqs ek aaeina ki tarah hai
kaun hai bhalla,kaun hai bura is duniya mein
yeh abhi is nadaan dil ko pechaan kahan hai

kai baar socha ki yeh nafrat bhi aakhir kya balla hai
fir dekha toh pyaar hi hai yeh jisne apna rup badala hai

har taraf kyu ho raha hai hamare naam ka charcha
lagta hai fir bhari mehfil mein usne hame kuch kaha hai

kaun bach paaya hai ishq aur dard ke dariya se yahan
yeh toh woh sagar hai jismein dub kar hi koi paar utrara hai

mil jaana humse fir kahi duniya ke in rasato mein kahi
kyuki suna hai ki duniya mein har kone dusare kone se mila hai

sabke dil mein bhara hai ek dard ka payaala
sabne hi is zindagi mein apne apne hisse ka zehar piya hai!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #20 on: July 31, 2006, 03:16:08 AM »
jo jaante hum ki sapane dard bhi de jaate hain
toh hum inko apni palko mein yun na saajate

hasane ki keemat thee yadi dard ki aahe.n'
toh hun zindagi bhar na muskaraate

dub jaayenge mere geet bebasi ki dhun mein
toh hum zindagi ko yun na gungunaate

yadi mile phoolo ke saath kaante bhi
toh jeevan ki bagiyaa yun na khilaate

marna thaa hamne yun hi til til karke
toh is zindagi ko jeene ka natak na rachaate
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indian_groom
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«Reply #21 on: July 31, 2006, 03:42:52 AM »
bahoot khoob ji..........

dard zindagi ka dusra naam hai.
saaso ke liye kabhi kabhi wardan hai ye.

sayad duniya mein sabse bikne wali dawa hai dard
isaq ki bimari ke liye amrit hai dard.
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Shikha12
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«Reply #22 on: July 31, 2006, 03:57:03 AM »
Bahut achha likha hai sabney....Ranju di, Meena ji, Vikas, Gaurav and Naveen....

 =D> =D> =D>
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vikas2210
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«Reply #23 on: July 31, 2006, 05:58:59 AM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"
Bahut achha likha hai sabney....Ranju di, Meena ji, Vikas, Gaurav and Naveen....

 =D> =D> =D>


shukriya sheekha JI

kuch aap bhi likhte.....

wo hal kitne haseen the
beetaye the jo tere sang......
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arunsingh
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«Reply #24 on: July 31, 2006, 05:59:40 AM »
kuch to hai ranjana ji shayad

kuch is tarah se

jakham mushkarne lagae
 aur ek chubhan bhi na ho
dard utahne ke shayad ye naye bahene hai
wo to ek hi rah se pareshan ho uthe
kai safar mai unehe wade ajamane hai
na badlo in bistar ki salwato ko tum
kuki akaho ko pata hai aj rat khawab kase ane hai
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Shikha12
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«Reply #25 on: July 31, 2006, 06:38:00 AM »

Yeh Dard humko jab bhi rula jaata hai...
Kuch pal ke liye humey zindagi bhula jaata hai....

Ansoo humarey galon par aakar ke,
Humarey chehrey sey nakaab hata jaata hai...

Hum chuppana chahtey hai hansi mey jisko,
Dard wohi humarey lafzo mey jhalak jaata hai....

Khwab haseen woh kuch adhoorey adhoorey sey,
Poorey honey se pehley yeh hum ko jaga jaata hai...
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ranjana
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«Reply #26 on: July 31, 2006, 08:04:57 AM »
Quote from: "indian_groom"
bahoot khoob ji..........

dard zindagi ka dusra naam hai.
saaso ke liye kabhi kabhi wardan hai ye.

sayad duniya mein sabse bikne wali dawa hai dard
isaq ki bimari ke liye amrit hai dard.


bahut khoob Naveen ......

apne dard se bahut pyaar hai hamko
yeh  bhi unki tarah hamare saath rehta hai

dawa ban jaata hai yeh mere liye
jab dil ki har dharkan mein naam unka retha hai
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ranjana
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«Reply #27 on: July 31, 2006, 08:17:45 AM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Shikha12"
Bahut achha likha hai sabney....Ranju di, Meena ji, Vikas, Gaurav and Naveen....

 =D> =D> =D>


shukriya sheekha JI

kuch aap bhi likhte.....

wo hal kitne haseen the
beetaye the jo tere sang......


nice one vikas....

apno se juda hone ka gum hum laaye they apni lakeero mein
kaun badal sakata thaa apni is bhataki hui kismat ko !!
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ranjana
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«Reply #28 on: July 31, 2006, 08:27:46 AM »
Quote from: "arunsingh"
kuch to hai ranjana ji shayad

kuch is tarah se

jakham mushkarne lagae
 aur ek chubhan bhi na ho
dard utahne ke shayad ye naye bahene hai
wo to ek hi rah se pareshan ho uthe
kai safar mai unehe wade ajamane hai
na badlo in bistar ki salwato ko tum
kuki akaho ko pata hai aj rat khawab kase ane hai


kya hai yeh shayad ?Arun ji ... Usual Smile  shukriya aapne bahut achcha likha..

sambhal ke aana ki waqt ab zinadgi ke imthaan ka aane wala hai
pighal raha hai mere bheeter ka lava koi tufaan aane wala hai
koi dil ke andhero mein chiraago ko jala ke roshni jaalne wala hai
lo chhor diya hai hamne apne bistar ki salwato ko yun hi
lagta hai ki hamaare dard ke chhaalo ko koi moti ki tarah
apne pyaar se  pass hamaare  aake  chunane wala hai !!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #29 on: July 31, 2006, 08:41:47 AM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"

Yeh Dard humko jab bhi rula jaata hai...
Kuch pal ke liye humey zindagi bhula jaata hai....

Ansoo humarey galon par aakar ke,
Humarey chehrey sey nakaab hata jaata hai...

Hum chuppana chahtey hai hansi mey jisko,
Dard wohi humarey lafzo mey jhalak jaata hai....

Khwab haseen woh kuch adhoorey adhoorey sey,
Poorey honey se pehley yeh hum ko jaga jaata hai...
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its wonderful Shikha dear....bahut hi pyaara likha hai ....


yahi zinadgi hai dost jitna ise suljhaoge utna hi yeh uljhagi
yeh ajab gajab si raha hamari na jaane kab tak yun hi bhatekgi

milenge woh hamse khuda ban kar ,jinse yah dil lag jaayga
rafta rafta yeh sulgata dhuan lagata hai aag ban jaayga

kaun samjhega is dard ko jo tera hai ya mera hai
bas yahi lafazo mein dhal kar ek sakun de jaayega

ek saya ke picche  bhaagte lagata hai yeh jeevan kat jaayega
bas yahi dard ka ehasas lagta hai saath hamaare kabar tak jaayega
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